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"Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ]
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 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 10, 2005 18:54 PST
Comment/Review:
I don't see how you can do it. The sexual tension doesn't QUIT in this story! No pressure but simply dyyyyyyying for more here. I liked the glimpse of Vegeta knowing how one rumor would mean death on Frieza's ship, how he understood the importance of keeping up appearances! Is the guy starting to think outside himself? Is he?
 Title: "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 10, 2005 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
wow yes wow yes wow yes loved it loved it loved it...more more more more more...... update soon please....maria
 Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko  On: March 10, 2005 17:40 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ooohhhh! smokey!
 Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Iceblueangel  On: March 08, 2005 12:47 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was the best fic i have ever read! Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next!
 Reviewed By: bvgirl  On: February 12, 2005 21:28 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. I love how you put together Vegetas character and Blumas too. The plot is great and you got to love those master slave fics. But yours has got to be the best I have ever read. Update soon so I can see if Bulma obeys Vegeta and comes home or is there another lesson in store. LOl :) Keep update your other stories as well. I a huge fan. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2005 20:36 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is the best story out there. plz hurry up and update soon. :)
 Title: how good u are
Reviewed By: j  On: January 21, 2005 15:08 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was like one of the best Vegeta and Bulma fanfictions that i have read its really good. Keep upp the good work.
 Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2005 22:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter
 Reviewed By: yeah!  On: January 12, 2005 19:24 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this has got to be the hottest, juciest, most scrumptious VB fanfic i've EVER read! damn. hope u update real soon cuz im about to Xplode here! I just had to give u 10 outa 10 for it
 Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 28, 2004 06:52 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ya know, I'm really starting to get annoyed with Bulma. Geez, what more does she want? He asked nicely... OK, she's stronger than I could ever be! Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2004 17:47 PST
Comment/Review:
Mm.org wouldn't let me review for days and days and now I've forgotten what I was going to say so *sighs* in the spirit of duty to author feedback, I just HAD to read this chapter again.... Man, what a man. That's all I have to say. I love how you write Vegeta!
 Title: Damn
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 17:42 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
damn dude.......nice fic...EXCELLENT FIC, though i think i'm the only guy who's actually reviewed it... the rest seem like vegeta girls....(nods)
 Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 07:35 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
By gods if she will not be his little bed slave I will! What is wrong with her! *sigh puff* I need a very cold shower now. Oh yes, cold shower......**walks off muttering about sexy flame haired saiyans, bitchy hardheaded blue hair women and her lack of the fomer**
 Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2004 19:41 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you know i got to give it to bulma she is a very strong woman,because i don't think that i would've lasted that long without him..and for him to ask her to come home i mean come on bulma where is your BRains at. oh we waited a long time for this chapter and i just want to smack her...alright thats it just give vegeta my e-amil and send him to me...i'll take care of him for now on.....great chapter once again...update soon..and i hope that everything is well with your pg...merry christmas and a very happy new year...maria
 Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2004 19:30 PST
Comment/Review:
MERRY CHRISTMAS! What a lovely update. Man, what a man. .........
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