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Title: ch8
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo, here r my random thoughts: cant remember what happened in previous chapters, funnily enough, this tends 2 happen with a lot of other fics i read as well. skipped parts. want 2 know what happens next anyway. does iy cuss in front of jiichan, then again i have only seen the anime. thanks 4 writing! bai
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 12:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen re:earlier,rash review;I admit to beginning w/Chap8.In doing so,missed the well-crafted unfurling of this marvelous tapestry. Your expanding of Inu-lore, intergrafting kitsune+abilities+curious propensities,along with the amusing exchange w/Yasei--had your Inuyasha been moved to thump more out of missing Shippou, rather than offense? ;)Kikyou imbuing Kagome w/accessible memories--nice, useful touch, though w/blessings penalties come along for the ride; keh! ;)I'm also grateful for your delving into Higurashi spiritual practices, had speculated Kagome's okasaan might possess true Talent. That jiji-san has at the very least the mechanics of priesthood, ofudas, and the dignity he's permitted, along with customary, vaudeville-esque bumbles,+Inuyasha's+his mutual challenges--LOLROTF,what sweeeeeeeeet irony jiji-san getting a ride on our beloved Hanyou.Poor Kagome,working such a beautiful miracle only to forever lose the sense of normalcy in contemporary times forever?You've raised many Q's;I'm very much looking forward to what else is up your haori sleeves. :)Btw,thanks re:"immure".I'd mused,"cloister"?,then grabbed a dict.--'entombment' indeed more apropos than 'sequester' cramming for exams.;)Snippets of Nippon history,cultural mores,practices are extremely welcome;ty for researching so deeply!LOVED Kag+Yasha's date, growing moments of touching and being touched;these loving threaded like finest gleaming silver.Okasaan embracing of Inu's presence,allaying his fears--!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 09:57 EST
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Extremely enjoyable! Great foreshadowing, and characterizations. Ahhhhhhhhh, some Inu/Kag moments, now that's cause for celebrating w/a box o' pocky at the very least! :) Thanks for a terrific read so far, here's hoping for more updates, soon. :)
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you left us at a cliffy, keep it oing plz it's a really great story:)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:23 EST
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Darn... I thought you updated. Please post another chapter soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: January 11, 2005 11:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story - so glad that you updated (and please excuse the late review)
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 14:23 EST
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you rock. I cant wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 14:11 EST
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Yummy Inu-Kag fluffiness! And now Kagome will be a "demon exterminator"...hmm? Ahh, the perils of having real spiritual power in the modern day world. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Of course, the usual comments still apply - your writing is awesome and I'm still hooked!
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Title: ..please continue..
Reviewed By: Chio On: November 22, 2004 11:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A friend recomended me your story and it´s wonderful, please update soon. Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 23:46 EST
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ooooo... nice chapter!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 19:43 EST
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I just stumbled across this story and all I can say is I'm SO very glad! Your writing is so beautifully rich - vivid imagery, complete and well thought out ideas. I love the realistic way you've fleshed out the scenario of Inuyasha being trapped in the modern world, as well as Kagome's actions now that she's back in her time. I'm actually having a hard time finding the words to describe how enthralled I am by your story. I think one thing that I keep thinking is that your story has it all - your characters are neither flat nor one dimensional, there is a very interesting storyline in the works, and the relationships and characters are consistent with what we've seen in the anime/manga thus far. No major OC-ness in my opinion. Please, keep writing and updating! Can't wait to read more...truly!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 19:34 EST
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Thanks for updating! I've been avidly following this story. You write well and you keep Inuyasha and Kagome in character nicely. I hope to read another chapter soon because I'm anxious to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: izzy (not logged in) On: November 21, 2004 19:24 EST
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and a new chapter. Yes. I really like this story and I look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I greatly enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading future chapters you get to write. ^.~
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:05 EDT
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Wow, another great chapter. You characterize Inuyasha and Kagome very well. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon!
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