| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It'll be interesting to say the least to see what happens with Yusuke and Botan's mating. Hmm...you know I just had another thought about Yukina and Kuwabara's mating, if a Koroomie is rare, how much rarer would 1) a mated koroomie pair be and 2) a male kroomie (even one transformed from human to a half demon/human hybrid) would he have the tears turning to gems too? Wonder how many greedy guts out there would go after him or them? Heh, given that Koroomie are technically all female, does that mean he can get preggers too? *lol* wouldn't that give him a start, ne? I'm looking forward to Touya and Mouya's sidestory when it comes and Chu and Atsuko's - though I've been meaning to try a Yomi/Atsuko pairing - buwahahahaha! Anyway, excelent work, I look forward to more and finding out what happens next. There's quite a bit still going on. And gotta see the birth of the kids too! ^.^ Will there be any following sequels to this? It's a wonderful story 'verse' :)
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...so what happens if Botan's corpreal (physical) body gets taken from her? Better yet, if she mates with Yusuke, can it? Especially if she is pregnant? I do think Koenma isn't seeing clearly because of his father, but I think the guys are sort of selling him short because in the end, he did rebel against his father, he does have some spine. If he got wind of what his father was plotting, do you think he'd go against him again? If so That would give the guys a sure inside ally. ^.^V Hm...wonder what would happen to botan if she did mate with a demon seeing as she's sort of a psychopomp who guides souls to the other world. Wonder if she has an inherent ability to see the length of beings lives? Hey if Touya gets a mate, will Jin or Chu? How about Atsuko? :D
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story..can't wait for the next chappie ^.^V
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Reviewed By: Shadow_of_a_Kitsune_Thief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:36 CDT
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You suck! hahahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story. I hope you will continue it. It's great!! I'm putting it on my favorites list!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Thats all I can say. Every chapter was great. Please please continue, I wanna know what happens next with everyone, especially Yusuke and Botan, they gotta get together soon. Ohh and what kids the others have! So please please write some more!
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u really have no idea how much i love this story. i know it will be updated when you finish the next chapter, but if it will help u, i really look forward for the next one to be up.
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Title: One of My Favorites!
Reviewed By: kittycat831 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to admit that my rating is partially based on the fact that I'm an absolute fan of Kurama and Keiko fanfictions, but this is by far one of my favorites. The writing style is very good, nothing complicated, but also nothing too simple. I love the interactions between Kurama and Keiko. I can't wait for the rest of the story!
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Title: One of My Favorites!
Reviewed By: kittycat831 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to admit that my rating is partially based on the fact that I'm an absolute fan of Kurama and Keiko fanfictions, but this is by far one of my favorites. The writing style is very good, nothing complicated, but also nothing too simple. I love the interactions between Kurama and Keiko. I can't wait for the rest of the story!
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Title: ooooooooooooo
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo great chapter!!!!! update sooooon pleaseeeee *glomps authoress*
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Reviewed By: RiskDraka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all the story was very well writen and very different compard to many others, I like the detail in it alot, but you didn't go over board with detailm which many writers do. Or they does worse and do little detail. You did a great job on the X-Over as well, the mesh between the two was done very well. I can't wait till more is up!
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Title: I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
Reviewed By: RobotsInDisguise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you've updated. I was starting to worry. I was hoping you haven't gone missing or died or anything like that. Thank Goodness! I love your story mainly because of the Kurama/Keiko-ness. Do you know how hard it is to find a decent Kurama/Keiko fanfic that's NC-17 and isn't on Fanfiction.net!!!???? It's really hard! It's damn near impossible! I'm so glad a person like you exists. I love you and I hope you will update often, especially Kuronue's Pendant. That story is HOT.
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Title: YAY! ^_^
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 07:34 CDT
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YAY! YOU UPDATED!!!! please do so again sooooooooooooon! lol lovedthe chapter btw lol anyways Ja ne! ~Sakuralovesli
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Title: -midnightdemon
Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 05:23 CDT
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i cant remember if i've reviewed this story before, but i really dont feel like going through all your reviews. and i seriously doubt you can get too many anyway. so.. i love this story, its been awhile sence youve updated. i hope you haven't given up on this one, i look forword two the next chpt.
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Reviewed By: SacredJune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 18:51 CDT
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Yeah! Awesome story can't wait to read what happens next.
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