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Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps on getting better every time i read a new chapter, to be honest i like the whole inu not wanting to have kids thing, its different and i like different things :o) So keep up the good work and i cant wait to read your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Threnody On: August 23, 2004 14:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic... It's wonderful. ^^; I think Fall To Pieces by Avril Lavigne really fits the mood between Kegome and Inuyasha, listen to it sometime. =)
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 23, 2004 12:06 PDT
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Bravo! so thats whats been bothering him, the fact that in order for her live a long happy life with him he has to inflict phisical pain to kagome. good idea
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 11:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, my minds blank...i have like nothing to say... except update!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 10:55 PDT
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cools beans. he better tell her about the marking. it is her decision. Not his to make. keep up the great work though. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 10:50 PDT
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I love it!! The way you describe everything is awesome, the feelings of the characters and all... it's really good! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 23, 2004 09:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady (NSI) On: August 23, 2004 09:00 PDT
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I like your story...you werem right about those last couple of chapters...I started crying....good job....
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 07:53 PDT
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Keep it up. i ADORE this fic so far. update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:42 PDT
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They WILL have children right ! please let them have children please !!! anyway this was a really good chapter update soon !!!!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:12 PDT
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I'm really impressed with the depth of Inu's love in this chapter....shows alot of character strength on his part, for sure. As for Dammit....? How is it she and Kags can understand each other now????
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Title: NOT FAIR
Reviewed By: kanayekisho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:02 PDT
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you HAVE to make Inuyasha and Kagome have a family. He would be totally contradicting himself if he said he would do anything for her and then not give her the one thing she wanted her whole life! And his kids wouldn't have a bad childhood like his- they would have family and they wouldn't be discriminated! It just isn't right for them to not have kids. He is way too selfish. In practically every chapter, he thinks how precious she is to him, and yet he is willing to give her up because he is afraid his kids will be as screwed as he was? Then he doesn't not want kids, he just doesn't want kids who have bad and lonely lives like he had. rrrrrrrrrrr you just HAVE to change that. good fic otherwise, but seriously. the whole no kids thing isn't working and you should change it.
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:01 PDT
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Aww Inuyasha isnt gonna have puppies. I think he should. They would be adorable. Sometimes I dont understand what is going on, but slowly I understand. Keep up the great work and never give up!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:47 PDT
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Gosh..your last chapter really just tugged at my emotions. Actually, your last few chapters have honestly been amazing -conveying so much feeling with very concise words and imagery. I still can't get past Inu's irrational worry about having children. Not to downplay it...but Doesn't he realize that as Sessh put it..if anything was to happen to him and Kagura, Inu would become the kids' guardians..thus making him a parent anyway? Inu wants to spare his children the pain he himself suffered...but everything about his childhood is so different from what is going on now...I mean, in some sense he does want to have children..he just doesn't want them to suffer. So it's not that he opposes the idea of having pups...but the consequences of doing so. Argh..I still feel so frustrated b/c I feel that Kagome shouldn't have to give up the idea of children to be with Inu.
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Reviewed By: jenwee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont usually like most of da inu/kag fics .. but this is awesome .. i like the twist of inuyasha not wanting kids .. and all the things he had to go through to get kagome back Dammmit .. hahahaha das hilarious =]
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