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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:51 CST
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OH I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! WHEN WILL INUYASHA FINALLY WAKE UP?? ^_^
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Title: Wake Me Up Inside
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Definitely worth putting on my author alert list!! I can't wait for another chapter!! Please hurry or I will send my evil army to harass you till you update!!!!!
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Title: You Are One Amazing Author!
Reviewed By: Blue Angel Nemisis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is really cool, I like how you change the view point, not just have it coming from one charactor. I found that you have very few spelling/grammar mistakes which is really refreshing. I can't believe how many authors have such bad diction! This is the first Inu fic that I've read that actually deals with whats going on with the Inu Yasha from Kagome's time. I really liked how you had people who actually would be Inu's friends. This is a really cool fic and I hope that you have had fun writing it. Thats all for now and, yes, I will do the oh so overly used line, please, please, please, please update soon!! Oh, yeah! Your chapters are so not too long, besides it's better to be too long than to be too short!
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Title: CHOCOLATE!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!I have been into the chocolate*Slaps hand* Bad HanyouBabe!!!Bad!!!I'm not supposed to eat lots of choclate cuz I get really hyper LOL....Anyway's I'm gonna smack the charries if they don't hurry up with the story so InuYasha can wake up!!!!Damn them!!!WAKEY WAKEY INU!!! IT'S TIME TO LIVE AGAIN!!!J/K Anywayz i'm dieing and absolutely positively NEED your story!!!!CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jem46 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think your chapters are getting too long at all really. Its better than them being really short like some authors like to do *death glares at them* I really do love this story though. Its so cute and I really love Zach, Dave and Keito. I'll have their babies ^_^;; Um... yeah >.> Keep writting...
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Reviewed By: BK On: December 12, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another great chapter. I just wanted to let you know I this is a great story and I think you have a lot of talent. I have to say this story is an original to me. I have read quite a few fanfics and this is the first one dealing with Inuyasha in such a state. Thanks for the reply to my review, I am glad to see you are dedicated to this fanfic. Keep up the good work. I will be watching for updates in the future. Hope you have a safe and happy holiday season.
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this chapter, especially now that everyone is starting to figure out about Inuyasha and Kagome's past. And is it me or does Dave act sort of like Sesshoumaru? I know your character isn't based on his reincarnation because you said the three stooges aren't anyone from Inuyasha's past. but the two act alike in so many ways, it's weird. but yeah, can't wait for the next chapter it's getting soooo good! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Inu_4_Eva On: December 12, 2004 13:49 CST
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BTW, I agree with lonewolfcries, I thought Dave was going to be like a Sesshomaru...but Sessh isn't so foul mouthed and he isn't relaed to Inuyasha....but it did seem like it...older that Inuyasha and they being alike...its like, he is half Sessh or something...I even thought Sherry was Rin at first but Shiori is an excellent decision...plus when I read that part thats the episode they were giving...freaky your ego must be so inflated by my complements, gomen! Update soon! Arigato!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli so call me Inu_4_eva if ya want!) On: December 12, 2004 13:42 CST
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Dude....that is sooo not fair...I just started reading this story yesterday and immediatllly got addicted. Off course it was 3:40 or something in the morning so I didn't finish in one day...Oh! Before I forget, when you put the part when Kag talks about Kikyo, it was 550 years ago, cause thats when she died......I got so disapointed when I was going to click for the next chapter, only to realize that was the last chapter....Sooo that means you must update! I am keeping this in my mind. Saved. Stored. Never gonna forget.
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Reviewed By: Lonewolfcries [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:32 CST
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Excellent Story so far. Looking forward to your next installment. One question, are we sure Yao/Inuyasha/Romeo doesn't recognize the "stooges" from before. 'Cause Dave reminds me alot of Sesshoumaru. Keep up your wonderful work, Merry Christmas, ~Lonewolf
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:35 CST
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must voice the evilness of MM.org I mean when I try to review they log me out! anyways good chapter. Although Kagome needs to learn to make people wait! geez it was 24 hrs, less than that, before she was supposed to tell her story and she spills the beans! I keep on wanting to beg you to have Inu-Yasha wake up but I know that the wake up will be better if I wait. Also I can't decide if I want Inu-yasha to wake up with everyone there, only Kagome, no one, or without Kagome. Although I'm certain I don't like the last two. Can't wait to see if Kagome does a repeat of wed. and thu. :) ~Na
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Reviewed By: Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 15:48 CST
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UPDATE, UPDATE! I can't wait to read more of your story. And please - let him wake up soon... Regards, Luna
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Title: A fan!
Reviewed By: Enorema On: December 07, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN YOU"LL EVER KNOW!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON, OKAY?
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Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:10 CST
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please update soon, ive read this fanfic twice since you updated and i really wanna know about both marks date with beth, and exactley what sherry says to kagome in the car!
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Reviewed By: Raina1 On: December 04, 2004 23:51 CST
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I waited until I had finished the entire story up to the point where you left off to review, as my par usual. I have to say this is amazing. I usually don't like these kinds of stories that take the characters out of the context of the show but you've managed to transcend that with this story. Each character is pitch-perfect and it's hard not to chuckle at the Beth/Mark antics - they definitely are Sango and Miroku! Your development of each character is realistic and everyone has so much depth it's incredible! As a writer myself, I expect a LOT from both original and even fanfiction. You've surpassed my expectations by a milestone and I hope you'll continue this story up until its end. I'm eager to see what other reincarnated characters will come into the fray next! Will Sesshomaru still be Inuyasha's brother even in this present time? While I was reading this story I got this funny image of them going to Yue's family's house and a little girl that looks exactly like Rin opens the door, takes one look at them and yells at the top of her lungs: "DADDY!" And guess who's her daddy...LOL. Just fooling. Keep writing -- I look forward to the next part! I also hope to see your name on the bestseller list someday!
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