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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: May 19, 2005 14:49 CDT
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Wow, that is the most eviliest cliffhanger EVER! *glomps* Poor Goku...it looks like Vegeta might back to late... Good chapter, I really see how you captured the feeling of the rift between them and their points of view on it, I especially liked Vegeta's, it was very well written. Looking forward to the next chapter- even more than usual. Hehe
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Reviewed By: vegez_lush [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! ^.^ I hope you write loads more and soon!!!!! xXx
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Title: The Odd Couple
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you kill vegita, i'll hunt you down and slauter you! *glares*
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 21:44 CDT
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I wasn't crazy with how this story started, but I really like where it is now. I enjoy the politics and the pull on Vegeta's emotions and loyalities. I like the interplay between past and present/future. I'm really looking to see how all the threads in your tapestry pull togeather. I would be interested in knowing how or if the families on Earth affect the outcome. -El-
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Title: Ch.15
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God!! Poor Vegeta...well he got what was coming to him...but still, u can't help but feel so sorry for him. I really can't believe how far Vegeta and Goku got, yet they seem to got all the way back to the beginning again. I hope they both pull through. And I hope everything goes well with the other saiyans too. I was also suprised to find out Kakarotto and Raddoon used to be lovers and now will resume to be. This chapter was so good, just like all ur others, so descriptive, for everything. I really can't wait for the next chapter!! I gotta know what happens between Goku and Vegeta!! Please don't let this be the end in their relationship!! Update soon!!!
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Title: *sniffling, grabs tissue*
Reviewed By: New Kitty On: April 23, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, he loves him. It's so wonderful. Has Goku finally gotten through to Vegeta? Here's wishing he has finally broken that hard exterior that Vegeta uses to hide his feelings from the universe. Just proves my theory: Love isn't a weakness; it just makes us stonger. Dear goddess, I've gone all sappy again!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: April 23, 2005 10:54 CDT
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Fantastic chapter! So much happened, and it flowed so well! I can see why you made all of this into a single chapter now. The battle was great to read, and I really think you wrote Goku and Vegeta in character very well, the emotions were there and everything, particularly Vegeta's reaction to Goku telling him he was no different from Frieza. Very descriptive, especially liked the description of Vegeta through the battle, with the blood in his eyes. Now I can't help wondering when Kakarotto is going to rear his head...
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Title: awesomly cool
Reviewed By: mystery_saiya_jin@hotmail.com On: April 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! *gives thumbs up* AWESOMELY AWESOME!!! ~~~ Me
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Title: *in a bad mood*
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: April 03, 2005 09:37 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOO! *slaps Vegeta* NO! BAD OUJI!! *huggles Goku* Poor Goku!!! *glares at Vegeta* Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Title: Ch.14
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 23:33 CST
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NOOOOOO!!!!!! Vegeta and Goku are already fighting?? No,no,no not good. >< I don't want them to hate eachother...poor Goku, it's like he had his heart broke. I hope they make up soon. And I hope Vegeta doesn't try to take over the saiyans yet. What's he going to do? What's gonna happen?? C'mon I'm at the edge of my seat here!! Please write more!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great. I've never read a DBZ fic, and I don't really plan on looking in any archives, but this was so good, I had to read after the first chapter! I love how you portray both Goku and Vegeta. Goku is especially fun to read, and somehow, though he always seems in character, Vegeta often manages to surprise me. The title is great too. Anyway, love it, write more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Webtester001 On: April 02, 2005 16:13 CST
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Oooh more angst. And forward progress. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: April 02, 2005 15:56 CST
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Wowie, thats a cliffhanger. Thats was mean of Vegeta too...he really seems intent on this. Goku may have his work cut out on though, so I'm going to look forward to seeing how he copes with this. Interesting chapter, and looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Kaemon On: March 25, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: March 17, 2005 02:09 CST
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I love it!!! MORE!!! MORE I say!!!!
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