| "The Sweetest Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 181 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuPrincess21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really great and i'm DYING to read more, just give us fans a message that your still thinking about the story! your story is really original which makes it one of my favorite stories so far to date... and trust me, i've read alot. Please update soon! you have many fans
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Title: The Sweetest Sin
Reviewed By: Celestra88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew. I just read this story in two days. I love it. You have a terrific writing style and really great ideas. I can't see why any one would want to kick you off. I have read many stories on this site and ff.net and this is one of the best stories I've read. I am curious when Inuyasha will finally figure out Kagome's question and how all this maheim is going to turn out. I can't wait for the rest of the story. Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: April 07, 2005 19:30 CDT
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OMG this story is like the best that i have read in a long time so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Holy_Psychic_Vulpix On: April 06, 2005 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an encredably good story. Well written. Please email me at deaths.name.heros.heart@Gmail.com when you update, if you have the time, if not, I will find a way to know. lol. Keep up the killer good work.
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Title: The Sweetest Sin: Revelations of the Soul
Reviewed By: KireiChan* On: April 04, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I TOTALLY LUV THIS CHAPTER! poor miroku. he turly does luv sango..... i luv miroku he add humor to the story! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:27 CST
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oh NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! it was so long i thought it might never end yet here we are... an ending, im new to your reviews because i dont review till i get to the end and now ive reached it, but n e ways great story so far cant wait for more. poor akira, he just wasn't fast enough, i hope he gets better soon. i understand the writers block, try laying in your bed and just barly control ur thoughts(thinking about this story of course) and see if it helps, thats what i'd do if i ever got a bad case of writers block, which i probably will eventually, le sigh, oh well update asap, Zirra
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Reviewed By: MTL On: March 19, 2005 16:44 CST
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this is a very interesting story, i started reading it on fantion, but figured your unedited would be more complete. i enjoyed your story so far, sory i dont have any ideas. i also have liked the miroku / sango parts to !! sorry if spelled their names wrong
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Reviewed By: MBCfanficgirl On: March 17, 2005 20:20 CST
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Ugh!! Please hurry!! I'm dying for the cloud of suspense and mystery!1 PLEASE HURRY!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu&kagome4ever On: March 16, 2005 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I read all of what was on Fanfaction.net and decided to read this version. This on is much better.Please update soon! It has been a while since you have. Thanks! Bye!
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Reviewed By: InnocentDarkSassycat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like your story but it got a little boring during the naraku and the explaning parts but i kno you have to put those in there. so i really like ur story plz update soon.i saw ur story on fanfic. and its defiently watered down. bye bye
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Title: PLEASE PLEASE
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady 69 On: February 02, 2005 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: psyco-nekoyoukai On: November 10, 2004 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more on this story i like it
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Title: Dark_Lady_69
Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when r u going to update it has been like 4ever please please update
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 12:35 CDT
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Please please update soon i cant wait to read what happenes next please update soon
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Reviewed By: eliebitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 17:29 CDT
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I can see it! did you get tired of writing Inuyasha's repeated thoughts over and over again, or what?
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