| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. just finished the 25th chapter. such a sweet ending to the chapter. Rin is such a cute little girl, good overall story, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:55 CST
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Great chapter. I loved how he thought all through everything. Sometimes big things make you really open your eyes to whats in front of you. And don't be disappointed about this chapter. I was needed and give great insight to what he was thinking. Makes the character more real. Great job. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves*Ha, don\'t worry. I know would have been hard, I hate the filler chapters...Too hard to write.../Rin:YOU\'RE SUPPOSE TO BE WRITING RIGHT NOW!/*winces*Crap...Oh, shut up for a bit, Rin. I want to play a game...
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 16:23 CST
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Don't apologize...interval or not, InuYasha's soul searching was deep and the overall WAFFage it created is addictive. Beautifully done.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pouts*BOO!/Rin:Stupid cliffy...Yeah, Rin!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 03:20 CST
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Oh...evil, EVIL cliffhanger!! ---great, just great...more waiting. Good job!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 23:09 CST
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i haven't been able to review in a while thanks to mediaminer and its funny you're logged in...haha, just kidding rule. oh well. GREAT story...i love how Sesshy kicks ass. a little scary in so many retrospects but awsome never the less. great great story, absolutly awsome. i'm glad to see Kagome did not run when she saw yash's eyes. keep it up...glad to see its not done so easily.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 21:04 CST
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Sess gave up his prize to the wolves? Amazing - he doesn't like to kill them, he likes to have them 'live' in that place where they would be better off dead, but not be able to do anything about it. So I wonder then what sort of arrangement was made by Sess and Kouga for the last of their prey?? Also. I was curious about the other Nightwalkers and how they are doing with the nightmares they are having?? I'll be waiting - TTFN
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 19:49 CST
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Great addition. I like that Inuyasha heard from the guys. I think somepeople just need to hear things from others to get in the right frame of mind. Hope you update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 18:35 CST
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omg why there this is great please update soon
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Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 16:04 CST
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Cool! Sesshoumaru gets to 'play' with two of the scum...heheh (pardon my bloodthirstyness) and the gang's reign of terror is over while their subjugation is just beginning...and the Leader gets the special prize! Mwaaahaaahaa! Can't wait to find out his punishment...*evil grin*
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 21:39 CST
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Well now that was good. I like Sesshoumaru's way of hunting. So mysterious. Just like him. Great job. Can't wait for more. Later.
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*THIS BETTER NOT BE DONE!!!!!!!!/Rin:Hai! Hai! Rin has to come back!*eyes fill with tears*Onegui?/Aw, give her this one thing....
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
damn update update
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Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes tears from eyes*/Rin:*blinks away tears*/Those poor...*cries*/Rin:SICK 'EM SESSHO-MARU-SAMA!
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