| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] |
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: February 19, 2005 05:51 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT I'M nearly in tears tell me they see each other again! OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! this is torture i want them to get together so bad. it's so sad will he be on the other side waiting for her or will she go back again. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: passby-ers
Reviewed By: bayusandiw On: February 19, 2005 03:51 PST
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Kagome is a Coward Aren't they friends? What a lousy way to live... One of my favorite Continuation Angst Sess/Kag Nice writing... ^-^ I read 'Fugue' once upon a time... IT'S GREAT!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: February 18, 2005 17:58 PST
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I have really enjoyed this story so much, thank you. Is this the end for those two? Will they ever be content, do they ever really see each other again?
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: February 18, 2005 10:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God - just how much angst can you fit into one chapter?! You handled Sango beautifully - what WOULD they have had to say to each other? And poor Kagome and Sesshomaru - each with such unresolved feelings... My only hope is that the well doesn't acutally work anymore. Hope to find out soon!
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 07:56 PST
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Good chapter. Kagome's reaction to Sango (as well as Kouga before that) was dead-on. She's seeing that their lives went on after she left; is she coming to realize that she must do the same? I'm glad they're both figuring out how to move on. How many more fairy tales will she be fracturing? That's the part I like the best! Keep up the good work; looking forward to the next interlude.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 06:38 PST
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Just beautiful. I don't know how you manage to be heartbreaking and funny at the same time, but you do.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 18, 2005 05:30 PST
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wow. Simply amazing. I didn't expect that to happen with Sango. Poor Kagome, she had to have been heart broken, seeing her friend in such a state. I adored that part where Kagome called Sesshoumaru "frisky," hehehehhe. So cute, so fitting. And I have to wonder-- will the well accept her? Or will she just fall to the bottom and be stuck with our ever loving Sesshoumaru? Great job! Once again, your rhetoric was beautifully shaped, and those words flowed so gracefully. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us next. I'm realy enjoying this! Keep up the amazing work! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: LoriUWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i love your fanfiction and i hope u review on mine. i haven't wrote long, but you give me alot of insperation. i hope there is more to come.
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Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: February 10, 2005 11:42 PST
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I have thouroghly enjoyed your piece of writing. It has been one of those stories that sticks in my mind and I can't stop thinking about it, can't stop revisting segments of it. You have taken us through a roller coaster of emotional ups and downs. The humor is so well cast. The serious segments have lodged themselves in my hearts and I have come to the verge of tears several times (most significant as I am not an easy crier, rather I just seem to harbor pain and feel it in my heart beats, which I felt as well). I find myself waiting all day until the chance I get to come online and read more of this wonderful story. Finally, or perhaps sadly, I have come across the end of what you have so far posted, so now I am waiting for more postings. The story is brilliant, the idea, the method. The writing itself is of an advanced style that shows the story much rather than requiring the reader to really read the story, if that makes sense. "Tales from the House of the Moon" is just brilliant. Just wonderful.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: February 07, 2005 18:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best story I have ever read in my life. I absolutely love your writing style. Thank you for this piece of mind candy
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: February 07, 2005 13:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed you fic. It's different. You've managed to have Kagome come back to the Fuedal Era after the well was closed which most people haven't. They usually let them meet in Kagome's time. You have also managed to get Kagome and Sesshomaru acquainted without getting Sesshomaru OOC very much. Most of the ones I've read with him in it haven't accomplished that. I look forward to your updates. Bai
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 10:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so amazing, I'm surprised you dont have more reviews, but be assured it was very enjoyable to read. Hope to see more chapters soon! ^_^
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 10:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so amazing, I'm surprised you dont have more reviews, but be assured it was very enjoyable to read. Hope to see more chapters soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 06, 2005 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouuu, this is really good! You have a very unique style of writing that flows like beautiful poetry. The emotion is very raw and pure at times and it makes me feel as if I am one of them, in their place, experiencing the exact same things. I think that you have captured the very essence of what is Kagome and Sesshoumaru. And then there's that subtle feeling that they are slowly healing each others broken hearts. Its not over the top and over done like many others have previously done. Instead it's just well, for lack of better words, perfect. It really is a remarkable thing! There have just been so many things that I have enjoyed about this story that I do not think that I can even begin to this them all. You really keep me on my toes and guessing at what will happen next. I wonder how Sango will take to seeing her old friend who has yet to age as she has? I am sad to come to the end of the last completed chapter-- I wish I could just read on and on until the whole story was finished, te he he. I especially loved it that Kagome actually went through with her plan and kicked Kouga in the balls, hahahaha. I most definitly laughed out loud for that one. Well, once again, I enjoyed this to pieces and I cannot wait to read more! I hope that there is more to come in the near future. Great job and keep up the amazing work! You most definitly have my full support in what ever you do. take care, and thanks for writing this fabulous story!!!!! --Aitu
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