| "The Sweetest Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 00:10 CDT
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And to think of all the times the girls tried to hook up Kagome with Hojo, Yuka must feel pretty bad about that now. Give me a sniper rifle and I'll eliminate all of Hojo's reason to be attracted to Kagome as well as discourage future stalking and voyeur tendancies.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:56 CDT
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Ooh, some after school activity. Loved it. I like your mating rituals. Can't wait till they beat Naraku's butt again. Update soon, later.
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Title: Good! Very Good!
Reviewed By: KamiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's so original and fun. I bet you really enjoy writing it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 03:12 CDT
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I know this site does author alerts, but I'm sometimes annoyed by the review system and logging in. Great chapter, I can't wait to see how all of the couple's youkai friends react to what their senses tell themn happened. Could I please use the spell Inuyasha said in my Naruto story? I feel for your anger at FF.net, they have been bastards some times.
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Reviewed By: firelord (not loged in) On: June 21, 2005 02:48 CDT
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you have writen another great chapter i am so glade that you have continued to wright this story keep up the great work and update agin when you can
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Reviewed By: A heart so pure [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 10:33 CDT
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Woo! Finally a review. I'm happy you updated your story I'd been wondering when you would. I'm sure you've heard this a million and one times but don't let those people stop you. They're all some idiot bitches. Well, I'll be waiting for your next update. - Jasmine
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 20:03 CDT
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Ya, you added. I knew that her mother would be able to tell some things. Hope for more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13(NSI) On: June 01, 2005 18:24 CDT
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Praise Kami u updated!! It sooo good to finally read another chapter for this fic. Hopefully your writers block is over and as for those certain readers who can't appreciate your work just ignore them. Your fic is great and if they can't appreciate it then screw them! N e ways please update soon!
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 14:57 CDT
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PLEASE update soon...no more writers blocks either...though i dont think that would help...^^;;; hmm, you think there is room on the "Present day" team for a badass fighter chick like sango...
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you started working on this fic again! I have loved it from the beginning! ^-^ I'm sorry about all those bakas out there. They don't know a great fic when they read it. O_o
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Skycat316 On: June 01, 2005 05:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why people are bring u down I love your stories,and your a good writer don't listen to those idoits who know they can;t write a story like u. keep it up..
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Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 03:44 CDT
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New... content... (Drool) Woot, you updated! I'm sorry your ff.net account was shut down again, I'm going to miss seing you in author alerts. I'm glad you've got new chapters for your loyal readers, I'm practically bouncing off the walls in happiness.
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Title: Sweetest Sin
Reviewed By: San_girl13 On: May 15, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really really looking forward to the next chapter!!! I mean I really can't wait!!! and that character index really helps to keep everything straight!!! Please hurry and post the next chapter!!! Ok thanks alot!!! San_girl13
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: The Nerd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! i love little lemons!
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Reviewed By: San_girl13 On: April 30, 2005 02:16 CDT
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I was a fan of your story on the fan fiction site but then it got taken off, which was really sad...I just finished reading the last chapter and was wondering when you'd update next...I'm really looking forward to it!!! I hope that it's soon!!! ok Bye bye for now!!! San_girl13
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