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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 16, 2005 15:33 CST
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Oooh, nice lemon. Mmm. seme Goku, and ukey Vegeta + good detail= fricken good lemon. Heh, I liked it when Goku kicked Kakarot's ass too. Must be embarassing for him, hehehe. *grabs pom-poms* Go Goku! Go Goku! Hey, he was on a roll in this chapter. Got the villian, and the guy.
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Title: Ch.13
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:36 CST
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Wonderful chapter Jana. U never cease to amaze me. Ur lemon was detailed and well written as always. Uke Vegeta + Seme Goku = Very sexy! =P Lol I was really happy that Goku kicked Kakarotto's ass. That guy really deserved it. I wonder what'll happen next? Hmm well u gotta keep me posted by writng some more!! Great work as always!! Update soon!!!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! That was so hot! ~shudders~ Loved the way that Goku showed Kakarotto who was boss. May be in for a bit of trouble though. Loved it!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: I Love Trunks Briefs On: March 08, 2005 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SUPER DOOPER FUNNY!!!! I'M ROTFLMAO!!! GOKU IS SOOOOO FUNNY WHEN HE IS IN FRONT OF PEOPLE HE SHOULD BE AFRAID OF!!! ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY CALL HIM A SLUT!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *takes a deep breath* I'm okay... ((this is MysterySaiyan... i'm just not signed in!!! :P))
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 08, 2005 14:11 CST
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Oohhh It's a stare down! What a cliffhanger! I loved the way Vegeta was grinning at Kakarotto though, that was so funny when he was grinnnig devilishly when Kakarotto realised it was him. Nice touch! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: March 08, 2005 05:01 CST
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I do hope Goku flares into Super Saiyan and knocks his ass down! Down biatch! *slaps Kakarotto* Kakarotto: *attacks* AAAHHHHHHHHH SAVE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *crickets chirp*
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Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know Vegeta knows who's gonna win! Go Goku! Woot! That Goku look alike is SO gonna get his ass kicked! please write the next chapter soon! ^o^
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Title: Ch.12
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 14:09 CST
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Uh Oh. Looks like a stand off between Goku and Kakarotto ne? Kick his ass Goku!! LOL Damn, I wish I could see a picture of Vegeta and Goku in the black leather...*droolz* So sexy!! ^^ OMG that was so funny when Goku started cracking up about being called a slut!! I can picture him doing that too!! Anyways, loved this chappie! Can't wait for the next one!! The suspense dammit!! LOL Keep up the great work and hope u get to update soon!! Buh Byez!!!
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Title: *blush(again)*
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: March 01, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*drooling and blushing with nothing to say as her eyes glaze over, repeating what happened in her head* Guhhh...mmm....
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 01, 2005 15:07 CST
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O.O I love possessive feral Vegeta. Great lemon! And Veggie got hugs!!!!! *runs up behind Vegeta and glomps him* Vegeta: Argh! *struggles* Goku: *runs in, glomping Vegeta too* Vegeta: Need....air... Loved the chappie, can't wait to read more.
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Title: Ch.11
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 04:01 CST
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OMG I lOVED this chapter!! Vegeta being jealous that women were staring at HIS man was just too cute!! LOVED the lemon, OMG it was sexy as hell!! I know cause my face is flushed...again!! =P Well that's what happens when u read/watch hott yaoi!! Awesome chapter my friend!! I loved it sooo much!! I hope u will be updating soon!! Until next chappie, Buh Byez!!!
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Title: Chappie 11
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impossible! That I have not reviewed this wonderful fic before! This is an awesomely written yaoi! Very beautiful and very in-character! Nicely done! Can't wait to read more! =)
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Title: Good ness me oh goodness my!
Reviewed By: MysterySaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was... SOOOO COOL!!! I LOVE READING LEMON AND YAOI FAN FICS!!! I think that you are the one of the best writers on da web!!! Please keep up the good work!!! P.S.: I love GokuxVegeta and GohanxTrunks yaoi!!! XD
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Title: I loved it!!!
Reviewed By: Mystery Sayiajin On: February 26, 2005 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! THIS IS THE BEST LEMON/YAOI FIC I HAVE READ!!! I LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! I JUST LOVE GOKUxVEGETA YAOI!!!! ^_^;;; Please keep up the good work!!! :P
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 21:12 CST
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Uh Oh. Vegeta is letting power go to his head...again. lol =P Silly Geta! I hope he and Goku will be ok. I also hope that nothing will come between their relationship either, cause little by little, they are falling in love. God...I LOVE this story!!! ^____^ Another great chapter my friend! Can't wait til the next one! Update soon pwease!!! =P
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