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Title: um... one more thing Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:27 CST Comment/Review: hehe.... ^_^ sorry but i just have to say that i really like DarklessVasion's idea about the name for the next ch. "Dark and Twisted His Fate may be; call it Justice for one such as He." has such a nice ring to it, ne? i hope you use her idea for the ch title
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Title: what an awsome punishment Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:22 CST Comment/Review: Hahahahaha!!!! the freak is inside some girls body *falls off of chair and rolls around on the floor laughing* what go's around comes around, karma, that's what i always say ^_^ ok, now i have a question, did you get the lords of the Northern/Souther lands from the Japanese driectional terms? (ok, so technicly their Chinese but Japan was useing many symbles and ideas from the main land back then) i think bull represents north or something. to bad that lion Yukia cant get drunk on the western wine, sake has a much greater alcohol content. i wish i had your writeing skills. i envey you. i hope we get to hear more from Inu and Kag next ch. oh, thats right, is Fluffy goin to tell him he turned the guy who did that to Kagome into a girl and is curently going through the same experince? i can just see the look on his face ^_^ Ja!!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 19:07 CST Comment/Review: so the witch turned him into a female, and he can be subdued very easily. that man really deserves what he's gonna get.now he'll know what kagome and the other girls went through.i really like that idea, very well done. anywho, this was a good chapter. i can't wait to find out what happens next. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mademoiselle Morte [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 17:01 CST Comment/Review: OH GO YOU!!!! that is such a good punishment! inventive...i love it!
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:11 CST Comment/Review: Ug. I get the feeling that i would not what to be sess. when/if the southern loar EVER finds out who/what his gift really is.
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Title: Puuuuurrrrrrfect! Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 12:31 CST Comment/Review: Exotically lovely AND silent...who could ask for more? ...Well, I guess I could!! LMAO!! Please! Post the next chappie asap...I cannot wait to see that scumbag get his comuppance. -- "Dark and Twisted His Fate may be; call it Justice for one such as He."
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Title: Night of the new moon Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 19:00 CST Comment/Review: what's going to happen? can his demon blood take over when he's human. ok now what's the clay pot up too? and they did go further than that *snickers* if the siamosho where there i'm sure Kikyo would have seen that too. i think Miroku should go ahead and black mail Inuyasha, it'd be funny. or you could have him being Shippo's slave so he won't tell. that'd be funny
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 01:48 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very interesting. so are we gonna find out what the witch did to him? i would really like to know what spell or curse she put on him. anywho, i really likes your fic and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. please update soon.
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Title: YEAH!!! Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 14:22 CST Comment/Review: gomen T-T MM been screwed up lately and i didn't have any idea you updated. o_O how in seven hells is that possible? i mean once it's gone it dont come bsck. it defise science ^_^ cool!! um... i think it wa Kyade who spotted the two. when the b@$t3rd wakes up, is his... *cough* going to gone? is the southern lord dude going to use him as a love slave? so what were Sango and Miroku up too *hint hint* love this, Ja Ne!!
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Title: LOVED IT! Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 17:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: loved it! and the lemon was totally awsome! loved it all! update soon!
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Title: Tried to review yesterday. It wouldn't let me... Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 23:54 CST Comment/Review: Hehehe...I am all curious as to what Kouga has determined would enhance the gift to the southern Lord. --- I just can not seem to get this evil grin off of my face while I am reading this. I think I enjoy -just desserts- a little too much! LOL
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *pouts*WHAT IS WITH YOU PEOPLE AND CLIFFIES!/Rin:...They're like you, Rebekuka.../....Jee, thanks...
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 02:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yeah new chappie. god youre killing me. what did she do to him? please tell me. (stares at screen) no hint? (sigh) so its going to be more painful than what he did to kagome and the others right? hehehe man i sure dont feel sorry for the ba$tard. and what did kouga get the lord of the south? waiting for your next chapter LadyTeiya
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 18:01 CST Comment/Review: What did he turn into. You're killing me with the wait. I hope you update soon, I really want to know. Are you going to have more on Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope so, update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 15:47 CST Comment/Review: hey its really good so far you should keep it up ok i cant wait to read what happens next well thanks for a good story so far and i hope you up date soon well thanks;)
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