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Reviewed By: William Givens On: June 14, 2005 10:50 EDT
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Finally! Please let them be able to mate soon! At least Vegeta's Frieza nightmares will be gone! They are together and don't need any more trouble from that stupid changeling.
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Reviewed By: Yuki Eiri On: June 11, 2005 07:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you evil biatch! lol, another major cliffie ^_^ you certainally know how to keep your readers engaged. Lol ^_^ i'll be patiently waiting for the next orgasmic chapter :P *Hugs* Yuki xx
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 09, 2005 23:38 EDT
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That is not fare!!!! you left it hanging (big pout) but you are going to update soon right? you wont let them suffer much more will you? Please up daet soon ( low bow ) LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: EleneK *whatever* On: June 09, 2005 23:26 EDT
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I feel guilty because I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters. I want to leave these long thought filled reviews. But, I've never been good at those and the last few chapters have been simply beautiful. It's nice to see Goku return to himself. I liked Vegeta's thoughts on how easy it was but how hard. Looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: June 05, 2005 01:01 EDT
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NO!!! He has come so far...it is not fare...he is going to lose Goku...please update soon...I hope this work out...LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 14:31 EDT
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*sniff* Ok, you made me cry again. There was just something about this chapter. The Piccolo and Vegeta repartee was a small bit of lightness, but there was something just so sad about Goku feeling betrayed, and then Vegeta feeling that way. Everytime this story skirts melodrama or cheese, and I don't want to feel what it's telling me, some character will make a very mature observation and there's a ah ha moment for me, and then you get me right in the gut, and I'm all over these characters and believing them and feeling for them... *sniff*
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Reviewed By: Yuki Eiri On: June 02, 2005 13:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo your story keeps getting better and better... cant wait for the next chapter *is impatient* lol *Hugs* keep writing sweetie xx
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Title: Off a bit
Reviewed By: *Bakani Banana* On: May 29, 2005 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*emerges from the world of MMORPGs to take a breath and write this* Well...I can only say that since we will not see Krillin make good use of his short stature to be a permanent nut-licker for Piccolo, a villan role will do just as well. Yes...that was a bit cruel of me but that is the only thing I cas see for him and 18 being together. *shrugs* oh well. In conclusion...THIS STORY ROCKS!!!! I swear I need to finish my stuff....I am getting email stalked by angry reviewers hunting for an update... *whimpers and goes to hide but keeps the link here open for sustenance*
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 29, 2005 01:39 EDT
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Ahhh no fare (Big pout) You love tourchering me don't you? Krillin has help from the Kais? they gave him new powers so he can interfear...or was it one of the Kais? they can chang into who they want was it them or one of thier helpers? Please update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: William Givens On: May 27, 2005 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better. I've recently seen the first Brolly movie (I prefer that spelling of his name) and thoroughly enjoyed the reference you put in about him. The guys that made GT should have done this story-arc or something like it instead of involving Baby and the Tuffles. Your dialogue is nice. I've also read "Nailed" and think it a worthy side-story. I'm glad Piccolo is finally getting some action! I also like how you're not letting Gohan turn into the ubernerd that they made him at the end of DBZ and in most of GT. You are definitely my favorite DBZ fanfiction author. Wait a moment--what power level was the Osekkai? I read somewhere that Kibito's power level was 225,000,000, and Supreme Kai's (or Kaioshin's) was 250,000,000, so what would Kibito Kai's power level be? According to the same source, Evil Kid Buu's power level was 500,000,000. I know that power levels don't get referenced at all after Mirai Trunks kills Frieza and King Cold, but I'd still like to know ballpark figures.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged on On: May 26, 2005 10:44 EDT
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WOOOOOOOOOOO! You went with it! Chi Chi's pregnant! I loved the Vegeta and Chi Chi banter. Yamcha was beautifully in character (thanks!) but I was hoping for some redemption of Krillen. It really pains me to hear him call Chi "bitch." What sort of anger is there in that little guy? Can we see inside his head to find out? He seems one-dimension, the homophobe scapegoat. There's got to be more to the story. I always want to see more of bad guys--it's a NEED of mine. But anyway, there's no slowing down of this story--it just keeps on truckin! :-)
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 23, 2005 01:10 EDT
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Wow cool chapter! Do I get any hints? Please...I am glad ChiChi is going to help them...please update soon. LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: HSaiyajin On: May 22, 2005 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, the chapter wasn't a cliff, but it feels like one if you read from the prequeal to this chp... So, good job overall. I just have one complaint: why are the chapters soo short? I'm being driven insane with it! [Well, not really... but you get my point] I really like your frequent updates! I can't wait for the next chapter! As for grammer/conventions, you're doing a very good job; better than what I've seen in the fanfiction world. Two thumbs up for that. And that's it for now! Update soon Please!! Leave a pleasant surprise!
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Reviewed By: H.Saiyajin On: May 15, 2005 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... good job so far, and I really want to you to update soon [preferably day by day], but whatever suits your fancy. The problems and situations are very realistic as are the characters that portray them. The story seems to be very well written and thoughtout [there is hardly anything that appears out of the blue]. And that's it.... soo update soon and have a good day i guess... ps: why'd you leave us hanging on the cliff?!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 03, 2005 23:41 EDT
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Aww Vegeta...so much pain but he has mad one step in healing thanks to his lover...I see well the Kais better hope Goku and the others don't fine away there (Evil Grin) not that I mined they should pay for what they keep doing...I loved this chapter ChiChi what a dirty little mind she has...please Update soon LadyKATT
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