| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon. ^_^
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: bohemian lady On: May 06, 2005 14:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing to this. it is perhaps one of the best erotica stories of passion and dominance i have read.
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Title: UPdate!
Reviewed By: Lillian Rose On: May 02, 2005 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I really can't wait till you update. Please do it soon. I keep checking everyday!!! Much love, Lillian Rose
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Title: Your Killing Me!
Reviewed By: Fivefivewbrowneyes On: April 26, 2005 05:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update this fic! it's killing me to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Cloe On: March 31, 2005 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dang gurl u just gotta - GOTTA - update! i cant wait any longer! omg, all this waiting is killin meeh!!!
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Title: OMGoodness
Reviewed By: PurrfectMissM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGoodness i LOVED every single part of this story!!!! wow, i've found another favorite! i'm a HUGE fan of your work and just keep up the great writing b/c i never get tired of reading it! whew this was definitely a steamy lemony goodness one too. just hats off to you!
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Reviewed By: 3cee On: March 19, 2005 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off let me thank you for one hell of a story.like u keep veg the basterd he can be :) but bul is holding her own. cant waite to see what happen when she gets home(that is where she need to be right) im sure veg has a gift waiteing for her!!lol gota say im really enjoying the stroy for a minute i though u gave up on it "sad" glad u didnt. till next chppe
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: March 18, 2005 14:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! ^^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 22:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take back the comment I posted on your "Dark Desires" reguarding this theme being overdone. I don't know how you do it. It's the same story, but you bend it and twist it to your own specifications to the point where it seems completely new all over again. Your writing style is utterly amazing. You are a gifted author and I hope to see more additions to your collection of stories very soon.
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Title: WOW.....AGAIN!!
Reviewed By: Iceblueangel On: March 15, 2005 14:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before, this is one of the best i've read. you really have a talent for writing. keep it up and update soon!
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Reviewed By: tammyzora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 00:36 PST
Comment/Review:
Font Red"...let me show you what heaven looks like to mortal eyes." WOW!! What a great line! My mouth dropped. You continue to amaze me.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 09:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I mean WOW!!! This fic is fantastic; utterly stunning. I'm glad I found this fic, and you've just found yourself a loyal fan. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: J On: March 12, 2005 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yessss!
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Title: ssssssppplaaaasshhhh.....
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 04:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear gods! is it sizzling hot in here, or is it just me?!?! You are one talented writer, I am officially addicted and I need my medication: another update!!!!! Need update...cough...gotta have my updaattee...cough, gasp choke.... Awesome chapter!!! I loved it, it was so trilling, and erotic, I'm still panting! I love this story!!!! Oh yeah, congrats on the baby!!!!!!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 01:10 PST
Comment/Review:
You have to stop this you know!! *Cries* Here I am, a dyed-in-the-wool Bardock lover, thinking myself impervious to the charms of other Saiyans - and you keep making me think improper thoughts about Vegeta!! Now, I'm not averse to casting my net wider occasionally, but only as far as Turles and Goku - at least I could pretend they were Bardock if the lights were dim enough! But nooooo - you and your stories go and stir the ghost of my Vegeta lust... :( Gotta hand it to you though... ain't no one can do sexual tension like you can! *applauds*
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