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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 14:28 CST
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Woot! Another planet Vegeta ne? Well this should be interesting. And Vegeta is gonna promise to give the pleasure back to Goku? =P Hottness. Can't wait! As Vegeta said, they have a few hours til they get their. So r they bout to have more hott saiyan homo sex? ^^ I hope so! Glee!! Another great chapter! Until next chappie, G'byez!!
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Title: eep!!
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: February 14, 2005 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO!! OOOO!! MORE!! MORE!! please 0.0! keep updating and you will have a very happy madame shannon on your hands, which we all know is better than having a loud upset and blubering madame shannon on your hands (its just embarassing to have a grown woman crying all over you) thanx here is a rose for you @--^--
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Title: Stupid mistake! (by me)
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH SORRY, I SAID REVIEW INSTEAD OF UPDATE! *bashes head*.. heh.. guess it wasn't my last review of the day.... Oh well, at least you get a bigger review number! I rated you again as well.
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My last review for today, seeing as I've finally caught up with the story. Are you going to review by tomorrow? Only I've noticed you've been a busy writer and have been updating everyday so far. You know, if you left it a bit longer, you'd give people more chance to review, but hey, I don't mind the ultra fast updates! I just think you deserve more reviews... Anyway, I like the way this story is heading... *says in dreamy hopeful voice* I hope Turles and Bardock are there, they are SO hot... Ahh, what am I saying! *chants* I love VEGETA, I love VEGETA.... *cough* enough of that. Instead I think I'll add you to my favorites! Although, I don't know if I have already.. anyway, you'll be on there! Till the next chapter, keep up the brilliant work! =P
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 13:00 CST
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Hey, you're welcome for the reviews! Wow, this chapter was.. eventful. I wonder what the atmosphere's gonna be like after this, but hery, why am I asking? All I have to do is read the next chapter... Anyway, I heard most authors like critisisms.... hmm *bashes head against computer screen*.. oh yeah! Could you mabye, make Vegeta more dominant, seeing that's the way he seems in the series anyway.. Ah, don't listen to me, if you did this whole story would just be hundreds of pages complementing every detail of Vegeta.... Well, till the next chapter!
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Title: Oops!
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! I've been off the internet for a while, and came back to find you'd updated quite a lot! Sorry I haven't reviewed much! Anywho, I loved this chapter, and there's finaly some action! Although it was good how you didn't rush into things. God I felt so embarrassed(spelled correctly?) for Vegeta in the last chapter, but I'm glad they've both finaly gotton over it! Sorry for not reviewing, I've just finished chapter 5, I'll give you a review per chapter after this. I don't normally do that, but I think this story's exceptional! You've revived my faith in G/V fics! Anyway, an end to this review now...
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 14, 2005 08:33 CST
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Man, that has me on the edge of my seat! Interesting chapters, I can't wait to see what this version on Vegeta-sei is going to be like and what is gong to happen to Goku and Vegeta. I'm also looking forward to when Vegeta fulfils that promise to Goku... Awesome chapter, I'm REALLY looking forward to the next one. (I mean, what a superb cliffhanger!)
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 12, 2005 20:29 CST
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Lovey lemon- sweet as well, without turning into phap. Excellent- I loved your ukey Vegeta by the way. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 12:35 CST
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O.O *has a giant Shuichi nose bleed* Wow...just wow. That was really good. My face is like flushing red right now! That was so fuckin hott!! U sure know what to write for a good believable G/V lemon!!! I'm literally hooked on ur story!!! I'm so glad that u update everyday!!!! Now then, I wonder what'll happen next? Hehehe totally leavin it up to u gurl! I haven't got a damn clue!!! Can't wait til the next chapter comes out!!! As always, keep up the fuckin great work!!! Until next chapter, Adios!!!
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Title: eeep!!!
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: February 11, 2005 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i repeat eeep!!! this is an amazing story (granted this is comming from an overworked undersexed boysex crazed manga fan) keep up the good work! i'm looking foward to an update. here you deserve a rose @---^--
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Title: YAAY!!!!
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: February 11, 2005 17:45 CST
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YAOI!!! Kissing!!!! Woo hoo!!!! More!!!! I want Vegeta to be uke!!! Please!!! And Goku to be seme!!! I'm like that XD Anyway, enough of telling you how to write...not my fic!!!! love it! want more soon!!! bye!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 11, 2005 17:28 CST
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Wow I loved that chapter! The bit where Vegeta goes nuts and destroyed the collective was awesome. For lack of a better word: ACTIONY! And the bit at the end was really well placed into it- flowed very well with the story I thought. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 11, 2005 17:06 CST
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Lovely chapter! The bit where Vegeta was in Goku's arms was so cute! Poor Goku though, heseems to mess up, catching Vegeta like that. Aww. Gonna read the next chappie now, because I'm really enjoying this!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 13:48 CST
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! *rips all hair out of scalp* U DID IT AGAIN!!!!!!!! NOT ONLY DID U CREATE AN AWESOME CHAPTER, BUT U LEAVE IT OFF WITH THEIR FIRST KISS!!!!!! DAMMIT U TALENTED PERSON U!!! Nah I ain't mad lol But damn did u make my weekend. This chapter had me laughing and smiling from ear to ear. U know just what to write and how to write it!! I cannot stop complementing u!!! I am totally looking foward to the next chapter!! Please update soon gurl!!! U can't leave me hangin like this!!! Til next chapter, Ta Ta!!!!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:10 CST
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KYAA!! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE!!! OMG!! That was like the best chapter yet and then u make an evil cliffy!! *whines* NO FAIR!!! LOL OMG VEGETA WUZ MASTERBATING AND GOKU SAW!!!! EYAAA!! *rips outs hair from scalp* U GOTTA GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!! I'LL DIE IF I DON'T READ IT!!! LOL But anyways, as usual, awesome work my friend!! U r doin very well with this fic!! Easily believable since they act like they r from the series so much!!! PLEASE, update soon!! I'll be waiting!! =P Until next chapter, See ya!!!!
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