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| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Blasmurf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Damn you. You made me cry again. Good story. Excellent-f*ng-best-ever story. Damn you. *blow nose*
| Reviewed By: carnelian78 On: November 16, 2006 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story. I never thought I would cry reading a fanfiction, yet I cried towards the end of your story. I hope to read more of your stories. Thanks!
| Title: superb.. ^_^
Reviewed By: ZhapHiRe_heLL [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 04:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story a LOT!!!!!!!!! i cant help but to read and read the story until my eyes hurts and stomach growl... No exaggerating but i sometimes spent my time reading your story... I really love your style... How could you do that?!?
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Sesshomarusmisstress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, its one of the best Kagome/Sesshomaru I have EVER read, not only that, but you had a sense of realism to it, it wasn't like in the fairy tales where they live happily ever after, they actually had to earn what they got, and the bittersweet ending made me cry. You have much talent, you could go very far.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Sesshomarusmisstress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, its one of the best Kagome/Sesshomaru I have EVER read, not only that, but you had a sense of realism to it, it wasn't like in the fairy tales where they live happily ever after, they actually had to earn what they got, and the bittersweet ending made me cry. You have much talent, you could go very far.
| Title: .....
Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very talented, i loved your story. It will stay with me forever, thank you. -AnimeGirl214
| Reviewed By: Blasmurf On: October 09, 2006 09:23 PDT
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You know, I have read the entire story for the tenth time now, and I always finds something new to enjoy in it. Simply magical. That sissy J.K Rowling got nothing compared to you. Keep up! Luv!
| Title: Again i cry
Reviewed By: Chelsea-------- On: September 28, 2006 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this is the second time iv read this and again i cry. I start at this part -A small grimace crossed her face, but he could see the smile hidden in there, somewhere. "If I knew, I'd be saying them. God, I don't know. I feel like I should have something significant to say. Like I should say something wise." "Why?" The lump in his throat squeezed tighter, into something painful that could not be swallowed or willed away. Absently, he marveled that he could still breathe around it.- and then i stop crying about half way next chapter. but then stort up again at -He'd smelled it many times before, and like always it turned his stomach, but he shouldn't be smelling it here, it didn't belong here, and he was suddenly ill. "Kagome - " he thought, reaching out blindly for her comforting presence, but she wasn't there, and the pungent scent was strong, so strong - - Sesshoumaru opened his eyes, his brain screaming at him to run, but there was nowhere to go, even if he escaped the metal prison of the plane, and there was no time anyway, no time at all, and something was going terribly, terribly wrong - I cry so easly plus it didn't happy much that i was listening to There You'll Be at the same damn time :P Anyway still love this story lots ^-^ even if it does make me cry :'(
| Title: Silence is the best compliment sometimes..
Reviewed By: Daal-oujisama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........I have no idea what to say. The prelude was pretty awesome, easily describing what had happened after Kagome's adventures in Sengoku Jidai. I really enjoyed the story that the professor told, it was touching and sweet although it did felt out of character for Sesshomaru. LOL. Very nice job, and I must finish this!
| Title: girl
Reviewed By: Chelse On: September 03, 2006 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved it, and it must have been good because i couldn't keep my eyer off of it... but, one question, wouldnt inuyasha find it strange to see kagome and sesshoumarou (hope i spelled that right) togeather?(know i didn't spell that right)
| Reviewed By: KannaKyomu On: September 03, 2006 00:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know what to say. it's doubtful you wont even read this or split it apart from the other reviews. i'm still crying over this one. i've read others like this, only one has stuck in my mind so well like this one has. but your is definitly difernt from the other. you took it all the way to the end, and tied up so many lose ends i have to commend you. but when it was all said an done, still all i could think of was how horried life really is. how terrible that she never really spoke to Sango, or Shippo. That rin was dead, and jaken was dead, and inuyasha and kikyou and miroku and that life progressed so slowly and that it was cruely wasted on waiting, and fear and panic. and all i wanted to do was cry over all the things they should have done, all the people that we never knew what hapened to them but can only assume their dead. Souta, kouga, myouga. and its a terrible thing that it ended all to soon in an all to unexpected way, that i wished i had stoped reading at chapter 37 when life was good and things were left undone but oh god- there was still time. all the time in the world... i'm sorry to ramble, i dont even feel like going over my grammer. i love your story, its something i will remember for the rest of my oh so short life. now if you'll excuse me.. i'm going to go tell my brother how much i love him..
| Reviewed By: Castaway On: September 02, 2006 15:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Truly an amazing story. It's compelling, moving, and just wonderful. I laughed, I cried, I repeated the quotes at the beginning of chapters to my father. Those quotes were chosen very well, by the way. It was worth the long amount on time it took to read.
| Reviewed By: LilacRose On: August 30, 2006 09:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm trying very hard to act like a respectable writer and not go all fangirl but.... EEEEEEEEEEEE Much better :) I loved the story, it was beautifully written, the imagery was poetic and heartbreakingly beautiful. I love how you kept Sesshoumaru very much in character, even through the end. Stoic but soft beneath the surface. You had me in tears at the end, I mean a step from sobbing, which was good, but bad because I was reading it at work and my co-workers kept asking me questions :P Excellent job, I will most certainly go to look at your other stories!!
| Reviewed By: MoonlightxDestiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this had to be the best fanfiction i have read so far. Like... wow! Great work, and I'll see you in my fav's list. :P
| Reviewed By: MidnightWhispers On: August 20, 2006 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful... Absolutely beautiful! This is by far the best fic I have read and I must say, I enjoyed every minute spent reading it. Different moments in the story made me laugh or cry, and the ending definitely brought tears to my eyes. You're an amazing author and thank you so much for writing this story.
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