| "The Slave Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: rena055 On: July 20, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. But i can't give it a super high rating cause it isn't done. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: MikoGirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 05:13 CDT
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I love your story!!Please write more!! signed, MikoGirlKagome
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Title: Hoo Shaa
Reviewed By: InuU [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it with us authors!? Always leaving people to yell at their PC's cuz we left em cliffy. he he but anywhoo... You read my fic so it's only fair for me to R&R yours! Keep up the great work! Sharlene
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Reviewed By: De Fan Girl. On: June 20, 2005 18:10 CDT
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Eek! Nooooo! -claws at computer- Noooooooo! -looking frantically for chaper five- Noooooooooooooooo! Waaaaahhh! -sob- its not there yet! uppppdaaaaattteeee! -flails around unhappily- Please update? I lluurrrrvvvve it so far!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An adorable story. Stinks about the plagiarizer on AFF, though on the bright side, I probably wouldn't have found this story if I hadn't seen your review to that one. And then there's that old crap about immitation being the highest form of flattery. Anyway, don't let it stop you from updating, this is good stuff.
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Title: Puppychan?
Reviewed By: Inu_terra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:30 CDT
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Updates please! I am begging on my knees,because of you I was influenced to write my own fic that I must update tonight of topic sorry so please update because your fic is so great that I couldn't get the Idea of a slave inuyasha out of my head. That is how good it is please update!*puppyeyes* ....you know I'm not sure why I bother with the puppy eyes authors just don't seem to be affected like they use to.....*sniff*
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Inu_terra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aren't we going to have sex is my favorite line! He just seemed so cute and nieve and sweat. Not to mention I burst out laughing and got funny looks. I have been waiting for updates for some time so I've decided to reread and post more reviews to motivate you.
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Title: ooo, I can't wait!!
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great great great great story! You had me hooked from the first chapter. I absolutely love this story and I can't wait until you update! PLEASE update! I'm dying waiting for all these wonderful stories to be updated! I must say, I had wonderful dreams the other night after reading about Inuyasha suckling Kagome's finger. ; ) ^_^
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Title: SHIT
Reviewed By: CHAKO On: March 24, 2005 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FORGIVE ME! LOOKS LIKE MY KANJI DOESNT APPEAR ON AN AMERICAN COMPUTER SCREEN! IM IN JAPAN AND ON A JAPANESE COMPUTER!! @(>_
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Reviewed By: CHAKO On: March 24, 2005 08:44 CST
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: CHAKO On: March 24, 2005 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE HOW INUYASHA IS SLOWLY STARTING TO OPEN UP. IT JUST SHOWS HOW WARM AND KIND KAGOME IS. IT'S ALSO HUMOROUS WHEN YASH STARTS FIGHTING WITH KOUGA. ANYWAY, IT' SO CUTE! I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE KEEP GOING! I THINK IM GONNA DIE OF IMPATIENCE. IM AN IMPATIENT PERSON. POST FASTER! (^O^)^ @@A LITTLE EXTRA YOU MIGHT LIKE: Œ¢-é³INUYASHA '©'²'ßKAGOME ŽXŒè@SANGO -íèÓ@MIROKU Žµ•ó@SHIPPO ŽE¶ŠÛSESSHOUMARU 'è'ñ@RIN Ž×Œ©@|JAKEN @‹j[@KIKYO "Þ-Ž@NARAKU •-@@KAEDE THESE ARE ALL JAPANESE NAMES FOR THE INUYASHA CHARACTERS. I DONT KNOW IF YOU'RE JAPANESE OR NOT, SO IF YOU ARE YOU CAN JUST ERASE THIS. IF YOU'RE NOT,ENJOY. I AM JAPANESE SO I KNOW THESE ARE THE RIGHT KANJI. FORGIVE ME. I FORGOT KOUGA'S KANJI.(>_
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Reviewed By: Dustychic On: March 23, 2005 18:19 CST
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I read your story and I really liked it, but I was a bit put off by the title. ya see I'm ususally on my computer just to do history homework so the titil 'The Slave Trade' made me cringe. But I read it anyway and I love it of course. However, I feel so bad for poor Shippo and Inu.. Tisk tisk tisk what a life for a slave. Anyways plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: March 22, 2005 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story:) I can't wait til the next chapter to find out what happens!!! UPDATE SOON:)!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:07 CST
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Wow, I didn't even realize you'd updated until now! Wonderful writing as usual! I REALLY hope you continue soon...pretty please? Don't make me wait another three months....
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Title: Muahahahah
Reviewed By: Inu_terra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 20:02 CST
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I LOVE this fic and now that I know there will be a happy ending. I almost tear up. I can't wait to see where your going to take Inuyasha and Kagomes relationship..oh the possiblities!!!I just wanted to tell you I love your style so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!( and if it wouldn't be to much trouble a little longer chapters?)
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