| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 19:30 PST
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MERRY CHRISTMAS! What a lovely update. Man, what a man. .........
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Reviewed By: jasdhasjkdhlaskhd On: December 13, 2004 16:49 PST
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pls update. its been like a month already
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Title: ahgagagaga
Reviewed By: pisquenta On: December 11, 2004 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best Vegeta/Bulma fic I've ever read!!! OMG!! Thnsk you for writing it!! Please go on before I explode!
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Reviewed By: Lillian Rose On: December 03, 2004 03:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fanfic is awsome. I really hope that you update soon. I can't get enough!
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:10 PST
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Finally! An update!!! I've been waiting for your next chapter for so long now! This chapter was a bit sad about the way Bulma was torn into two. I want to know what Vegeta thinkS!!!! ::pouts cutey:: Keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 22, 2004 16:10 PST
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If Bulma's not some bitch-in-heat then she's gonna have to stop all that masturbating or she'll end up with "wanker's cramp" (it's an aussie term).
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: November 20, 2004 14:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa! that was..hmm..yummy. poor bulma tho, damn he's harsh
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: November 20, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how, but this thing just keep getting hotter. I feel bad for Bulma, but the poor girl is gonna have to make a choice between her pride and her heart.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: November 16, 2004 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Title: dear gods!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my good lord! I swear if I were standing right now my knees would be shaking, what a sexy chapter! It just keep getting better and better, I just love the thrill of it! Can't wait for chapter six! ^__^ love, Blue Dragon
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. *tongue hangs out* That is some emotional intensity there. So, the SOB really *is* lonely, isn't he? Ok, you now have my permission to throw him down, chain him up, and do whatever you want to him. He's been a very very very BAD boy. *grin*
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 08:49 PST
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Bulma's not the only one with completion issues! very nicely done, indeed! It's a no-brainer choice for me, of course, but I wonder if Bulma will make the sacrifice so easily? she's got her pride too . . . . Pride or Vegeta? Pride or Vegeta? Like I said, it's a no-brainer!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 13, 2004 18:12 PST
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This is so getting more interesting, and that's what Bulma gets for trying to do a "Paris Hilton" on Vegeta and think he'll be like every other male on the planet.
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 13, 2004 17:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit if she touches herself she should just cut her hands off.i know i would..i give anything to be in her spot now!!!!!you did it again CLAPS another great chapter...how are you feeling with the PG..how everything is well...update soon..maria i need another shower..lol
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Reviewed By: Allison On: November 13, 2004 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muh! I love it! Write more, reeeeeeaaaaaalllllyyyyyy soon :) Especially loved that last chapter.
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