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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Title: UPDATE OR THE ROSE GETS IT!
Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN SO LONG???!!??WHY????? THIS IS SOOOOO MEAN TO ALL THESE GOOD PEOPLE WHO HAVE BEEN WAITING SOOOOO LONG FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!HERE'S A ROSE TO STRENGTHEN MY MEANING. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . . . .*. . . . . . . ** * . . . . .. . . . . .*** . . * . . ***** . . . . . . . . . . .** . . **. . . . .* . . . . . . . . . . ***.*. . *. . . . .* . . . . . . . . . .****. . . .** . . . ****** . . . . . . . . . ***** . . . .**.*. . . . . ** . . . . . . . . .*****. . . . . **. . . . . . *.** . . . . . . . .*****. . . . . .*. . . . . . * . . . . . . . .******. . . . .*. . . . . * . . . . . . . .******* . . .*. . . . .* . . . . . . . . .*********. . . . . * . . . . . . . . . .******* . *** *******. . . . . . . . .** .*******. . . . . . . . * . ******. . . . . . . . * * . .***. . *. . . . . . .** . . . . . . .*. . . . . * . . . . .****.*. . . .* . . . *******. .*. .* . . .*******. . . *. . . .*****. . . . * . . .**. . . . . .* . . .*. . . . . . **.* . . . . . . . . . ** . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . .* . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * . . . . . . . . * As long as you don't update, i'll take away 1 line on this rose until it's nothing!!! so... UPDATE OR THE ROSE GETS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Nadene On: March 17, 2008 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you coming back? I keep searching the story up with hopes of a new chapter. I love your writing. Its so good.
| Title: Buckwheat....
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 03:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading this chapter...the part where Kags is "sick" and she's laying on her buckwheat pillow got me thinking of when I went to Japan and how much those pillows fucking killed my neck. UGHHHH they LOOK nice and then once your neck/head is laying on them its like..rocks... Not only did they have buckwheat they also had like these pillows with PEAS in them...or something akin to peas cause they were HUGE and bulky and hurtfull... I really don't know why I'm talking about traditional japanese style pillows but anyways I love your story. Its really nice and I love how you don't squish everything together so quickly. Its progressing, not slowly but at a nice pace, with its romance. Its also suspenseful and makes the reader SUPER curious. I can't wait until your next chapter. .....I'll be waiting... *creepy stare*
| Reviewed By: celestial lux lucis On: February 19, 2008 00:08 PST
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Your hard work on this really shows. Whatever perfectionist qualities kept you rewriting certainly paid off. You've managed to write the first fanfic chapter I've ever felt the need to comment on. You have stable, solid characterizations going in this fic, and keeping them constant while putting them in such an intense situation seems to be impossible for almost every other fic writer out there, but you pull it off flawlessly. You've also managed to make nearly every description in the "first kiss" scene feeling original and fresh. I had thought that was impossible in an Inu/Kag fic, but you have proven my conclusions wrong. Thanks! And I hope you have as much fun writing this as I do reading it!
| Reviewed By: heymary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!! But NOOO!!! Why haven't you updated in so long?? Are ever planning on finishing this? It's such a great story...
| Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me WHY is this fic on the featured list when NOTHING has been posted for a year.!!! I love your story and I think this is a great fic. I also think you are one of the best authors of fan fics that I have read on MediMiner. But I am sick and tired of authors who write great fics and then decide not to finish them just when it gets good!!. AT least have the respect for your readers who like me, have patiently followed this story and complete it with the LAST chapter or an EPILOUGE! PLEASE JUST FINISH THIS STORY ALREADY Thank you, J PS: I am not trying to single you out on this subject. I am just frustrated with ANY author that doesn't complete their stories who post on ANY fan fiction site
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 20, 2008 07:44 PST
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Where are you Quillwing717? Is this story a done deal? I sure would like to know what happens in the end (after the cliffhangers.) This story is so well written. I am going to miss it. Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 18:40 PST
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dude are u still alive?
