| "The Odd Couple" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 12, 2005 20:29 CST
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Lovey lemon- sweet as well, without turning into phap. Excellent- I loved your ukey Vegeta by the way. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 12:35 CST
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O.O *has a giant Shuichi nose bleed* Wow...just wow. That was really good. My face is like flushing red right now! That was so fuckin hott!! U sure know what to write for a good believable G/V lemon!!! I'm literally hooked on ur story!!! I'm so glad that u update everyday!!!! Now then, I wonder what'll happen next? Hehehe totally leavin it up to u gurl! I haven't got a damn clue!!! Can't wait til the next chapter comes out!!! As always, keep up the fuckin great work!!! Until next chapter, Adios!!!
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Title: eeep!!!
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: February 11, 2005 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i repeat eeep!!! this is an amazing story (granted this is comming from an overworked undersexed boysex crazed manga fan) keep up the good work! i'm looking foward to an update. here you deserve a rose @---^--
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Title: YAAY!!!!
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: February 11, 2005 17:45 CST
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YAOI!!! Kissing!!!! Woo hoo!!!! More!!!! I want Vegeta to be uke!!! Please!!! And Goku to be seme!!! I'm like that XD Anyway, enough of telling you how to write...not my fic!!!! love it! want more soon!!! bye!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 11, 2005 17:28 CST
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Wow I loved that chapter! The bit where Vegeta goes nuts and destroyed the collective was awesome. For lack of a better word: ACTIONY! And the bit at the end was really well placed into it- flowed very well with the story I thought. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 11, 2005 17:06 CST
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Lovely chapter! The bit where Vegeta was in Goku's arms was so cute! Poor Goku though, heseems to mess up, catching Vegeta like that. Aww. Gonna read the next chappie now, because I'm really enjoying this!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 13:48 CST
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KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! *rips all hair out of scalp* U DID IT AGAIN!!!!!!!! NOT ONLY DID U CREATE AN AWESOME CHAPTER, BUT U LEAVE IT OFF WITH THEIR FIRST KISS!!!!!! DAMMIT U TALENTED PERSON U!!! Nah I ain't mad lol But damn did u make my weekend. This chapter had me laughing and smiling from ear to ear. U know just what to write and how to write it!! I cannot stop complementing u!!! I am totally looking foward to the next chapter!! Please update soon gurl!!! U can't leave me hangin like this!!! Til next chapter, Ta Ta!!!!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:10 CST
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KYAA!! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE!!! OMG!! That was like the best chapter yet and then u make an evil cliffy!! *whines* NO FAIR!!! LOL OMG VEGETA WUZ MASTERBATING AND GOKU SAW!!!! EYAAA!! *rips outs hair from scalp* U GOTTA GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON!! I'LL DIE IF I DON'T READ IT!!! LOL But anyways, as usual, awesome work my friend!! U r doin very well with this fic!! Easily believable since they act like they r from the series so much!!! PLEASE, update soon!! I'll be waiting!! =P Until next chapter, See ya!!!!
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Title: *drool*
Reviewed By: xTheChichiSlaughterHouse x On: February 10, 2005 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far!!!! How embarrassing for Vegeta...having Goku find him...doing that!!! ^.~ Brilliant fic! Keep up the great work!!!!!
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Title: *blush*
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 14:34 CST
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AHHHHHHH POOR VEGETA! GOSH EVEN I'M EMBARRASSED FOR HIM!! I like the fact that your fic isn't rushing into everything with Goku and Vegeta's relationship, like others do. Poooooor Vegeta.... Please give him back his pride! Love the story tho, please continue!!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 09, 2005 16:19 CST
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Wow...that was quick update. That was an awesome chapter! I really enjoyed it, especially the bit with the soup, and the station. Poor scared Goku! Awwww. Hehehe, loved the bit at the end when vegeta saw Goku in the shower...can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 15:24 CST
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Oooooo Vegeta wuz staring at Goku's body while he wuz showering!! The attraction begins!! YAY!! I hope sumthin happens between the 2 of them real soon!! I must be patient but it's sooo hard!!! I LUV V/G lemons!!!! I must contain myself!! LOL Hmmm I wonder who'll be uke? I'd luv it if it went both ways but if it had to be one I'd say Vegeta hasta be uke!! God I am a perv and a talker!! >< I gotta shutup, u r probably bored to tears with my comments!! LOL Well anyways keep up the good work like u r!! Can't wait til the next chapter!! I'll check back everyday for a new update!! Buh Byes!! =P
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Reviewed By: JAYXU On: February 09, 2005 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is great! The most original G/V I've read so far. You should post this in www. fanfiction . net also!
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 08, 2005 14:21 CST
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Whoo! Another chapter. Really enjoying this fic. I wonder what planet they'll land on. (I know it's highly unlikely, but wouldn't it be ironic if they crashed on earth...kinda defeat the object of the fic though, so don't listen to me). Looking forward to next update! Poor Goku's head- it went through a lot of punishment in this chapter...aww. Even if he is "special"
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can already tell that this is going to be really good "it already is btw". U can easily imagine this as the real thing on tv. I can't wait til they start to show some sexual interest between eachother!! LOL U've got my interest!! Please continue this fic or I swear I WILL cry!! =P Pwease update soon!! Buh byes!!!
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