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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ever-intriguing plot twist of women's underwear. Heheheh, always good. ^-^ Sango! If I'm correct, she's the one Naraku was ordering around in the prologue. (red eyes and whatnot.) Uh oh. Miroku's gonna be in over his head when he bumps into her again. Which he has to. ^-^ and Kagome still doesn't know that she had a gunshot wound, correct? Hmmm. interesting. as for the length of the chapter, I've always thought the longer the better. But if it means getting new chapters out sooner, then totally shorter. ^-^ Or actually, I'd prefer to have more to read at once. So my final answer is: longer the better! >.> nevermind the unintentional innuendo. Oi. *claps* Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really impressed with the way you write Kagome. Inuyasha is absolutely perfect, but Kagome- it's like she's real, you know? She's not a flat character all like "OMG I lost my memory, oh well I'll shack up with this hot hanyou". There's real emotion there, and you portray the feeling of amnesia- being completely unconnected without memories- in a wonderfully believeable way. I'm also starting to wonder when it wil really hit her- when the first time she'll cry will be. I'm guessing it's gonna be intense. "Hey…. That top." For a moment, he sounded strange--somewhere between uncomfortable and amused. "I like that one. Bring it with you." *squees* TEH CUTENESS. *runs around in little circle* I love that shit! XD and the scene out in front of the lingerie shop- mmmmmmmm turbulent and turned on Inuyasha. mwahahah. As always, so much fun to read!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:03 PST
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Miroku: "A kiss, perhaps?" ahahah, he would say that! As for the kitchen scene, I thought it was wonderful. Tension, the fall, the SNOW. You put so much emotion (and secrets) and thought into the way you write the characters- and it clearly shows. The mark of a very good writer. and writer's block, AUGH. The most hated of all the blocks, lol. Sometimes it can be broken by the simplest thought, and sometimes you just gotta sit down and write, then rewrite, then throw it all out the window, set things on fire, and begin again. All in all, a very gorgeous and slow build up of heart thrumming contact. ^-^ *big thumbs up*
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 20:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter I keep thinking that it can't get any better, and then it just magically does. ^-^ This story is so much fun to read! Parts actually make me break out in a full blown grin, and I love it. Onto chapter five I go!
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply wonderful. ^-^ wait, let's put some more 4am excitement into that. TOTALLY KICKASS MASTER WRITER-SAMA!!!!1111one. The atmosphere in the kitchen scene was thick. I actually leaned closer to the computer screen to read faster before I realized it. ^-^ bed now, but I shall be back tomorrow to read & review! *insert maniacal laughter here.*
| Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so loving this! The interaction is great. And who is this mysterious "he"? I'm guessing Seshoumaru. But I'll have to wait and see. You make Shippou adorable in the extreme. ^-^ major props! to the next chapter!*runs off* (I'll be reviewing each chapter, hope you don't mind, lol. An author disliking reviews? Impossible! I know. ^-^)
| Title: Nicely done!
Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, nice! Lady, well done! ^-^ This is one of those stories where it's damned late and I should go to bed, but now I simply can't because I have to know what happens. hahah. Great characterization! Spot on, everything about this story is drawing me in. *applauds* Thanks for sharing your talent with us. ^-^ Now, I'm gonna go read moreeeeeeee!
| Title: Absolutely Wonderful
Reviewed By: GoddessInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 06:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I've spent the entirity of my fanfiction years searching for really unique, well-written Inuyasha AU's. They're so hard to come by. Rozefire is a favorite of mine from back in the day, but she stopped writing fanfiction a while ago, and while I still go back and read over her stuff, I still crave new superb Inuyuasha AU fanfics. I stumbled across your fic, and was instantly drawn into the world in which Sachi exsists. You've kept up every character's personality so well and true to the canon, and I've fallen in love with the slow build of lust between Inuyasha and Kagome. Eleven chapters until a first (heated!) kiss is an accomplishment, and I think you pulled it off wonderfully. I won't ask to rush an update, as a fanfiction writer myself, I know how hard it can be to push out something decent. So write as it comes to you, and don't force it. I'd rather wait a bit for the next chapter than read your less-than-best work. But, I will let you know that I'm waiting. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kagome come together after that kiss, and I'm curious to find out what exactly happened to Kagome before she arrived at the Sachi. Thanks for an awesome read!
| Reviewed By: haleos18 On: October 30, 2007 15:17 PDT
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update? pretty please with whipped cream, chocolate syrup, rainbow sprinkles, and a cherry on top?
| Reviewed By: Setryochi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 21:33 PDT
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I'm worried you wont update. Please say you will? I need to know more about this story so much it hurts! Your characters are all very well written and in character, I just love it! I have a feeling Sango is looking for Kagome, but I can't be sure. anyways, please tell us you're alive! And thank you so much for this wonderful story, Set-chan
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: October 16, 2007 21:02 PDT
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Hey Quill, I really miss your updates on this one. The story is so alive with feelings and emotions. Please come back and let us know that you are still with us. I hope all is well with you (in real life.) I dearly love this story (and your other one.) Signed:, Please forgive me for being a whiney fan, but I am having DTs and withdrawal symptons from your quality work. Please help an needy addict. Your fan, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Kalisa On: October 09, 2007 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, I love how creative and fun it is. Please, PLEASE!!!! Update as soon as you can this prolonged hiatus is killing me.
| Reviewed By: Foenix On: October 06, 2007 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, I really do hope you'll continue this story. I'm dying to discover the mysteries that seem to exist in everyone's separate pasts. Your writing style is very good, and both plot and characterization are terrific. Two big thumbs up.
| Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 18:17 PDT
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i am hopelessly in love with this story. i mean it! i am completely addicted. you're an amazing writer so thank you for sharing your work.
| Reviewed By: NewYorkCityUtopia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 02:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! please, please, please, let this story continue!
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