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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:25 PDT
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I wanted to write a long review. I did. But I'm so shocked and impressed and amazed by this story. Everyone is in character (Well, maybe Kagome might be a little questionable, but I've always found her to be so basic and almost bland. Like an everywoman in which to paint a picture upon) and it's entirely beleivable. As for the so-called meaningless sex, I don't feel that it's meaningless at all. Perhaps because Kagome's relationship with Sessho-Maru reminded me of a similar situation in my life. Maybe the sex was not rooted intirely in love, but that doesn't make it meaningless. Very little in this world is completely meaningless. Argh. Okay, no more babbling. In short...or long, this has been one of the best Inu-Yasha stories I've ever read and I'm glad that I opened my mind enough to expereince it.
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Reviewed By: twiknham On: May 16, 2005 00:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was excellent. I've stayed up way too late tonight reading it. Thank you for writing it. I like the very realistic manner in which they made their paths. -TK
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!! (Wiping away tears). I am not even sure you still read your reviews for this story, but I had to write one after reading such an incredible work of art. I loved this story; it is one of the best I have read. I have only cried at one other story…The Lucky Ones. You have such a gift and in turn share your gift with us. Your talents take the reader on the emotional rollercoaster. I started crying when Inuyasha makes his wish and Kagome gets sent back to her time and did not stop until the end! Amazing, I truly felt everything that Kagome went through. HA, I even felt depressed and got out some chocolate when Kagome was so depressed. Anyway, I wanted to share with you how much I enjoyed your story and give you some props! I am also a fan of Tales from the House of the Moon and have enjoyed that ride as well. I should not be surprised that your other works are as incredible! Thanks for such a great story!!
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Title: jackia
Reviewed By: Jackia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Sesshoumaru & Kagome FF. I read it while listenning to "What happens tomorrow" by Duran Duran, you should try it...Great FF!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu2 On: April 13, 2005 16:52 PDT
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I thought I'd just stop by (again) and let you know I have thoroughly enjoyed the beautiful and engaging way you write a story. Those of use who read are slowly tugged into the characters' lives and don't want to leave for fear it isn't real, only to know fundamentally that it is. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to whatever you write next.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: falconswing14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 13:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, I love your writing style. It is both simple and complex, all at the same time (if that's possible), and gets the point accross without being either overly flowery or blunt. Your spelling and grammar were as close to perfect as anyone's, with only a few typos that I could find. The story was one I had never read or imagined before, and I was left constantly craving more. I enjoyed it immensely, and hope to read more from you in the future. Congratulations on a wonderful fanfiction!
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Title: Fugue
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 15:18 PST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was beautiful. It was weird, actually feeling what Kagome felt because her emotions were so strong. The ending had me in tears though, it was bitter-sweet but the story was still very touching. I've never read a story like this on any site, especially one that actually made me cry. The parts when Kagome was sinking into her depression was tough to read but that's what made the story so excellent, because it seemed so real. And also finding out that Sesshoumaru was basically the last youkai was also hard to read. I can't wait to read more of your fics, especially if they are as touching as this one.
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Reviewed By: Shavaineth On: March 16, 2005 16:50 PST
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Well that was an achingly depressing story. So much unresolved pain... quite a well written story actually. I personally could have done without the lemony stuff but it was so interesting when I started it over on the fanfiction site I just had to come see the rest. Nice story.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Lady On: February 28, 2005 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaarrrrgggghhhhh!!!!!! holy crap that was amazing! normally i'm not a big sesshomaru and kagome fan, but oh golly gee whizzzz! i don't know how many hours it took me to read that whole story, but it was worth it. i loved your sesshomaru--so reserved and just fantastic. i loved your idea about memories. recalling the first part but nothing else. that just rings so true. i'm a wussy romantic at heart so i am a little disappointed at this ending--but i know had you done it any other way, you would have compromised the story, which would not have been good. so the bitter sweet ending will have to do. *sigh* i did enjoy it though. kudos to you.
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Title: Fuque
Reviewed By: sesshy's_jaded_samuri On: February 24, 2005 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was extremely well written...very enthralling...completely different from 90% of the other InuYasha fanfics that I have read. in short...I LOVE IT...GREAT JOB...ONE OF THE BEST ON THE SITE.
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer On: February 23, 2005 08:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I look forward to reading your other stories. Peace.
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: February 19, 2005 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic, however, why leave us all in the dark where Sess was in chapter 3???? I couldn't have been that forgiving, im sorry! That was truely mean to make Kagome believe many of the things she believed because of Sess. Yet, where would this story be without all the different plots and reasons!!
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Reviewed By: LoriUWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 22:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In this fanfic of yours i have found a new meaning to eternal love, and i thank you for it. This fic of yours as a meaning all its own, and i wish that our lives could be like Kagome's and Sesshomaru's. It is always a mystery as to what true love felt like, and in my opinion, i think Kagome has found it in your Fanfic.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 12:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that your writing is absolutely beautiful and compelling. The characters are mastered well in their protrayal, and you have a wonderful sense of drama and meloncholy throughout your entire story. I thoroughly enjoy reading it, and I see precious little mature, well written stories out there, especially believable Kagome and Sesshoumaru stories, and I'm ever so glad I read yours. Keep up the good work. Blessed be.
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