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Title: *giggles uncontrollably*
Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:10 EDT
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I just love the back-and-forth between Piccolo and Vegeta...it really shows how far Vegeta has come, and that he indeed has a sense of humor. As for how to get rid of the brainwashing...find someone that can do the same thing and have them reverse it? That's the best I can come up with at the moment. So far, I'm loving this fic just as much as I loved Maintaining. And I'm so happy Maintaining didn't have a sad ending! *hugs* Keep up the fantastic work. ~Altair.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 15:48 EDT
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With a lover like Kakorr and a friend like Piccolo, it seems like Vegeta is on the road to recovery--does he need to have the brainwashing removed and could he just psychologically heal himself with his strong will and new sense of being loved??? You are so into this fic---don't stop, don't stop!! I love it when you post like a madwoman! your fan, debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Kethry (not loged in, grrrr) On: August 03, 2004 01:33 EDT
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WooHoo! so happy you are at it again! SO looking for a way to ger rid of the Brainwashing eh? well I am sure you have ideas but what about hpynoses(sp major, hope you read typo) ? and I like Kackorrot like this, I always thought he was to fluffy and you have given him back his wild side. Looking forward to more!!!
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Reviewed By: Renzuite or Renzu-chan On: August 03, 2004 00:46 EDT
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STALK OF CELERY. Do you know how much I laughed at those three simple words? I don't think I've laughed out loud like that in too much of a long time. Oh good lord, Goku and orange. You funny funny woman :) I guess he spends time with his boys and friends while Vegeta goes off sparring Piccolo? Wouldn't he become insanely jealous again when Vegeta comes home smelling like eggplant? :D LOL I feel for blissfully asexual Piccolo. I have people that tease me about that sort of stuff I don't want to hear as well. Yay being squeamish!..which is why I'm hesitant about adding lemon to my first fic back at Paco's Hotel ;) But what is any great fic (ha, not really) without awesome sex? Hm, to rid brainwashing without dragonballs. Drug him up lol. Excessive consumption of alcohol? Nah, I want a good clean Vegeta. Hypnotism? Ooh that would be weird and interesting. He could regress to different stages of his life or act like how he thinks someone acts. Then there are arts and crafts, starting a punk rock band, shock therapy. Haha, lots of distractions. Just give him Final Fantasy XI. That'll provide years of distractions. LOL.
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Bows) Thanks for the hug. I realy like how you are able to keep Vegeta the same but able to joke and except help. Really love the teaseing he is doing to Piccolo. Will there be more of the others in next chapter? Hope Goku torments Bulma. What about Gohan what is up with him? Well update soon please Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 02, 2004 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! the new fic is here with more sex & more destruction! ^^ *squeals & purrrs against Pixelgoddess* ok now is ChiChi & her g/f gonna get married in this fic? & when the %$@# is Vegeta & Goku gonna get mated? & another thin' since Goku & Vegeta have a bond 'cause of the fusion what 'bout Goten & Trunks, do they have the same thin'? whats this fic gonna be 'bout or r u just gonna play with ur readers & make us read & find out?(wow lots of questions today ^^) grrrrr hey what 'bout my attention HMMMM!!! *neko glare at Pixelgoddess with her tail twichin' in annoyance* i'm warnin' u i have somethin' that i'm not afraid to use & it was death writen all over it & i know u don't a extremely neko-high(or extremely sugar-high it dosn't matter its the same thin') runnin' around on ur lap(its called cool candy creation kit rock candy where u have 3 pounds of sugar & make into rock candy. its a death machine 'cause for 1 it has 3630 CALORIES 2 total carbs 907 GRAMS & 3 it has 877 GRAMS of SUGARS NOTHIN' ELSE THATS IT!!! thats death for u people i mean come on if anyone eats that the WILL end) so will u PLEASE give me the attention a neko diserves! (ya know the whole pettin', scratchin' ears & neck, holdin' the neko ect ect ect... ya know that stuff) PLEASE I BEG OF U PET ME!!!! & HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAP!!!*BIG neko-eyes starin' at Pixelgoddess with desperation & her paws fisted in Pixelgoddess's shirt* (damn i'm a |
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:35 EDT
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Fur! Supersaiyan room-exploding sex! Angst! Re-pondering the meanings of seme and uke! Purring! Did I mention fur? This is a great start, and I'm so glad you've swept right into the sequel rather than, say, doing the ironing! YEY! carry on.... your fan debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: July 30, 2004 16:23 EDT
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Yeah!!! I feel much better about a sequel now. Sorry I didn't comment the last two updates. Couldn't think of anything meaningful to say. I thought Maintaining ended kind of abrupt (torment, more torment THEN BIG MEANINGFUL FIGHT SCENE then torment and o_O sex as an ending..?) but this new chapter of Quest satisfied my doubts. LOL at the recap of Maintaining. EXPLOSIVE SEX. Gotta love it. What pain will you make me go through in this story? Surely not Frieza's return or a BioFrieza (thinks of repeated villains from the movies). Is this story gunna have as much anguish as the first? Or more of a fluff o_O; I love happy Vegeta! Ack he said 'Goku' o_o;; And I just can't stop loving the nickname of Kakorr! Favorite name now :) I'm excited to continue reading xD
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! The sequel! More Vegeta and Goku! More sex! More destruction! More! More! More!
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 09:47 EDT
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(LMAO at Elenek's review) I too am a corrupted "good girl". ^__~ Thanks, Pixelgoddess, for beginning what I am sure will be another fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 01:39 EDT
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I really shouldn't be reading all of this smut. I'm a good little Catholic Girl. O well. Very fine job. Its a shame it was raining though. I could see the morning light filtering in through the trees that canopied the open roof. -El-
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Title: WoW!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that is away to open for a sequil. Wow! hury up-date want to know the toment the prince is going to put his mate though. Again Wow Bye Bye LadyKATT
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