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Reviewed By: elenek *not logged in* On: April 30, 2005 21:42 EDT Comment/Review: Good chapter. I especially liked the way th eRouba invited herself to the palace. -EL-
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 29, 2005 21:23 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Noo it is notr fare...will they make it back...and when they do I think ity is time for Goku to use his IT and confront the Kai before they do something like reserect Frezza...but even you are not that crule to Vegeta right...like both chapter sorry did not review the last one just catching up Please tell me will Vegeta live or is this the end of him and the end of what kindness and trust in Goku? Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 18, 2005 00:41 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I agree love what you did with the chapter...still worried about thoses damn Kais' don't trust them nope I don't...I hope Goku can do what he needs too so Vegeta can heal...please update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Vernalla On: April 11, 2005 12:40 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: "You look like someone he cared about as a child - his Rouba." He was grateful when Kakorr softly answered for him. "He hadn't realized how much he missed her until he saw you." This line made me suddenly burst into tears. I've read this story from the very first chapter of the prequel, and it's still affecting me now. I'm so glad that you're back at your usual very emotional level, I'd missed this during the last chapters I read! Emotions are so overflowing in this, I love you for that~! *hugs* I think it's very important to "feel" the characters' emotions, cry for them, be happy for them, hurt when they're hurting.. It makes it so much more than just simply "reading". I love this story from the bottom of my heart, even more so now that the emotions came back for me in this chappy~! Can't wait to see exactly what'll happen, there are oh so many possibilities.. =) Already like the Rouba and her special relationship with Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 08, 2005 01:59 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: WHAT!!! Why can't they?! Please tell me it was a type o and you were teasing right...right...no no why the y have come so far...please update soon... LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Yuki Eiri On: April 06, 2005 14:35 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Eeepers!! a clifiie :: falls :: I'm loving this so far, keep writing! thats an order! lol :P this is fab hun, cant wait for the next chappie! Hugs Yuki xx
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 14:21 EDT Comment/Review: Fascinating stuff. Priceless Piccolo scene--I just love Nail. Wondering when Krillen is going to get his. >.<
Wonderfully original and exciting way to get our fave pair mated.... holding on to my seat for next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 10:38 EDT Comment/Review: I'm Jealous and envious of your writing skill. I'm horribly distraught and on the verge of tears. I loved the description of the Rouba. Poor Vegeta. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:33 EST Comment/Review: This story is so yummy. I loved Goku's epiphany and Vegeta's views on ruling. I was so cute. I'll watch for the next chapter and the Kai's explanations. Thank you for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 11:57 EST Comment/Review: oh I read this chapter the second it was posted and I've been trying to think of something more intelligent to say that "I love it." But I just do love it. The Saiyan history, Goku's POV--so touching--the self-awareness of Saiyan-ness. I *love* it.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: March 19, 2005 18:47 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Cool chapter Nicley done Update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Yuki_eiri On: March 15, 2005 16:59 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ohmigod! *orgasms & falls over* amazing serries, you are such a talented writer ( a little ass kissing never hurt nobody :P ) Hehe, update soon! :: neeeed mooore :: anyhows! see ya later! :: dances ::
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Reviewed By: William Givens On: February 28, 2005 23:28 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the series. Hmm...did the Osekkai on Planet Vegeta want the Saiyan Prince of that era to mate with a Kai? Idle speculation. Yeah, I'm a fan of the pairing (Goku & Vegeta). Chichi is too much of a domineering harpy in the show. I like how you toned her down. You are a really good writer. If not for the stupid bakayaro (a little redundant, I know) copyright laws, I'd say go ahead and publish your stories. You are far more talented than I am. Also, a small suggestion--please do not have Gohan end up like he does in GT (a generally useless nerd). It's your fic, so of course you decide. The timeline you have created is intriguing and very fun to read. I hope Goku and Vegeta don't have any trouble with the Kais in the past. Keep writing, because you are very good!
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Title: Chappie 26 Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 11:35 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whew! I was gone for way too long that time! OMG! Wow! That (and the past few) chappie took my breath away! *Floored* Ok, I hope I can catch my breath back before I go to work today! Fabulous, fantastic, outstanding as usual! You rock! Next chappie, please!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: February 26, 2005 23:55 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: WOW!!! That was nice Please up date soon and a little more of that would be nice Bye For now LadyKATT
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