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 18:31 PST
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this really is a well written and incredibly interesting story. I'm very excited to see more whenever you can update. thanks for sharing!
| Title: Sachi
Reviewed By: rowdyjaner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 11:36 PST
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you are a brilliant writer. this story flows so beautifully, like rich syrup from a pitcher. the characters are full and real, deep and filled with emotions. however, you haven't updated since feb 2007 and that is bad. long chapters are fine, even if they are 50,000 words - no problem. but no chapters... well, that simply isn't acceptable. i think i am going to have to send my minions to find you and make you write until you finish all of your stories. of course, i will have to acquire minions first. there are just so many petty details involved in being an evil genius. please save me the effort (as i a very lazy) and update this story. O_O PLEEEEEASE!
| Reviewed By: WhiteLuna On: November 16, 2007 10:56 PST
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I just got around to reading this chapter, and that was absolutely the sexiest. Love it, love it and can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 00:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! no no no no no no no no it can't stop there! *destroys things in nearest vicinity* *headdesk* Gods woman, that was kickass! halfway decent my ass, that was superb! I so wanted Kagome to pull him back into another kiss, just to prove it wasn't a mistake. grrr. and ahaha, she growled at him! and finally threw something, albeit a pillow. lol. but whew! that was awesome. overused word, sure, but damn. awesome. I so want to read more! you've got yourself a highly dedicated reader now girl, so be ready! for what, I'm not entirely sure. lol. Rest assured that you'll always have a review for every single chapter from this chick. Thus! Update soon, and I shall shower you with praise! The world and characters you've crafted are addicting, and I reallyyyyyyyyyy want to know what happens next. So take pity, and give us more of your brillance! ^-^ -Your overly excitable reader/reviewer, Aurelia. Here's a giant interdimensional mallet to smash the hell out of writer's block, if it ever strikes again. There's a reason you're a featured author, you know. Pure awesomeness. ^-^ ja!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(white again, dammit!) heheheheeh. numbskull. aha! great word. ^-^ I've been trying to think of the right words to describe this story, besides the overused "awesome" and "wonderful". Basically, to me, it's positively charming. Magnetically so, drawing the reader in. And then, after that, intense, in an almost slice-of-life way. Normal day to day things with a comical twist, and accompanying emotional potentcy. *I loves it!!* It's exactly the sort of close relationship fueled activity that people yearn for. And shogi has become such a great part of the story. XD oooooooo citrus coming up!!!! *claps happily* With all this crafted tension, I'm sure you'll do just fine. But man, only one more chapter left for me to read. T-T boooo. The POV's are quite a favorite of mine. ^-^ Onto the highly anticapated chapter11!!!! wheee!!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I love all those little signs. But is it really Shippou, or another trick/treat of the mysterious Sachi. I suppose only you're hairdresser knows for sure.XD As for my impression of the story, besides the obvious fact that I adore it (and only two more chapters left! ahhhh!no!) here goes: Inuyasha has an obvious past linked with Miroku, I'm guessing the obvious Kikyo (who's name has never been mentioned yet. hmm) and kaede and shippou also involved. I believe naraku is behind it somehow, and Sango's been sent to take care of Inuyasha... somehow. I'm not sure if she knows about Miroku, and his connection. Kagome's made a promise (either to herself or someone close to her) to "keep running". Definitely interested to see how that will play out. Judging by her sudden appearance in the national forest, it seems like she was either a. meant to be killed or b. critically hurt and meant to be sent to inuaysha somehow. I'm thinking she's still got miko powers, but I guess I'll have to wait and see. Miroku also wants to make some profit off of the knowledge that shippo's dad imparted, but it doesn't seem devious. just opportunist. lol. I think that's pretty much it so far, although I've probably forgotten something. I really really realllyyyyyy want to know more about Kagome's necklace, and her past. I'm intrigued, damnit! ^-^ great chapter. I'm usually totally focused on Inuyasha/kagome interaction, but even the sango/miroku interaction is pulling me in. Well done! Great writing. ^-^
| Title: Glue
Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO, hot springs? That must definitely be made use of in this fic, or I shall be sorely disapointed. ^-^ also, you've been added to my favorite authors list here on MM. Be excited! XD *bursts into laughter* GLUE! Genius. nice use of sound effects. whump indeed. lol I love shippou. ^-^ as always, NICE CHAPPY!
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