| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: I neeeddd more....
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TemptingTemptation....*cough...hack...gasp* Need to read...more of this story...*pant...cough* Can't live without an update....*wheeze...spasm...hack* Please....please...UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!! ^__^ I loved this one, but then again I love all your stories but this one, you simply HAVE to update, I'm dying here, like a hentai junkie....Surviving only with your masterful work!!! Can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Riven Liether [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god. Most tantalizing fic ever. PLEASE continue, or I might go crazy, lol.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 10:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
*smirks*
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Reviewed By: Maru-san On: August 14, 2005 11:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE update this fic. You don't know what you're doing to us!! I like how you portray both Bulma and Vegeta and the story itself is just ... HOT ;) Anyway, please don't make us wait much longer ^_^
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: chica-chan On: August 02, 2005 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this!!! plz write some more, this story is my new addiction aside from Vegie. Gosh i just want to eat him like pie...im so fat..anyways you rock!! peace out-chica
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Title: atu
Reviewed By: atiqa On: July 16, 2005 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD! its the coolest fic. its so sweet i love it. please finish it soon im dying for the next chapter. keep on writing like that and good-luck.
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 14:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is excellent! I hope this is not the last chapter?
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Title: ch 3
Reviewed By: Kichisama On: July 03, 2005 13:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! that's awesome to see Vegeta put her in her place! you go boy!
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Title: sorri
Reviewed By: SYSAIYAN On: June 29, 2005 13:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I MEAN UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!
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Title: OH COME ON
Reviewed By: sysaiyan On: June 29, 2005 13:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
REVIW ALREADY
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: sysaiayn On: June 27, 2005 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic its brillient oh please continue please dont ley that be the end
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Title: update!!!
Reviewed By: pagliaccia On: June 23, 2005 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could you PLEASE update soon!!! I've been waiting for a new chapter please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat On: June 01, 2005 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a fan of this since the beginning and I truly hope you haven't given up on this story. Your interpretation is so amazing and orignal that I find myself checking everyday to see if you've updated yet. It's so hard to find new B/V fics that isn't cliched or too out of character*, not to mention the HOTNESS! Keep up the good work. (*When I say too out of character I mean that pretty much all fics are out of character because it was never in the show. It is not a reflection of the writing talent/ability of you, or anyone else for that matter.)
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Title: definately hot.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: May 18, 2005 18:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Is it hot in here ot is it me? Definately hot and Sultry, makes you want to jump into an ice-cold shower. Bulma, damn what a lucky girl. I'd would have loved to watch that too. ^_~ Bura
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Lots of lemon good. Interpretation original.
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