| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 23:54 PDT
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again with the wonderful chapter...everytime i think you cant come up with something more amusing you go and prove me wrong again. if only i knew the depths to which your ideas lurk..well anyways this is honestly one of THE best fanfics i have ever read(it keeps me chuckling and guessing. Keep up the totally awesome work and update soon as im really looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:59 PDT
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Alright! You had me laughing out loud! I especially liked the eating the pieces of sunlight vacation bit...HAAA! Nice chapter you're building the characters and story wonderfully! I like this new fighting instructor, I can tell he is going to be a hoot! Can't wait for the next installment...BEWARE THE SPOON!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: May 13, 2005 21:42 PDT
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yayyyy. you updated with another chapter! the suspense! haha. :]
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Reviewed By: lonestar On: May 13, 2005 18:03 PDT
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I have been reading your story for awhile now. Sorry for not reviewing sooner. I love it and I'm so happy when I see a new chapter. I love how you are able to weave the intense situations with a little humor. Great story keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 17:12 PDT
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Yay! *shamelessly worships Resmiranda's updates* I loved this chapter, although I'm marveling at Sesshy's patience with her pouting. Of course, I'd be pouting, too... *crunch* Your ending line definitely lightened up the mood of the chapter, which was a bit dark. I also liked the bit where Sesshomaru is asking/saying 'you understand'. At this point in time, Kagome truly is beginning to understand what a complex creature he is. She's probably the only one who ever will understood him, which is terribly poignant when you think about it. *Lavender eagerly awaits the next installment*
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Title: Yay! New chapter!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 15:00 PDT
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As always, kudos for the witty, sparkling dialogue, both internal and external. I like how you're developing the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and Fuyu is delightful. Great job. Among the many gems in this chapter, I particularly liked: "Is that supposed to make me feel better?" she asked. "Because I have to say it's not very comforting to be reminded that you like stabbing people with your hands when you sleep ten feet away from me." Great job!
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Title: WOW o.o
Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this a wonderful story!!!! it took me a whole week to read what you have so far, but trust me dear it was well worth it ^^ you protray sesshoomaur so well it's amazing, and the homur in it is a comfort for some reason lol ;P keep up the wondeful work ^^ oh and by the way what are you doing letting us read this for free! not that i'm complaing or anything but really girl this is great stuff! -jinx
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Title: Tales From The House Of The Moon
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 14:09 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Hikari no Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if kagome's been gone for over 40 yrs.. than doens't that make Rin... old... so she wuld alreay b a women of of 40 sumthin yrs old. She wuldn't b the little girl anymore, she'd b fully formed. I just thought I shuld point that out. Etou... good story!
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is that I love all your stories. They are exquisitely written, character accurate, new OC perfect, and paced brilliantly. I hope that you are a Rurouni Kenshin fan. I think you would do a brilliant job of written a fan fic for RK as well. I love "Fugue" as my personal favorite b/c of it's darkness, flashbacks, and complexity. And being a person who enjoys ALL types of written, I am no prude and think the lemons are well written and not random or sordid-just as powerful as the entire story. Looking forward to the next update soon.
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Title: Jackia
Reviewed By: Jackia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strong chapter, but VERY WELLL Written, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahah! I just found it funny that one of your OCs' name is just like mine (my heroine's) No one seemed to say her name right. Usually Ayame or Ayama, or something. What's so hard about Amaya anyway? Did you have that problem (which isn't exactly a problem) ? (Why did I find this funny…? I have no idea.) Fab as always T-T one of the best stories I've ever read…but I'm sure you hear that a lot. That last bit was amusing. I'm itching to know what happens. Pardon my hasty review!
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Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to give you another review. I think it deserves many many reviews a chapter, but my hand is far too itchy to press the 'next chapter' button. Sorry. It's more than enjoyable. Do you write for a living O.o ? I don't usually give 10/10 in EVErything, (not to say I have great taste or talent when it comes to spotting great stories)but this one can't be anything but great. It just can't. A great read!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: April 30, 2005 07:57 PDT
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awesome chapter. I live for your updates. haha. :]
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Biggest anime fan 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 06:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story. Beautifully written. So sad T-T Couldn't stop reading until I got to the end of the chapter. I've only read the prologue so far. I'm very happy Darkflameangel told me about this ^_^ thank you for sharing it with us!
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