| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gracie-poo On: February 02, 2005 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I love this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love Shiro especially. He's such a doll. I wanna hug and kiss him awww. And I love how great and loving a father Inuyasha is. *sigh*. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. You left off on a cliffy!!!! It's such a great fanfic. It just melts my heart! awww..... Keep up the awesome work! Gracie-poo
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: February 01, 2005 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic since the begining and it just keeps getting better everytime. I am seriously dieing to read the next chapter I have, no must know what happens. By the way off the subject are you going to put Ayame in this story to? It is not a demand or request just a question. Waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: WHY DO THEY TORTURE THEMSELVES????
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: February 01, 2005 03:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this on FF.net actually, but was brousing here and found you not only added this FABULOUS fic to mediaminer, but you UPDATED!! I love this story so much! It can't get more complicated between those two, but you do such a good job of feeding their chemistry and love that I'm glad I'm along for the ride. Ahh, what a effervescent story. I can't wait to read more!!!
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Title: WHY DO THEY TORTURE THEMSELVES????
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: February 01, 2005 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this on FF.net actually, but was brousing here and found you not only added this FABULOUS fic to mediaminer, but you UPDATED!! I love this story so much! It can't get more complicated between those two, but you do such a good job of feeding their chemistry and love that I'm glad I'm along for the ride. Ahh, what a effervescent story. I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 01:00 EST
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Thank god for Sango! Kagome has been driving me batty in the last few chapters! Okay...Kagome knows that Inuyasha is rude, overbearing, and painfully insecure about some issues. But she's fallen in love with him anyway. So why does she keep rubbing the Kouga issue in Inuyasha's face? I understand that she's frustrated by his unwillingness to talk about such a sore subject -but did she really think that it would be a smart idea to shove Kouga's positive attributes down Inuyasha's throat? To taunt him by saying that Kouga would listen to her and treat her better? Argh! Seriously, if Kagome was a real girl I would've shaken her til she became dizzy! She basically kicked Inuyasha - the man she supposedly loves - when he was already down. And please don't get me wrong...I'm not an anti-Kagome person; I'm an obsessive Inu-Kag fan...and I certainly agree that Inuyasha in your story is far from perfect. But I think that this fight is entirely her own making. If you truly love someone, you can't expect them to change for you... they should want to do it for you on their own. And Inuyasha is slowly doing that... but I really don't see Kagome sacrificing much of herself for Inuyasha -she's too hell bent on changing *him*. Argh...she's annoying me! Take this as a major compliment...your writing and characterization just got a HUGE reaction out of me. This review is in no way a flame to you as an author..it's just my gut reaction to Kagome's actions....
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 18:52 EST
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Hey its me again Randi I love this story I format and look at what I found 2 wonderful updates I am officially adding you to my favorites I love it take your time Luv Ya ~Randi~
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:53 EST
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*sigh*Inu-Yasha the idiot.../Rin:And Kouga...
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: January 29, 2005 15:00 EST
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Update Soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (not logged in) On: January 29, 2005 04:50 EST
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I simply love this faic. You put everything down so good, it's like a movie ... only reading it haha ^^ really it's so good. I was wiggeling in my chair when inuyasha was trying to ask kagome things at dinner and finding a good moment to give the ring .... and then kagome gets a blabber mouth inu yasha starts yelling and then it just makes me wanna trow something at inu's head! so i must know how this ends?! update soon, you gotta or i'll personal drag you behind your computer and force ya! still love ya though :P ~ K!$$ and love ~ Little_Tennyo
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: January 28, 2005 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but it needs to be updated faster and or finished so please do both thanks
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Reviewed By: queenserena(Hi there!) On: January 19, 2005 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*has slinked away from her muse and homework*Man, I leave for...2 days...?And I came back to see wonderful updates! I read this while folding paper for my mom, it'll be deformed, but hey, it was worth it!
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Title: mary.seay@mac.com
Reviewed By: swasdiva On: January 18, 2005 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lord, I LOVE this story! It's such a fresh romance, with plenty of not-so-torturous angst!!! This is better than many best-selling paperbacks I've read recently; I can't WAIT for more updates!!!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: January 18, 2005 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so the coma was too much. Thank god you had kagome tell Kouga that she only liked him as a friend and nothing more. The story is still the best i've read keep on going. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: fred is red On: January 15, 2005 04:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story so much i thought it was the best one i ever read.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 19:17 EST
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God I luv that kid! Please Update Soon!! But kill off Kouga!! Let that bastard die or at least let Kagome see him for what he really is!! ^_^ UPDATE SOON!!
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