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Reviewed By: dragonflyhuntress1 On: July 20, 2008 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Finally a new chapter, i'm so glad you updated. I think this was a very good chapter, because we're finally getting to who Kagome is! Don't feel bad or discouraged 'cause there are a lot of people (including me) who enjoy your writing.Please don't stop updating (even if it takes long). Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right, so review time for the new one :) I must say, I was ecstatic to see that you'd updated since I wasn't expecting it at all! This chapter was phenomenal. You could feel the sense of ease that'd come over them in their interactions on the porch and that hot scene in the woods? Whew! I'm still fanning myself! I know Inuyasha is going to be a tool and muck it all up now that he knows she has miko powers, I just hope it doesn't take him too long to realize he has a good thing and should learn to appreciate it while it's there. I thought the use of the sexual harassment to create a comedic misunderstanding was pretty ingenious. ;) I really can't wait for the next one. Happy writing!
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Title: Thank you :)
Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may have pestered you with a few emails begging for updates over the past year...just wanted to say thank you for listening instead of telling me to bugger off hahaha I read this chapter a while ago, then re-read it a couple more times... Am just getting around to reviewing it now. I thought it was fantastic. I really liked how you used Inuyasha's vulnerability on the night of the new moon to bridge the gap between them. I liked his human side the way you portrayed it here, so I hope you bring it back again in the future. This was definitely worth the wait. Thank you so much :)
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! It's like a drug, I think a new chapter will hold me over for a while. But as soon as I'm done reading it, all I can think about is how much I want another chapter. I have so many questions going through my mind, mostly about their past. Other stories I read are good, but no other story (on this site) has made me sit & contemplate possible outcomes. I can't wait for the next chapter. ***you should quit school & abandon all responsibilities & do nothing but this story!!! HA!HA! just kidding of course!
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 21:14 PDT
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I am so happy you updated. I love your stories, and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few typos, but nothing that really distracted from the enjoyment of the story. You are a master of building sexual tension and then thwarting the logical conclusion that is highly frustrating but will make the eventual ending all the sweeter. I loved the misunderstanding between Inu Yasha and Kagome when Kagome finally decided to talk to him about the unwelcome advances of Mr. Hidaka. A part of me wants to insist that the two youkai were, in fact, Mr. Hidaka and his wife. This is one of my favorite stories and I am always excited to receive that little email that tells me you have updated. Take care! I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:46 PDT
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I can't possibly imagine why you feel as though you've messed up somehow. I'll be the first to admit that when I get caught up in a story, I don't really pick up on any errors unless it's something completely off the wall, but for what it's worth, I didn't see any spelling/grammatical mistakes. LOL! Having said that, I was so intently trying to figure out what/who the new guest was, screaming with joy at the citrus, and then back to trying to solve the mystery, that you could have launched a grenade at me and I wouldn't have noticed. :) I'm guessing the "him" is Sesshomaru, and I'm dying to see how he fits in this. I'd been hoping/waiting/wondering if Kagome's powers were going to come into effect here, although I was hoping she'd use it on that nasty piece of work they have as a guest. Your updates always make it worth the long wait we have to endure. I hope you're also not going to forget about "Waiting on a Wish" which is my absolute favorite fanfic ever. Great job and I can't wait to read more. :)
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 20:19 PDT
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Thank you for the new chapter! It's so great to have a chance to read more of your story! There's no need to worry about your latest chapter - everything flows well and is quite believable. I'm glad to see them finally start to settle their "frustrations" with each other, and with a new twist as well! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Don't take too long! -OW
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. I can't believe it took a turn like that but i was expecting she would be a miko. But by gosh, they just started to reveal how much they like each other, to the other, and they have to have this happen! Why would you do this to us and them? By the way, where's sango? Does she know Kagome? I can't wait to see where you go from here. No really, can't wait. Please, for all things good, update as soon as you can and not later.
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: July 20, 2008 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it!!! Excitment and romance and awhole lot of other emotions that kept me glued to the whole story. I will look forward to your nexted installment and will most likely enjoy that one when it's recieved as much as this one...Thank you for updating it's been awhile.
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: July 20, 2008 18:24 PDT
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WELL DONE! Something's finally happening! I think there needs a little polishing, but I love this update, even though so much is left hanging now! I hope you have the opportunity to continue this marvelous story soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 18:21 PDT
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Hooray, an update from Quill! This was wonderful. Full of drama and angst and rage and excitement and grief and...and... Very well done, I'm still loving this. Enjoy your week sweetie, you deserve it!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYY YAYY YAYY YAYYY YAYYY I SOOO LOVE U!! ehem... I mean great job....
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Reviewed By: Hentai SouljaShoujo On: June 12, 2008 16:30 PDT
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I t seems it has taken you a very long time to update but hey unlike writers who never finish or have completely forgotten about it is alot so carry on
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 11, 2008 21:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted you to know that I am still checking in on occasion, hoping for one of your wonderful updates (to either of your ongoing stories!) I definitely miss your chapters. (Some of the best that I have ever read.) Please do not give up on such a grand spin of a yarn. I'll keep checkin' in. Come back please, Cynbad146
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