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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: Larina On: June 12, 2006 02:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow this is the greatest fanfic I have ever read. I kept thinking in my mind that this would be the best Inuyasha movie ever. The way you did everything was just so brilliant. The last two chapters had me in tears. The story was so moving. Omg youre brilliant.
| Reviewed By: leonaenae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 13:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was such a moving story, coming from watching InuYasha as the very first anime I ever really saw reading this fanfic seemed to make the ending solid, give a meaning. I enjoyed this so very much. And am left whole, not wondering about what will happen next. You are a talented writer. Muhaha and I think i shall look at the completion of this story as a gift hehe cause You posted the last chapter on my birthday lol!
| Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: June 06, 2006 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. This story touched me. You did an amazing job of explaining how the character felt. I could really see how the characters developed. This story is very well written and very beautiful. I loved how even though the end was sad it was also happy. I just loved the whole story. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
| Reviewed By: Pam t3h Spam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:03 PDT
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I think the most fun part of reading this was...just the words itself. I don't particularly like Kagome, and my feeling about Sesshoumaru are almost neutral. But it was just such fun to read. I absolutely love your metaphors. This one, from what I just reread: "and inside him something heals so rapidly that it feels exactly like breaking." Mmm. Luff. Write some Inuyasha/Kikyou someday, will ya?
| Title: Kami-sama
Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 00:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is undeniably the ONLY Sess/Kag fanfiction I have ever read. You made me actually like a pairing that I hate. But I still hate them. This story is the only acceptable circumstances for them in my mind and you did a wonderful job on it. Congratulations. You have a convert. I cannot possibly tell you how close this is to my heart right now, especially since I'm feeling a majority of Kagome's emotions in my own life. It made me feel less alone and I am really grateful for that. I needed it. Thank you so much. I think I'll poke around your account and find out what else you have up your sleeve.
| Reviewed By: Togu On: May 26, 2006 09:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i so love this fic! so sad with Kagome dying! *sobs* :D :D :D :D :D o_0
| Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: May 17, 2006 20:32 PDT
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I've heard so much praise for this story over the years, and I've seen and enjoyed the fan art on deviantart, but always hesitated because I'm not a real Sess/Kag fan. Well, who knew? I stayed up all night to read this wonderful tale and would do so again in a minute. Fan fiction at its finest. My most sincere thanks, and well wishes for your continued writing success.
| Title: OH MY GOD
Reviewed By: Lougara On: May 17, 2006 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never really been a fan of Fanfiction. It just doesn't Usually keep my attention-full of "I watched sessho-Maru take of his hakama and pounce on me" crap, all involving themselves and there was no rhyme reason of probability to it. This is believeable. The feel of it is almost as thought Takahashi wrote it herself after her series ended. The emotion overwhelmed me, broke my heart. I even shed a few tears. The squabbles were real-it reminded me so much of my husband and myself that it felt so real!! The characters were alive, had heartbeats, and I felt their emotions. I just cannot describe how this has touched my heart on a number of levels. YOu are a very gifted author and if you can do this for someone else's characters, I would love to see what kind of life you could breathe into your own characters and worlds. Thanks for sharing this gift of imagination and emotion with hopeless romantics like myself. I am mainly an artist and I can tell you i will be adding you to my DEV watch and i will posting some pictures inspired by your story. I have never blieved the Kag/Sess pairing possible, but this has proved me incredibly wrong time after time. Keep up the fantastic work and don't listen to anything anyone tells you. Your work is spectacular and you deserve every bit of praise you receive. Best of wishes in your writing career- Lougara Aeramara Swifthart
| Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: the amber dragonfly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy... dogs... that was the most incredible thing I've ever read. I realize this story has been finished for quite some time, and I'm certain that between FanFiction.net and MediaMiner that you've gotten every sort of comliment and praise possible, but my heart would curl up and die if I didn't let you know how moved I was by this story- I literally cried at the end. Thank you so much for writing such a touching story for us peons to read. You are truly a grand-master of fanfiction writing.
