| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 15:50 PST
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**jumps up and down** I'll be his slave!! OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH please please please update soon! I HAVE to know what happens. Your fic.s are some of the very best I have ever read! I need a very very cold shower now. Vegeta is such a Dom! **shutters** Please more!
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Reviewed By: saiyan_baybee200260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 18:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ WRITE MORE.......THAT WAS COOL....VEGETA IS SO DEMANDING....AWESOME STORY
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 02:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl you get 10 all across the board. That story was so fucking hot i almost came myself. Man you have to keep this up.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 07:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just when I think your stories can't get any better, they do. Another hot, fantastic fic about the passion of our favorite couple. Thank you for setting the B/V bar so high.
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Reviewed By: kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good and I quote:'mindless' hentai. Keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 13:07 PDT
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Totally excellent! The premise is delicious and I can't wait until these two realize there's more going on here than sex---not that there's anything wrong with that! *wink* Big thumbs up!
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Title: OMG FINALLY!
Reviewed By: JEANNA On: October 10, 2004 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES YES YES!!!! LEMONY GOODNESS!!!! I LOVE YA! THANK U SO MUCH!!!!!!!! DUDE THAT WAS JUST GREEEEEEEATTTTTTT! THAT WAS JUST >>>JUST!!!!!!!!....SO GOOD!!!!! *HUGS*! DAMN THAT WAS INTENSE I NEED A SHOWER! LOL KEEP THOSE CHAPIES COMING IM DYING FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!! ALREADY!
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Title: *sulks*
Reviewed By: Jealous! On: October 10, 2004 09:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you're good! aarggg!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 09, 2004 20:20 PDT
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It's about bloody time that Vegeta and those girls talking in the girls' toilets put Bulma in her place!!! Vegeta being homeless wasn't done out of choice but unforseen circumstance so Bulma has not right to hold that against him - especially since Capsule Corporation is a hand-me-down company successfuly built by her father. The saying that greed and riches is self-idolatry is so true, especially in Bulma's case, cause she looks as if she can wait to disappear up her own arse. Stiff shit that she has a famous name and is successful, she's gotta learn to live life on the same level as her employees.
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have written one of the hottest (if not the best) lemon I have ever read!!! Definitely on my Top 10 List. You did a good job showing both Vegeta's and Bulma's POV of their power struggle and need for control. The bathroom scene was great. I'm glad Bulma had someone stick up for her... and the girl was right; sometimes it is more pleasurable being on the bottom. :-) This is the Vegeta of my fantasies.
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 09, 2004 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.......just update....maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG. You've done it. You've won the all-time lemon crown. This is a story about power, not just about sex. It's simplified the B/V get-together into a pure contest. In a way, that's what DBZ was so much about--competition and subjugation. Of course that's not the whole story, but here, we have a pure hot dynamic between two extremely powerful people, and that's the B/V relationship at its core--or what it had to have been at the very start. I still believe in Mirai's line "My father was lonely" and in a more vulnerable Vegeta, but geez Louise do I love spending time with YOUR Vegeta!!!!!!
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: intelXx On: October 05, 2004 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just WOW! This is great. You write Vegeta's personality very well. I mean, come on, he was the Dark Prince, destroyer of whole civilizations. I was getting tired of the softly-portraited Vegeta that other author's keep making him. Yuck! Honestly, you bring Vegeta to live. Bring me more, I want more.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 13:53 PDT
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You've ruined me for the day! My husband won't be home for HOURS! You make hentai an art, really. And this is serious stuff, my eyeballs are burned! Now, how will Bulma tease Vegeta beyond this wall he's erected (no pun intended, natch!)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 08:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And it ain't over!! I love how this story is more than a pure hentai fest where you can stick in any characters and still make it work. This story is so OBVIOUSLY Bulma and Vegeta. Vegeta was so himself in this third chapter. And we have a real tension that's more than sexual....and.... oh dammit, this is the sexiest story I've ever read.
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