| "Wake Me Up Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: YashLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 22:34 CDT
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im confused 23 and 24 r the same chapters o.O?.....anyway i love this story keep updating ^^
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Title: About Time
Reviewed By: Majicman55 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't expect me to have any sympathy for you after you tortured me by making me wait so long for an update. Okay, I'm kidding. Just please don't let it be as long till your next update.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:42 CDT
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Whaa-hooooo! You updated! Yay! I love you penguine! I'm very sorry to hear about all of your troubles, and I hope that things have been getting better. please update again soon, I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to update? I LOVE this story you just have to! i'd love a shippo/sherry apiring, you could even tie that into the epilogue of this one, if you're making an epilogue! even so, i still LOVE this story! you're an awesome author, UPDATE! please??
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I can't wait till your next update.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 18:30 CST
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*scratches back of head* *sighs* *shakes head.* And you were doing so well... I hope you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens now. When's Sesshy gonna show? that is what I wanna know!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 10:26 CST
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I wholeheartedly agree with the Shippou/Sherry thing. They are so much alike. AS for the second half, I can't think of anything right off the bat, other than finding out what Sessho-kun wants to know, and seeing Inu's parents show up.
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 13:53 CST
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you want the cherry cordials...finish the fic pretty please!!!
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Title: *BLUSHES*
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:24 CST
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And one other thing ... ah ... well, I was reading all the previous reviews and I wanted to apologise for one of the ones I sent. SO, I'M REALLY SORRY!!! And as you can see I never did take this off my favorites, so can you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE forgive me?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 15:06 CST
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You know, I just thought of another thing. Sherry doesn't remind me of Shiori at all, Shiori was very quiet and almost timid. Who she does remind me of, personality wise, is Rin. Sessho's little girl, who was so chattery and vivacious. So maybe you could do something with that angle when Yasha-kun wakes up. After all, Sherry's another little girl with no real home to go to. Her Uncle notwithstanding, since he's never there. Anyway, this was just a thought that occured to me when I was reading chapter 10.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 14:03 CST
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Hmm, in chapter five you say sherry's hair is brown, but you change it later to red. Are you going to fix that? I'm just rereading this so no worries. Waiting for an update. Which I hope comes soon, or I may die of asphyxiation.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story is great i cant wait until he wakes up and i hope it is soon cant wait until u have ur next chapter up! its really good!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 16:54 CST
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I have finally cought up! Yay for me! Ahem, anyway, I cannot wait for chapter 22. I wonder if the eclipse will to anything...? Ah well, I guess I will have to wait and find out!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 11:22 CST
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Sessho should really be there. Granted, they never got along well, but they are still brothers. And after all, he already showed up once. Who's to say he hasn't been keeping an eye on the situation from the beginning? Hell, given what a perfectionist he is, I wouldn't put it past him to have looked in on Inuyasha since the day he was reborn. Via Shippo, that is. Shippo already mentioned that he had been in contact with Sesshomaru. Just don't hook him up with Kagura. Bleegh! That's a disturbing thought. And Kouga ... well, not my favorite guy, but he's not bad, just have him bring Ayame with him. Someone needs to keep him in line, with Inuyasha down. Maybe the two tag-a-longs too. I'm sure Ginta and Hakkaku would love to see Kagome-neesan! And I think Dave would get along famously with Sessho-kun. Sesshomaru may be closed-off, but so is dave, although Dave is much more the protective big brother type. With a little bit of practice on Dave's part, they'd be mirror images, personality wise. Heh, that's all I can think of right now Penguine! Hope it gives you some ideas. TY for updating!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 21:58 CST
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Oh my, it seems that I have not reviewed for quite some time. It also seems that my tone has changed, too, since my first review of your story. I stumbled upon this story a while ago and started to read. Now, I suddenly remember reading this story even though it has been so long. Anyway, I am trying to catch up with your new chapters and it seems I have only reached chapter 8! I will try harder to catch up! -Tsuki
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