| Reviewed By: Yama Kasai On: May 04, 2006 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... That was so sad yet so beautiful (how cliche of me...)!! *starts bawling* That was by far the BEST Sesshomaru Kagome fic I have read! There are some others that are really well done but this one has the smallest amount of OC-ness and it's totally believable! Not to mention you had me bawling my eyes out on numerous occasions (which makes some stories wonderful in my opinion). Can't tell you enough how much I loved it and I hope you continue writing Sesshomaru/Kagome fan fictions!! (I will also place this review on FF.net but the computer is bitching at me that it doesn't want to... Sorry 'bout the add on!! ^_^U)
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, i have a confession to make. I'm currently writing a Rin Seshy, so have been casting about for some good work to get me into Sesshomaru's character. When i saw your story, i was like mm, Sesh Kag, not my cup of tea at all, but i tried it, and i am SO glad! For me, it's always been Inu Kag, but this captivating story gripped me from the first chappie, and i was wanting Sessh and Kag to get it on pretty soon! That just shows the power of your writing! There's too much for me to praise you on, but this story is brilliant in so many different ways. The characterisation, the imagery, the feelings and i have to say, sexual tension...were painted all so well and beatifully! The plot was excellent, twisitng and turning at the last second, just when you thought you had caught up! And the scenes, wit and Kagome and Sesshomaru's banter was superb! One minute i was laughing, the next my heart racing as my eyes skimmed the page! My favourite parts of the story were, obviously, when Sesshomaru and Kagome departed for the first time and they embraced! Very sweet! but i also adored your portrayal of Kouga- unlike other authors, you didn't shy away from letting Kagome dream what if- which made the story all more realistic. Kouga was definetly a gem. Also Shippo as a casaino owner was a stroke of genuis too! Of course, when Seshoamru is finally free and he and Kagome get back into the apartment and finally get it on was very satisfiying! There's still too much more to say, but my praise for this story can't be put into words as such, so i just want to say thank you for creating such a fab story, and well done! I also looked at your picture on devaart; you clearly have great talents, both in writing and drawing!! Once again, my highest congratulations! Kawaii-Keke-Chan !xxx! P.s- I'm also going to advise all my readers to read your story!
| Reviewed By: Frau On: April 25, 2006 22:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed, I cried...I stayed up for three nights until 6:00 am to finish your story. It is, without a doubt, the best of its genre that I have ever read. If the characters weren't copyrighted I could see it being published in a heartbeat! Keep on writing, maybe an original story to be published? You draw character interaction so well, even though your story is so narrowly focused it is never boring, nor does it drag. Congratulations on a fine piece of work. Frau
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u know about 2 years ago i found this story,but for some reason i stopped reading it cuz i thought it was dumb (so sorry)...i found it again today..and didn't stop reading till the end...my god did i miss out. i have read a lot of fanfiction (and i mean a lot) and your story has become one of the best I have ever read...to think i passed this up b4...god girl, this is an amazing story!! it was too good of a read, i had to finish it b4 i went to bed (and i am in college so sleep is very important). it was very well written, very well done, and just great!! this story is up there with "The Lucky Ones" and any of surics works....give ur self a pat on the back cuz u deserve it for this story..thank you so much for writing it. tessie_fanfic
| Reviewed By: ShalafiRach On: April 22, 2006 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I just want to say that HotM is the one story out of all Fan Fiction that I have read that made me cry. I feel honoured to have been able to read it. The portrail of Sesshoumaru & Kagome was better that fatastic, it was perfect. So well done. 100000/10 ;)
| Reviewed By: pessimisticyethappy On: April 21, 2006 03:41 PDT
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I nearly cried when Kagome died......Gosh, that was so realistic, down to earth..yet light and humorous in some parts. I am glad that you did not make Kagome a mary sue. I am also glad, that you managed to capture the many battles of our heart and emotion. Things cannot go smoothly all the time..there are obstacles that seem impossible to cross over. Yet, with seemingly impossible hard work..we succeed. It's harder than it looks. Always. Thank you for writing this.
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