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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: Inukunsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 03:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! this is amazing! I hate it the way you tease with the sexual tension but it makes it so good!! *squeels* ^_^ i love it!
| Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 22:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't re-write it, I think you did a wonderful job on this chapter, and on all your chapters. This is one of the stories that I really look forward to reading. Keep up the good work and update as often as you can. Later! ^_~
| Reviewed By: InusDemones(N.S.I.) On: July 21, 2008 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well just damn! They were finally about to stop torturing themselves and me and get it on! And then a demon has to show! ~sigh~ Don't worry you didn't mess the chapter up at all. It was totally believable; I wouldn't be this upset over the suspense if it was! More please? And also; Twilight, Twilight, Twilight!
| Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: July 21, 2008 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No don't rewrite - it's perfect. It would be amazing if the next day she grabbed his head and scream and ask Inuyasha to make all the memories stop - her memory returns to fast and gives her a very terrible shock. Like the complete and utter annihilation of her family - brother, mother, and grandpa. Just a thought. I loved it - they are in love and hate to admit it too! I can't wait to read chapter 14.
| Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Quillwing. WOW, it is good to hear from you again. I've been waiting on an update from you in forever!!!!! I can honestly say that when I saw the autonotification thing in my mailbox, I keeled over in hysterical laughter. I am so serious. I am addicted to your writing, and I'm glad you finally graced us (your readers) with your presence. I liked the chapter, it was great, and intriguing. A little sexual flare, and the induction of the creepy old man and his doting wife was unexpected. I kinda knew that Inu and Kag weren't going to go all the way, 'cause, come on, this is your first update in a long time and I know we all hope you will beg our forgiveness with a little lemony goodness, but really, we know in our heart of hearts that there ain't going to be anything of the sort. As for the typos, there were about four or five (I'm a freak for counting huh?), but for some reason you are the only writer that I can't get pissed at for that kind of stuff. To tell you the truth, this chap didn't give me the kind of chills that I usually get from reading the others. Don't get me wrong, it was well written, and I loved it, but I think it's because it was kinda just a "bait chapter" if you understand what I'm saying. You know, like it's going to lead to something incredible in the next one. I came to this conclusion all on the account of the revelation of Kagome's powers, and the vague hints to the Sachi's members elusive pasts. But overall, I really enjoyed it, and I hope that you will update this and your other fic really soon. You are without a doubt my favourite writer on this and all other sites, and I hope to read another one of your brilliant chapters really, really, really soon *hint hint*. Ja ne! PS: I have also written a fic (a oneshot), inspired by your writing ability, and your fearlessness to post your talent and be openly critiqued by others. It's called FATED and a review from you would really make my day. Never let others bring you down, and continue to flourish in this, your destined sanctuary.
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 21, 2008 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Messed . . it . . . up? I can not believe that I get to read something this good, for free. This story is better than the last two books that I paid good money for. I really, really HOPE that you do not give up on it as you go down the long stretch of plot development and hit moments of writer's block. There is a tremendous intensity to your stories, that I am sure, makes you work harder than most authors in trying to keep that feeling constant. I am hoping that you can avoid a rewrite and that the chapter will flow with your overall idea. Believe me, we enjoy every single bit, mistakes and all. Also, I appreciate that you let us non-members give our ten cents worth of thoughts. I am comfortable in being a faceless voice. Thank you ever so much for a great chapter! Cynbad146
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: GoddessInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, as usual. I loved the lime, and the timely interruption played with my emotions like crazy! I was a little sad that I didn't get to see Inuyasha pounding the shit out of that perverted jerk, and I'm hoping I see it soon! And Him? Who is Him? Sesshoumaru? I'm going to guess Sesshoumaru. This fic is SO GOOD, I love how you write Inuyasha - he's perfect with your words. Please take your time and make the next chapter just as amazing!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 16:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter and nice twist with Kagome. I can't wait to find out what her true origins are. Unfortunatekly, it seems that Inuyasha isn't too pleased with this news. And I can't wait to see what happens next on that part. As for the sexual harrassing butthole guest, I truly hope that there is an extremely painful way of dealing with him that won't damage the Sachi. I really hate guys like him.
| Reviewed By: taekwondo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 12:08 PDT
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It's a great story! Please update it soon!
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 09:11 PDT
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so glad to see this and it was very good so no worries! ugh stupid pervy guest and stupid inuyasha...
| Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 08:59 PDT
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Evil, so evil... finally getting around to them admitting their feelings for each other, and then you go and ruin it. Meanie. So next chapter, enter Fluffy! Can't wait! Yash/Fluffy interaction is always so fun!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 06:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that puts my friend and my last experience at a nightclub together seem small in comparison... great chapter...
| Reviewed By: msarah On: July 21, 2008 04:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I have been reading it from the start and I NEED to know what is going to happen. I love this story!
| Title: Damn Youkai
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 00:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one more exciting chapter under your belt. I think we did move forward a little with this chapter to. It just makes me hungrier to find out the mystery behind everything. What happen to Kagome before she was shot, does she have a connection to Kikyo. What happened really between Kikyo and Inuyasha. See, you've got me hook line and sinker, and I'm sure I'm not the only one you have your fan-hooks into either. So enjoy your family, and stop mentally beating up your story. Oh and by the way I hope Mister sexual harassment patron gets his ass handed to him soon.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Almost, almost... then the stupid youkai had to come along and just make everything fubar! Aside from that whats his name causing trouble. Aww man *shakes head* don't seem like they haint never gonna get a break. Excellent chap tho. Update when ya can! ;)
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