| "The Sweetest Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 01:43 CDT
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Food?? After these chapters you've been writting i don't think its food you want lol. and as for the guy knock him out right and take him at his own will, you never know it might be funner that way lol j/k. well untill the next chap take care.
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Title: sweet story
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 01:20 CDT
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I just got finished reading the whole thing, it's great! I really liked how you used the costumes as aspringbaord to mention how they balance each other out. A demon & an angel, very clever! I'm as much of a lemon fan as the next girl, but i'm glad you take the time to esatblish a loving relationship first! I have read or am currentlly reading many of your works & have noticed that you are highly devoted to plots & storylines. It's refreshing to read stories of substance & you are among some of my fav. real plot authors! I would sy update soon, but I don't see how you could post any faster! Looking forward to next chap! Well I better go I'm suposed to be finishing my own fic & I suspect if any of my readers saw me reviewing here they would know I was slacking off. Thanks for sharing your fic! smooches smittin kittin
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 15, 2004 19:57 CDT
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and im back, i know i could read all of the chapters at once, but what would be the fun in that? I like how KAgome wont have actual sex with Inuyasha till he clues into somethings, but that they can still my dirty lol. cant wait for then enxt chapter.
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Reviewed By: Orb (.n.o) On: June 15, 2004 19:33 CDT
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so i didnt know i was this far behind in updates, so look forward to about 3 more reviews from me in a row lol. this was a great chapter, it was really funny too. then ending was especailly funny, lol.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 15, 2004 19:26 CDT
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this is such a cute story, i lvoe Inu and Kagome here. They're so sweet and the perfect couple, I love the closeness of them. And the song inserts are really effective. Cant wait to read more.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: MayukaGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE IT! ^_^!! Make more!! this is a really great fic! ^_~ your pretty good with
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 08:42 CDT
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wow! and i'm not talkin bout the story lol. I wish I was lucky enough to find at least 1 guy to fufill one fantasy and here you are writting your stories on experiance and fantasy. Well arent you the lucky one huh? lol, well back to the story it was a good chap and can't wait to see if inu will ever get kags answer.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:10 CDT
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every time i read a story inuyashas fire rat houari ( did I spell it right) has a new ability lol. Oh and thanks for putting in the question at the end I completly forgot about it.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww....sweeeeet story!!!.....continue plz?!!....update soon!!...oh yeah are yu gona put kouga in here?
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 00:06 CDT
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good lemons. I'm not quite sure WHY I'm torturing myself by reading these 4 days before I get to see my fiance again for the first time in SIX FRIGGING MONTHS! but hey, they're good. Thank you for helping me further my self torture.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 21:50 CDT
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WOW I know a certian hanyo who needs a cold shower lol. I can tell this will be a fic with A LOT of thinking. :)
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 11:30 CDT
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wow, i just read this whole story, but i hope there's more, and I'm just speechless. This is a really great sotry, the plot line its very tantilizing, and the lemons give me goosbumps, especially the last one.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 20:29 CDT
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YEAY!!! some more imaginary Porn!! lol just kidding. well since we're still in the begining of the story i don't have much comment to make. So untill the next chap take care yall!!!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven On: June 11, 2004 18:15 CDT
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why not make kag and inu Mates, that way nothing can come between them, and kag will have an extended life, inu can have the pups he fanticized about, kykeo cant give him that, she is dead.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 09:16 CDT
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HMM LOL NOT SO BAD, THAT WAS GOOOOOD
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