| "The Sweetest Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: midnightbaby On: July 26, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have just started reading ur story and i'm now hooked. i really enjoy the originality and content of the story. u have a new fan. keep up the good work. can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah that explanes why i couldn't find u on ff.net maybe you should post on adultfanfiction.net that way you won't get baned. anyway loved the chapter kepp it up.
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is most excellent. The part of inutaisho being the reincarnation of naraku was brilliant. I compliment you on your story thus far and hope you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: kag+inu=love On: July 22, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay! remember me? i'm not loged in right now so my name is right =D.anyway great chapter! i'm sorry i didn't review right away,but i'm baby siting my step bro and sis for the next 6 too 7 weeks,so if i don't review right away DON'T GIVE UP ON ME! k? g2g see ya!
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Reviewed By: inufreak831 On: July 21, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
im back from ff.net im one of your loyal followers lol. im still new the mm.org so if there is aything i need to do to make reading and reviewing easier on this site plz tell me. well, im a little confused with all the names and i was wondering if you could create a index like the person name with a small descripton and what they do etc. I loved this update i hope that isao does help kill naraku the damn bastard, i have another question i know i have alot but does souta go to the same school? thats all i hve to say and ask fo now so ja ne
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Reviewed By: CriscoKittie On: July 21, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't wait until you finish this story!!! I love it so much and I'm glad that you e-mailed me so I could finish it! Don't forget me next time!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:18 CDT
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Kawaii. And the plot thickens. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: kendo_girl16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! U'm sorry to hear about the ff.net thing, i've had some bad experience with ff.net...any way, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (Not signed in) On: July 20, 2004 19:41 CDT
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You got kicked off ff.net?!?! Sorry I'm kinda bit slow and I just found out. How could someone do that to you? Who ever it was is a freaking @sshole!! Your story is really good and I can't believe that someone would do that!!! Anyways, I can't wait to find out what happens next. And what will Matoko and Tokaji do to keep Hojo busy? I wonder how the gang (in the future) is gonna succeed in keeping the identity's of Matoko and Tokaji a secret? And how are things going in the past? Anyways keep up the good work and I can't wait to read your next chapter!!! ~Peace!!!!
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Title: Mystic Hanyou
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 18:44 CDT
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Those were good questions at the bottom. Can't wait till they are answered. Keep up the great work. And don't let other's get you down. Later.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:16 CDT
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that was a GREAT chappy!!!!!!! i hope u update really really soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dragon Man 180 here. thanks for telling me where I could find your fics besides FF.net. I can't believe someone complained and got you off the site. Oh well, great chapter, I feel sorry for Inuyasha and Kagome's kids, one 'sit' from Kagome and their whole cover is blown. Knowing you, it will happen when Kagome forgets Inuyasha is there and tell one of her friends to sit down.
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 10:28 CDT
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can you add some sango/miroku fluff in the next chappie=^__^= foxy p.s. i fixed the problim ^__^
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 20, 2004 09:21 CDT
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wow, this story is wild and out of control!! the plot is so deep and twisty now it's almost hard to keep up. please please please update soon? this story is too good to pause lol.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 03:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooo great work and please keep up the great work. Krystal.
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