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Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual....a little confusing but i'll take your word and wait to see what happens...but i have one question, is Rin and Sesshomaru still madly in love?? because from readiong it dosent seem like it? -----------------Jen cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: November 25, 2004 11:17 EST
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OMG!!!!! I had no idea you started writing again!!!!! I'm so upset with myself for missing the first few chapters!!!!! I can't read them right now, but I'm letting you know that I will be back!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 17:55 EST
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Sorry I hadn't reviewed sooner.Had some problems with the damned computer.Excuse my French.I really love the start of this story.It's excellent!
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Reviewed By: Dragoninuyokai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 21:24 EST
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AAAAA DAMN YOU! CONTINU SOON I BEG OF YOU I LOVE THE STOREY! It has great plot and a wonderfull styel! I wish you hadent left as a cliffe. I have some questions. 1) Who are Sess and Rins two kids? 2)Why did you focuse on the hawk hanyous? 3) Why were they in the snow? Thats it thank you and UPDATE SOON!
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Title: huzzah
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 22:31 EST
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i can't believe i didn't write a review earlier. shame on me. i've been scrolling through fan fics to recommend to a friend of mine, and of course i came to yours. and then i thought, wouldn't it be nice to write a nice review, because you've loved everything she's written (Things Never Meant to Be, Bitter Blood, The Girl, etc.) so i thinks to myself, i thinks, you should tell her this is good stuff too. and...maybe she'll update sooner. :) so, in conclusion: i love your approach to this fic, very adventursome. it holds great promise. can't wait for more. wow, this is a long review.
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Reviewed By: A Flower-sama On: October 21, 2004 06:50 EDT
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An update! Yes! I love how you tied in links to the past there, it was great! Now there's a new problem on the horizon, so I can't wait to see what kind of plot will unfold from this!
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Title: Me want read reviews!
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 22:49 EDT
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Reviewed By: Jasi On: October 19, 2004 16:56 EDT
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Oh. I left that other review before I knew there was a second chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jasi On: October 19, 2004 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I havent spoken to you in a while but my screename is Sum623 and we have talked a couple of times. As you know I am a huge fan of In a Different Light and I have recommended it to many of my friends. The first chapter of the sequel wasn't exactly what I anticipated. I also thought that you should have left the title the way it was before. As for the all those things that Rin has been saying while she is in labor...why did you make her do that? I think that is very ooc for her. I cant stand how people make it seem that all women in labor diss thier husbands. It doesn't work like that. And I was also dissapointed to hear that the next chapter is going to jump forward a couple of years. Every fanfic does that. I have only read one that hasn't and it was amazing. I think that fanfic authors skip detailing the whole raising thier infants stage because they dont know how to keep thier characters in character. But I know how amazing you are at that. All in all I think that it was an ok chapter. Just not what I thought it would be. If you ever get some time Instant Message me at Sum623 or email me at Sum623@aol.com.
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Title: jennifer_luvs_fluffy
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iam kinda confused......i know who the people are from in a different light....and reading Jolly Old St. Nicholas's review...it would seem that the girl who is dying is sesshomarus and rins daughter??? Well.....it was a good chapter and i can't wait for the other one.....just to read it because ur work is great and also to help me not be so confused:S:S:S I thought Rin and Sesshomaru would have strong pups?? and how old r they....and is their any more pups??? Meh...ill just wait and read.....i kinda like the suspence!! ----------------Jennifer
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Title: Zowie!
Reviewed By: Jolly Old St. Nicholas On: October 19, 2004 01:42 EDT
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My previous ratings still stand ^_^ So, we've finally met one of the twins, and she's mated to the hanyou son of the Lord of the Northern Lands. Not only that, but he seems to be rather slow-witted. Seeing as how Sorano spent the entire chapter unconscious, we didn't really get to see much of her. But, given the ending of the prologue and her choice in mate, I assume she was the one who kicked Sess. It was really imaginative, and Kiyoshi seems like a really sweet guy. I hope they both pull through . . .
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 00:29 EDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter!!! DON'T DIE!!! but yeah, this was a good chapter. i love how you ended it. it's evilicious ~_* i can't wait to see what happens with kiyoshi and sorano and maybe something about their past....
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Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 00:15 EDT
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So very happy to see a new chapter!!! I was a bit confused about what was going on for awhile but then I picked up on Kimi and the whole kidnapping thing from the last story. I hope Rin and Sesshomaru's child doesn't die, we just met her and she sounds so nice.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 23:57 EDT
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wow omg damn please update soon
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!
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