| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: SO HOT !!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Violet62. On: August 11, 2010 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In this fic Bulma is such a little hot slut !I have always believed it is lust that makes B&V get together. Beautiful work ! Keep going , I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics !
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Reviewed By: lumpy space princess On: June 29, 2010 06:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lover this story I can't stop reading it please write a sequel a book or something. The whole dom/sub thing is way more fascinating than I thought good work.
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Reviewed By: emerald2309 On: March 08, 2010 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely! Exhilarating! Fxckin Fantastic! =] This read was so intense. . . Also, I've noted on many of your stories you tend to mix-up the variations of "to." You use "too" sometimes when it should be with only one "o". Just stating. =] Anyways, it's a small mistake compared to the genius of your story ideas and portrayal! MWAH. Bravo. Lovely. && ever sexy. *Continues to read more Fanfics by the lovely Temptress*
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Title: I LOVE YOU REALLY
Reviewed By: Ellz On: December 06, 2009 10:04 PST
Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AMAZING.This story really plays into our kinks & Vegeta just being him, sexy, dominant. I ADORE YOU
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Title: GASP
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 12:13 PST
Comment/Review:
OH GOD, this was so good it's ridiculous. You are MASTER of smut and I BOW down you and only you! Caprice
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Reviewed By: lois On: September 26, 2007 14:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>Pointless lemon with meaningless plot. Oh yah.<
i was scared that it would be too easy and boring but you wrote an awesome story!!! Just FANTASTIC! :-)))))))
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Reviewed By: DbzTeske On: September 23, 2007 10:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a brilliant story!! loved reading it!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dominions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go! That was fantastic!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dominions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go! That was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: Britt-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 10:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
XD wow you're such a great writer!!! I write stories too, but thye're all rated teen, i've read some of your Inuyasha fics too, keep up the great work!! ^_^ -Britt
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: March 22, 2006 22:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's gotta be one of the BEST V/B stories i've EVER read, no joke. man, u're the SHIT! that was a really good one. Wow...
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: March 22, 2006 22:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's gotta be one of the BEST V/B stories i've EVER read, no joke. man, u're the SHIT! that was a really good one. Wow...
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 08, 2006 15:24 PST
Comment/Review:
Maybe you should do a sequel,to show how much of Vegeta's influence has changed Bulma for the better.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:02 PST
Comment/Review:
What a great ending! They understood each other so well, it was so harmonious. Thanks for finishing this one--it was definitely worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 28, 2006 00:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic =) a sequel would be interesting ~.^
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