| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: pisq On: January 18, 2006 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness Gracious! Talk about intense! Congratulations! That was the perfect ending to that story!
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Reviewed By: EleneK *Not Logged in* On: January 14, 2006 22:51 PST
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I just finished reading the whole thing so I'll make this short. Holy Cow!!! I'm going to take a cold shower now.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:49 PST
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*opens mouth to speak - but nothing comes out* ... ... ... *vague arm gestures and hand waving to try and convey what she means* ... ... ... *moans* ohhhhhhhhmyyyyGohhhhhd *Snags Bardock to act out fic*
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Reviewed By: br0keback On: January 14, 2006 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a wonderful way to end this story!!! god im such a sucker for romantic displays of affection!! he held her hand!! how sweet!! great story!!! and yay! it is completed!! great job!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 03:48 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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totally hot, yet again!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so beautiful...in a strange kind of distorted way that is so beautiful.
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Reviewed By: sysaiayn On: January 12, 2006 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i written a review before asking you to update and im wondering when are you i mean you cant jus end it at chapter seven when bulma left go to a certain someone so please update soon please
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: in limbo On: January 12, 2006 10:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best. I am amazed at how great of a writer of erotica you are. I was also anxious for an ending to this story; however, the wait was worth it. Every word you chose was perfect to give the meaning of the situation. Successfully you have created a masterpiece of wording and sensual-not to mention sexual-pleasure. A delicious story. Congratulations.
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Title: ABOUT TIME
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 08:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Finally, some deliciousness from you! I nearly scream every time I see that you have updated any of your VB stories! Please, write some more of anything! That was freaking excellent!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: January 12, 2006 07:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another outstanding piece of work. Possesive and wickedly decadent. You amaze me each time you write something new or update any of your wonderful stories. Not to mention you are the ultimate fangoddess of the lemons...*chuckles*
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 11, 2006 19:44 PST
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now that was awesome... You did a beautiful job... All I can say is Wow!!!!
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Title: Sinfully Delicious
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: January 11, 2006 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely incredible. I am so happy that you updated this fic. I've been hoping for it to be updated for the longest time. It just couldn't be left with the couple at odds with each other. And this chapter was so perfectly done. hmm.. The ultimate sexiness of Vegeta, and his possessiveness. It's so sinfully delicious. "You're mine," he whispers. "Yes. I am yours" Stunning. I can't wait to see what you will write next. Thank you! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Hot and Sexy!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I'm so glad you finished it. I think you did an excellent job showing both points of view, and kept true to their characters. I found myself holding my breath at times, and smiling wickedly at others. "Heaven isn't white, fluffy clouds and pink cherry blossoms blowing in the breeze. Its lips and teeth. Wet kisses and hot breath." Yes, Yes, Yes! Oops, I mean I couldn't agree more. And that whole "You are MINE" thing makes my heart flutter every time... so deliciously possessive! What an ending. I think I'll go read it again. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl (not logged in!) On: December 04, 2005 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the BEST B/V story out here! I feel Bulma's determination and her pain... I understand her not allowing her self to let go with Vegeta, but he is to the point to pleading with her. That line you used, '...what I gave you only a fraction of my power...' that was truly deep and sexy! Hell, I would have said yet! Please update soon! Your fans are waiting...
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
Reviewed By: pooka =) On: November 26, 2005 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AIYAHH! TemptingTemptation! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE MASTER OF DESIRE! I think I'm going to die if you don't, MORE FREQUENT UPDATES! I've been waiting almost forever for you to update, btw I'm loving your other stories =) BUT UPDATE THIS ONE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! *gets on her knees & pouts*
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