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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 08, 2006 02:57 EDT
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Oh, the plot thickens! You've created another wonderful chapter! I liked the Inuyasha/Kagome fluff and the smart-ass way Inuyasha reacts to the kitsune. ^_^ Great characterizations as always. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 23:52 EST
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Wow! *Two* updates back to back! Thanks! I enjoyed both chapters and I hope you update again soon. What mess is Shippou getting himself into now? ----PS - Mediaminer had some type of database work done or something and they reset everyone's default so that only signed reviews are allowed. You might want to manually change your settings to allow people not signed in to review your story. You deserve many, many more reviews.
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 01:08 EST
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Yay! I'm always excited to see an update from this story. ^_^ What on earth happened to Shippo?? I'm sure we'll find out, soon enough.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 00:18 EST
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Thank you for updating. This is one of my favorite stories. I look forward to reading another chapter and finding out what happened to Shippou. wj (aka SoutasSister)
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Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 20:01 EDT
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Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I am not trying to be a gushing-type reviewer, but I really, really liked this story. I also like the fact that you have ever so obviously researched background for it - a rarity, it seems, with some fan fiction. Very, very good character development. Good balance of the things that I think make up readable fiction: description, conversation, action, along with attention to spelling and grammar (lack thereof sends me through the roof, probably showing my AR side, I guess) and as I said before, research for a believable environment. I was lucky enough to visit friends in Japan last year, and unless you've been there, you may not realize the prevalence of family-owned shrines (at least in Fujisawa, where we stayed) throughout an area. I am most anxious to read more of this story and can only urge you to continue - and with your voice, continue writing. Arigato gozaimasu!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: September 06, 2005 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story - every chapter opens up a new area to be explored. I'm so glad that you updated and look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: September 05, 2005 14:03 EDT
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I'm so glad to see an update on this story! This is one of my favorites and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What a wonderful tale you've woven here--original, true to Takahashi's characterizations, wonderful jeopardies, and unique touches. I adored the kitsune den-cum-shrine, and I look forward to reading more chapters. After this latest installment, I wonder what poor little Shippou's connection might be to the sealed evil kitsune who was eventually sealed by a "powerful Buddhist priest," and to the evil spirit that possessed Michiko. Anyhow, great job, and please continue!
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you have a very interesting story, like the begining of it. inuyasha stuck in kagome's time with her. love your latest chapter, i like that you are not leaving out about miroku, sango and shippou and their feelings in loosing the other two. i hope you stay with it. littleolmee
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Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story! and having Kagome and InuYasha stuck in her time... AND fighting demons? SWEET! Please update!
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy I found this fic! Although... what I kind of have running through my head right now is... "Na na na na na Ghost busters!" It's great. Poor Kagome, going on to live like Kikyou in her own time. And what is up with jijii? Is InuYasha going to have to take over for him? I guess he is getting a bit old... Anyway, this is a really great story, and I can't wait for your update!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 08, 2005 03:01 EDT
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I really like this story. You capture the personalities of the characters very well, even though they are in new situations. I hope you update again soon and let us know where that pesky demon went... And Inu/Kag WAFF is always welcome!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 01:11 EDT
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Yes! An update! Thank you, thank you! You really write the characters very well and I've enjoyed every chapter. I love this story and I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story! You really make the characters come alive. That was a great cliffy, too, btw ^_^
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