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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 00:12 EST
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Your portrayal of the relationship between Vegeta and Piccolo has to be one of my favorite parts of the story. I can very easily imagine them having that really easy, sarcastic, back and forth baiting that you write so well. Even when Piccolo calls Vegeta an asshole, it's quasi-affectionate. Fantastic work on this chapter, and all of the ones before it. ^_^ ~Altair
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 09:27 EST
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Sorry fo not reviewing in so long. The finals are evil and must be punished. I enjoy seeing what other people come up for the characters as carears(sp? I've tried 4 spellings and it still doesn't look right.) Although, I must admit, don't really see Vegeta as an instructor. (Not that I can say anything. Really, I made Goten an architect.) I'm also curious at see where your solution comes from. Do Piccolo and Bulma decipher it out of Frieza's computer? Does instinct take over? Maybe both. That could be ammusing. I think I like how Goku stated the line at the end. Not an agreement to Vegeta's proposal but more as a statement of fact. Thank you for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Kethry (not logged in, to lazy) On: December 07, 2004 09:04 EST
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Yush! Drums! So primal **grins evily** I like the eye color. I always found blue a easier color to work with. More expressive and changeable than black. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the mating rite! Will it be private? **jumps into a tree to spy** Can't miss this! Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Title: Ch 20
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, as I highly expected. =) But hmm, from the show, huh? Well, there's not much interaction between G/V in all of the DBZ/DBGT (GT, blech!) episodes, and there's even less V/B scenes, which make even the slightest reference to marriage, much less bonding... uh... You've got me stumped! I can't wait to see your spectacular mating idea!!! MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 01:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes leave them like that it would be cool wow he did cool he said yes ya! Now they can be happy Please up-date soon Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: 654684521 On: November 30, 2004 20:40 EST
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I love the girls!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! I just didn't read it untill now, but I LOVE THEM, it was one of the best chapters I ever read. Please do not take the girls away!
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Reviewed By: Miika On: November 30, 2004 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Clearly number 3, sorry ^.~ Great chapter again =D Want to enjoy the happiness while it lasts =D
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Title: Ch 18 & 19
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was away on business for Ch 18. Hmm, very well written, as usual, but I must admit Yuri does not a thing for me. Guess I only like Het & Yaoi. I do love the line: "Looks like kitten has run away and panther has come out to play." Very cute. As for Ch 19, I was LMAO when Goku and Vegeta were playing with each other. I love how you go in depth into Vegeta's thoughts as he considered Pete's gushing compliments directed solely at him. The training scene with the kids was very cool, especially Vegeta's loving thoughts for Trunks. But, the playing scene on the cliff left a gigantic smile on my face that just would not go away until I had re-read it about 3 more times! So, the mating starts in the next chappie, right? Hey, what about Raditz's scouter that Bulma kept? Wouldn't that have some Saiyan history in it, or in this story are you treating the scouter as fighting tool only? Just curiousity. Mating! Mating! Mating!
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Title: Too busy to login...
Reviewed By: *Bakani Banana* On: November 29, 2004 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down like a wet monkey* I loved the chapter with Chi-Chi and Rezu's honeymoon!! God all that latx sounds so incredibly sexy! I'm happy the two of them managed to find some happiness with each other and I'm only a teeny bit sorry Krillin was such an ass in this story arc. But it makes a nice balance considering that most people cast Vegeta-sama as the monkey-ass in their arcs. The balance is only part of it because I never could understand how someone without a nose was a lead character, although it brought up interesting arguements on cunnilingus...but that's beside the point. This review is to tell you that I have escaped once more, but am being harrassed because my router cuts off for no reason (I know they're doing it to spite me...). While I have this time, I wish to congratulate on another brilliant chapter and being the Wording Goddess that you are!
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Reviewed By: Kethry (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 23:54 EST
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**still dancing** THE GREAT AND POWERFUL PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS VEGETA!!! **listens to the roar of the crowd** WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I loved this chap! the playfullness was perfect. *breaks out her drum** drum session Pixel? **lights the bondfire and starts to play**
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Reviewed By: Princees Katreena On: November 28, 2004 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
#3 That was really cool love how they play around Looking foward to next chapters LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: November 21, 2004 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter I am looking foward to the naxt chapter also am really happy too know they will be mated before the Kias do some thing...but one thing there is a catch isn't there? You are trying to convice me they wont try to interfear or do something after? Well maybe I am being over paranoid..... Update soon please Bye BYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 01:35 EST
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**does seat dance already waitng for the next chappie and ish glomped!** hehehehehehe. ^_^ I will just say... you rock! **Dances off to wait for the next update**
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 11:57 EST
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Lovely ceremony. Nice resonance with all the relationships. Loved the Saibaman line. I got my first flame this week too! The idiots must be bored or something. I don't mind if you don't update crazily quickly--just keep up the good writing! d
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 00:10 EST
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Don't worry about it. Good things are always worth the wait. My favorite line was the Saiyabemen (sp?) being training for Bulma. It had me giggling excessively. I had forgotten the Dende/Gohan thing. Poor Gohan, making fun of him in public. Friends are good things to have. It's nice to see Vegeta relaxed. I'm looking to see if Kakarrot becomes stronger yet again. I'm also looking forward to seeing where you go with Piccolo. Thank you for writing -El-
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