| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eternal Willow On: October 04, 2005 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...all I can say...wow...that's and ending to a chapter...Really...somebody can actually flame THAT? Please, update, can't wait for the next...no, i can wait...take all the time you need!
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Reviewed By: pixieme On: October 04, 2005 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It can't end like this! I love this story so I EAGERLY await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lavender (as usual, too lazy to sign in) On: October 04, 2005 10:56 PDT
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All that suspense - and now I'm dying from the cliff-hanger. If I didn't love it so much, I'd cry. *worships you shamelessly*
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Reviewed By: MsMatty35 On: October 03, 2005 23:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Sesshoumaru turned in the air just in time to see Kagome hit the ground, a dagger buried in her throat. It's like. To end it there. It just killed me. *Dies* I will say that this chapter was simply amazing. All the emotions. before they went to the shrine and she said goodbye, it all felt very dark and bleak. It's like she was emotionally distancing herself from him, and of course he didn't understand why she was doing it and he didn't like it so he was doing it to her. Fuyu telling her about what would he do without her. that made me cry cause it was such a loaded question. Kagome doesn't think, or doesn't want to hope, that she matters to him. It's easier to believe that she is just an obligation to him and nothing more. Then him telling her that she smells like Morning? Oh dear, more bawling, that parting was horrible and then I understood. She wanted him to fight her, to stay. Because if he did that then she would KNOW that he cared and it wasn't the bonds of "obligations" and stuff that kept him with her, even though she should know better already. When she realized that he hadn't left(and I knew he wouldn't. He wouldn't leave her to die, that wouldn't be him. He cares too much even if he fights himself every step of the way). Then the end. I loved him being upset at her having shot her arrow while he was there and then at figuring out his excuses for staying. I love this fanfic, you are great and now i shall practice patience
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Title: holy balls!
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: October 03, 2005 22:10 PDT
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Gah!!! WTF....o no...you didnt just end a chapter with that big of a cliffie did you? Thats just cold...Your long labored hours on this chapter definately paid off. I had the inkling something bad was gonna happen, geez i do hate it when im right sometimes. Since i know you wouldnt leave us hanging that bad....i look VERY eagerly forward to the next chapter. *foaming at the mouth in anticipation of the next spine tingling attention riveting all encompassingly important chapter* i may go through HotM withdrawls in the meantime though. *bows down to Resmirandas fanfic genius* Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: SamusOnPMS On: October 03, 2005 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG cliff hanger to the max! I love how you didn't outright reveal to the reader that Kagome was stabbed in the throat. It added to the suspense and I can't wait until you are able to write the next chapter ^_^ Love your work!
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Reviewed By: Adria (Iggy incognito) On: October 03, 2005 18:31 PDT
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Dammit! You sure know how to write an evil cliffhanger and when you really want to, don't you? I'm not even trying to predict what will happen, I'm not going to ask is Sess is going to sure tenseiga, because that's not my style. All I'm going to say is I'm praying for more of that big glowing feeling that I was getting when Kagome decided that she wanted to *live* beyond her ending. (Fucking brillant, by the way)Anyway, I don't need to tell you that I liked it. Duh, you already know. I'm also crossing my fingers for a quicker update this time, but hey...uh, no pressure or anything. Honest.
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Reviewed By: JCXO26 On: October 03, 2005 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if i have written a review in the past but .. this is probably one of the best stories i have ever read. It is so hard to find a quality fanfic that not only has a decent and believable plot but also wonderful prose. I hope y ou update soon! =]
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Title: !!! (Chapter 33)
Reviewed By: Alesyira (nsi) On: October 03, 2005 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most definitely fantastic. A thousand !!!!!!!'s should go in here, for that's all I could think of as I read. Fantastic. Fantastic!!
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Reviewed By: SamusOnPMS On: October 03, 2005 10:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finished reading your story up to this point and want to let you know that this is an amazing story. I found no errors in your grammar, the humor was contageous, and the characters have been so well rounded that I am able to sympathize with each. Your description of emotions and feelings really touch me, and I love your writing style. Please, keep writing this excellent work, and I'll be be checking up on it regularly. I head about your works from deviantart and I'm glad I looked you up! From a line editor at a publishing company, I love your story and hope you get to update it soon!
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Reviewed By: charsiewbao On: October 02, 2005 20:50 PDT
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still no update?! grr...i am hopiing the next 1 is up soon!
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Reviewed By: Kalia Ryuki On: September 29, 2005 17:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved what you've done so far, but I'm really wondering when the newest chapter will be out... I've fallen in love with the setting and this pairing, while odd, has it's merits. I've written plenty of fan-fics in my day and this is one of the best I've seen as of yet. I'm eagerly awaiting for the newest chapter, and would even love to recieve a mail about its' tentative release date. Domo Arigatou! Kalia Ryuki
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Reviewed By: Roex On: September 20, 2005 05:06 PDT
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....is that it?... i was liking the storyline, sortof, but ALOT of this fic is extremely too wordy, and i started to get bored and my mind would drift off to other things, like the television. and... around chapter 30 i started to get the hint that this was going to have a shitty ending, and it turns out that i was half right. theres no ending at all. it just stopps abruptly. did you get bored with writing this? are you not done? standing as it is its rather shitty. i mean, some parts i REALLY liked...mainly just that one part where kagome wakes up from the dream and rips sess's clothes off, but, yea... um..... ...yea. no.
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Title: RAWR!!
Reviewed By: Where are you??? On: September 19, 2005 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Res! Where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?? Alas, in the FF.net profile, it said three weeks? Oh, I am lost without the damn update! I have reread the fic about seven times already!! It's making me pathetic-er than I already am... Anyways, update! Please! I beg, no, I IMPLORE of you, please, please, update. As soon as you can. Of course, no pressure! (DO THE FREAKING UPDATE!!)
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Reviewed By: amazing_gummybear22@charter.net On: September 11, 2005 18:14 PDT
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aah crap I typed in a heart and it got messed up.. Basically, I love the way you write because you have such extensive vocabulary and sometimes I find the words you use to contain most of the humor in the story... XD Question: is Shippo the god? ._. It seems very unlikely but I doubt that he's really in Argentina. Hehe....
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