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 Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2005 05:59 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read this and was like...wow! But it was late at night and I didn't plan to review. But all through the night as I was trying to get to sleep I just couldn' get the image of Goku and Vegeta in the chair...seriously you've written one addictive piece of writing. The story is excellent and both Goku and Vegeta, despite any..ahem...circumstances are in perfect character ^^ write more now! PLeeeease!
 Title: @_@
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x  On: February 17, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What??? @_@ Wow...this must affect Vegeta a hell of a lot...but...still... @_@ Poor Goku!!! He didn't know!!!! Gah! Update soon! I beg of you!!!
 Reviewed By: lordofthepies  On: February 17, 2005 10:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoah! A lot happening in that chapter. What's going to happen between Goku and Vegeta? Hope they make it up, cos Vegeta's still got a promise to keep to Goku...hehehe I'm looking forward to your next update!
 Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2005 03:19 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was great. I look forward to the next chapter, and seeing what happpens next.
 Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2005 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh Oh. Things aren't lookin well between our 2 favorite saiyans ne? Oh God, I hope they make up soon. I don't want them to be mad at eachother and goin back to the way they used to be! Ahhh!! The suspense!! =P lol Nice developed chappie. Very well written! As always, can't wait til the next one! Pwease update soon!!
 Title: Saiyans????
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x  On: February 14, 2005 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
PLANET VEGETA??? OH MY GOD!!! COOL!!! MORE SOON!!! PLEASE!!! *winks* Vegeta wants to show Goku the same pleasure? *grins* However much I prefer ukey Vegeta's, I bet that will be a brilliant lemon!! Yours are great!
 Title: OH.MY.GOD.
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x  On: February 14, 2005 14:40 CST
Comment/Review:
BEST LEMON EVER!!! OH GOD!!!! More!!! Sorry I didn't review, but I lost the link and missed the update!! *drools* I'm off to the next chapter now! Jaa nee!
 Title: OH.MY.GOD.
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x  On: February 14, 2005 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
BEST LEMON EVER!!! OH GOD!!!! More!!! Sorry I didn't review, but I lost the link and missed the update!! *drools* I'm off to the next chapter now! Jaa nee!
 Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Woot! Another planet Vegeta ne? Well this should be interesting. And Vegeta is gonna promise to give the pleasure back to Goku? =P Hottness. Can't wait! As Vegeta said, they have a few hours til they get their. So r they bout to have more hott saiyan homo sex? ^^ I hope so! Glee!! Another great chapter! Until next chappie, G'byez!!
 Title: eep!!
Reviewed By: madame shannon  On: February 14, 2005 14:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOO!! OOOO!! MORE!! MORE!! please 0.0! keep updating and you will have a very happy madame shannon on your hands, which we all know is better than having a loud upset and blubering madame shannon on your hands (its just embarassing to have a grown woman crying all over you) thanx here is a rose for you @--^--
 Title: Stupid mistake! (by me)
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHH SORRY, I SAID REVIEW INSTEAD OF UPDATE! *bashes head*.. heh.. guess it wasn't my last review of the day.... Oh well, at least you get a bigger review number! I rated you again as well.
 Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 13:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My last review for today, seeing as I've finally caught up with the story. Are you going to review by tomorrow? Only I've noticed you've been a busy writer and have been updating everyday so far. You know, if you left it a bit longer, you'd give people more chance to review, but hey, I don't mind the ultra fast updates! I just think you deserve more reviews... Anyway, I like the way this story is heading... *says in dreamy hopeful voice* I hope Turles and Bardock are there, they are SO hot... Ahh, what am I saying! *chants* I love VEGETA, I love VEGETA.... *cough* enough of that. Instead I think I'll add you to my favorites! Although, I don't know if I have already.. anyway, you'll be on there! Till the next chapter, keep up the brilliant work! =P
 Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 13:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, you're welcome for the reviews! Wow, this chapter was.. eventful. I wonder what the atmosphere's gonna be like after this, but hery, why am I asking? All I have to do is read the next chapter... Anyway, I heard most authors like critisisms.... hmm *bashes head against computer screen*.. oh yeah! Could you mabye, make Vegeta more dominant, seeing that's the way he seems in the series anyway.. Ah, don't listen to me, if you did this whole story would just be hundreds of pages complementing every detail of Vegeta.... Well, till the next chapter!
 Title: Oops!
Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh! I've been off the internet for a while, and came back to find you'd updated quite a lot! Sorry I haven't reviewed much! Anywho, I loved this chapter, and there's finaly some action! Although it was good how you didn't rush into things. God I felt so embarrassed(spelled correctly?) for Vegeta in the last chapter, but I'm glad they've both finaly gotton over it! Sorry for not reviewing, I've just finished chapter 5, I'll give you a review per chapter after this. I don't normally do that, but I think this story's exceptional! You've revived my faith in G/V fics! Anyway, an end to this review now...
 Reviewed By: lordofthepies  On: February 14, 2005 08:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Man, that has me on the edge of my seat! Interesting chapters, I can't wait to see what this version on Vegeta-sei is going to be like and what is gong to happen to Goku and Vegeta. I'm also looking forward to when Vegeta fulfils that promise to Goku... Awesome chapter, I'm REALLY looking forward to the next one. (I mean, what a superb cliffhanger!)
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