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Reviewed By: ~aquapearl~ On: August 18, 2008 00:45 PDT
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i luvvvvvvvv da story! itz awesum! i really want to knw wat happens nxt! keep up the good work! =]
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 03:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... this was too good... After reading this I can see why you titled it "Missed Communications". And how you put things together in this chapter was very well done... Hope you update the next chapter and keep doing that great job of yours, writing... Peace...
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 19:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! Go, Kaggie! I can't believe she just told Yash the equivalent of "Just hurry up and ravish me." only to have a youkai interrupt them. And it doesn't seem like they'll be picking up where they left off anytime soon thanks to Kagome's spiritual powers coming out of the closet. Darn it. But the story is progressing very nicely. I just got through reading everything from the beginning up until now and I swear everytime it's been hard to put down. Naturally I've been trying to guess what'll happen next..and I'm stumped..but I think I know who Haku is, at least. I suppose even if I did guess the many twists and turns woven within "Sachi" are enough to still keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update, though. By the way...this isn't really relevant but for a good ten chapters I kept turning the title over in my head thinking "Sachi...isn't that a character?" before I realized "No, you idiot. That's Hachi!" Don't know why I felt the need to include that tidbit of information..but yeah. I'm loving the story so far! Continue! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you are truly an amazing author! I love all your stories and I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter as the plot becomes clearer. Don't leave us for too long! c ya
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Title: No worries
Reviewed By: altusluxlucis On: July 31, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's hard once you've written to pull back far enough to judge your own work, but you should have no worries about this chapter. The action that you've included seems right in line with the ominous nature of the plot. Now that Kagome's settled in, it feels right to have the larger plot come back into play, especially while there are still parallel threads running loose. I swear the time it takes you to update is worth it. It absolutely makes my fangirl month ;).
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 00:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am completely enthralled with your mysterious tale! The tensions between Kags and Inu, the way you've expanded on the basic characters, and the plot that just becomes more thrilling to unravel-- I'm just in awe. Each chapter is carefully constructed and the continuity between chapters is seamless. Your storyline is well executed and you stay true to Takahashi's original premises for her characters. Your point of view and depiction of an AU is both refreshing and exciting. I'm exceedingly happy that I found your piece of literature-- that's right, I'm calling it literature because it has all the correct assets of a literary piece! I am beyond enthused to read more.
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Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say ive really been enjoying this fic. after years of reading fanfiction ive kinda been feeling disapointed and bored by them for a while now but youre work is quite refreshing and im genuinly interested to know what will happen next. yay. lol
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 02:10 PDT
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Me starting off a review like this isn't very original (never are mind you) but i think "Sachi" is absolutely marvelous. I probably will always have a special spot for just anything InuYasha related now, and so in my spare time (the few minutes I can get) I like to sit down and read an Inu-fiction. Ive been doing readings and reviews for a couple of years now and Ive seemed to develop very high expectations and hunger for unique quirks in a story. Unfortunately they are hard to come by which means I have only a few favs that (to me) really bring that extra kick. and that is noticed either in the writers cleanly put details in sentences, well structured vocab, beautifully captured the characters personalities and inner growth during the story and not to mention just the plot itself being unique. im thrilled to say to you have all the above checked on my list of things I look for. You are a superb writer! You may not think so yourself and Im happy you don't. Being unsatisfied helps you improve more. Also if you didn't then I would find that snobbish. lol. But your a far cry from that lovely! To tell you the truth I read this when it first came out (I was ,and am still today, a fan of "Waiting on a wish" and I was waiting for that to be complete. still am) but I didn't review because of my schedule. i did do a brisk run through but doing that didn't let me understand what was going on so I left it be for now. i came back yesterday to read right from chapter one again and I really then appreciated your work. as you can see Im already done reading your latest update. I have to say me fav part of your writing is the perfect slow building romance and trust relationship of InuYasha/Kagome and of coarse in this exact story it is the InuYasha perv thoughts and the sexual play of words. For example instead of saying he wanted to f*** her you wrote how he wanted to lick her body and how long he has been deprived of sex. and i admit the turmoil for him is funny especially when he is talking to Miroku. lol. It is indeed that you Quill, are a writer to adore and worship. I am quite frankly honored to write this review or you and i apologize for not doing others before. That will change! I know updates are hard to come by often but I do wish to see more of the InuYasha/Kagome concoction soon. That means I need "Sachi"! I simply can't get enough yet....
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in! Too lazy!) On: July 29, 2008 21:57 PDT
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*Just a warning: this review was written under the influence of pixie stix* You are an evil, evil person. That was such a promising turn of events until the end when those youkai showed up! Gah! You are cruel and I demand you make things better right now so those two can get together (haha, so much fun to make unreasonable demands on another author!). Well, now that I am done complaining about what a terrible person you are and making rediculous demands, it was a really good chapter! You are seriously your own worst critic, because I thought it was great! The misunderstanding was hilarious, and I am dying to see what happens with the pervert guest. It was just too promising a set up to let drop, so I hope you have him find out somehow. I'm sure it'll get ugly, too! I'm just going to try to ingore the more serious part of the plot because I'm still in denial about it because it is getting the way of their relationship. I much prefer the fun, messy stuff! :-P So are you done with the next chapter yet? I just finished my last summer class today (A's in both English Comp II and Statistics!) and that deserves some sort of reward, right? Of course! LOL Actually, I've just got wayyy too much time on my hands now, so I need entertainment...I'll be looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful... thanks for the update... Please do something with that guest who is rude to kags..
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful... thanks for the update... Please do something with that guest who is rude to kags..
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Reviewed By: KiraInawa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude wow this whole story is just amazing. you're doing an awesome job on keeping whatever they're hiding a secret. i know who it's about i just don't know what it's about (the only reason i know who is cause i read quite a few stories to guess who your kinda talking about) but still good cause i have no idea what it's about well keep up the good work peace out.
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Reviewed By: Kags- -dogboylover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 12:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, amaaaaaazing chapter!!!! really wonderful, i almost laughed my head off while reading the part where kagome is telling inuyasha about her little problem and he completely misunderstands it. LOL hihihi anyway, now you left us hanging on an enormous cliff, and it would be really meanie of you to take too long to save us from it =DD Looking forward to the next update ^.^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 23:37 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Those damn worms couldn't have just waited 10 more minutes. I still love this chapter. Great job, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:09 PDT
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I hate the fact that your chapters are so good. I am longing to see what happens next. I know how it is when you don't have time to write a new chapter and you want it to be good so good luck with the next one. Ooo I'm so excited I don't know what to do with myself!
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