| "A House Divided" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:39 EST
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whooo. you're certainly going for depth with this one, aren't you? brava! it's nice to find a story so well put together.
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Title: A House Divided
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 20:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: This is an awesome story! I hope you start writing again. I have read on Lucient's site that you really don't write anymore and that kinda made me sad. I hope you start writing again and finish this story. Please take care of you!
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Title: Nice beginning
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 02:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice beginning to a whole new tale. I sense some 'issues' between Sesshomaru and Rin, and after all they went through to be together I hope that they can put aside old heartache and be happy together. It is horrible what the Christian's are doing to their race and I fear it is only just begun. I do hope that you continue this fic. It would be a shame to toss your ideas aside forever, leaving this story unfinished. All good stories deserve an ending.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 03:38 EDT
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I'm really hoping for an update by the end of this year. When you start a story off so well and the fact that it's a sequel to one of the best on the site it's hard for readers to believe it will be abandoned.
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Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:30 EDT
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I love your story. Please keep it up. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Momo (fsfreis@yahoo.com.br) On: April 19, 2005 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,have you been deleted again from that dammed FFNet? Those bastards really don't know how to keep a excellent writer like you there!>.> Well, you can also post your stories in: www.e-fiction.org. It's a excellent site and I am sure that would be great if you post your fictions there!:) And I am anxious for the chapter 5! Good luck for u!
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: April 10, 2005 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read "In a Different Light" but decided to post a review here instead. I have not ever read a Rin/Sessh fanfic before, but I was more than impressed by your story. You make sure to put enough details to make the reader seem as though they are in the story. You have enough lemons, but it is not porn without a plot. I do not think there was any spelling mistakes, which is a major plus for me. The characters are not OOC without a resonable cause. You even go so far as to do research to make the story more interesing. All in all you have serious talent in writing. As long as you continue to update, you can also continue to expect more or my reviews. And I do hope you update soon for the sake of my sanity. ^_^
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG your killing me here, ur my favorite writer on this and u havent updated since january!!!!!!! thats a long time for a big fan whos read all of ur stories to wait!!!!! cant wait for the new chapter ------Jennifer
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: February 12, 2005 20:26 EST
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yes, i know, im reviewing again. but pleaseseee update! you NEED to continue this story. what about sorano?? ugh. pretty please? update?
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 26, 2005 22:55 EST
Comment/Review:
this is great please update
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 21:33 EST
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OMG!! That was a wonderful chapter. I love how you tell us some things but then leave others out to be revealed at a later time. I love everything about the mating mark too. Just....I'm speechless! I can't wait for more. This was so awesome!!! You bring me into their world and I just don't want to leave! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! ^^ I liked it! Sesshomarus kids sound so cute! Much angustey stuf, but it was all good! I cant think of anything that would possibaley improve this storey in any way shape or form.
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Reviewed By: pinkdancinghippo On: December 02, 2004 23:25 EST
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Okay, so normally I am in love with your stories but I find my self with a big HUH? at the end of this chapter. I really have no idea what is going on. Did Rin die? Was it a dream or a vision or something? Is it one of those future tense with glimpses of the past sort of things? Or, perhaps I have forgotten how to read all together, eh? Anways, I hope I understand the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on still) On: November 26, 2004 12:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!!!! I'm not disappointed at all, it was very wel written as usual! And I can't wait to find out what happened Sess, Rin, and their daughter! Update soon please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 18:51 EST
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i love this chapter and how it gave a glimpse into their past. i like how you showed that they had a small problem...it's nice to know it's a realistic happy ending. but yeah, i'm confused by sorano. i can't wait for more so i can learn more about her and kohana. this is a great chapter and a great start of the sequel!!!! ^_^
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