| "Tales from the House of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 509 ] |
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, great story! I was exposed to this story by the fanguild and I have to tell you, you got my vote. The fights you portray with Fluffy and Kagome are great. I have found myself laughing out loud on many occasions! You have done a wonderful job developing the characters. I actually feel sad for Fluffy and think that maybe he has just be lonely and misunderstood all this time. I can not wait to see where you go with this "fairytale" and Fluffy and Kagome's feelings! This new opponent will be a tough one considering she has a god on her side.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 00:54 PST
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I really love your story. It has been great fun reading. The humor is great. It has also been very compeling and sad at times. I like how you have blended the serious and heart wrenching aspects with humor and fun. Great job please continue. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed on) On: March 05, 2005 00:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!! Two new chapters and thier back together again. I can't wait to read what happens. Also it was so cute how they were to slow addmit they missed each other. But hoefully that will change now. I can't wait to read more. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: LoriUWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 22:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there, Wolf again, i'd just like to say i love your fanfic evenmore, and i can hardly wait until you update again. take care and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: March 04, 2005 20:04 PST
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YAYYYY. THERE ARE TWO MORE CHAPTERS. YAYYYYY. great story. I absolutely love it. :]
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Aya-sama (too lazy to log in) On: March 04, 2005 16:30 PST
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YES!!! another chapter!! lol. I aboslutely love this story, it is my favourite. you are absolutely awesome. My favourite line in this chapter was: "..even were he to be less than exquisitely fascinating, the world should bend to him and not the other way around." The way you write the characters makes them seem so ... like them. anyway, keep writing! I am wanting to see the next chapter soon!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 04, 2005 13:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehe now hurry hurry hurry and update again i really really love your story and i really really really wanna see what gonna happen next! ^___^ i'm so happy you updated!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet, still not signed in On: March 04, 2005 10:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee! What a great reunion...and a wonderful jeopardy for Kagome. And fabulously descriptive writing, as always. I loved how you paralleled Sesshoumaru and Kagome's thoughts about one another, and Shina is going to make an interesting villain. Powerful enough to send Kagome into retreat at their first encounter...the scenes of plague-ridden Edo were vivid and gruesome. Oh, and more thing--I loved how you had Kagome actually prepare for her journey this time by taking lessons in the use of the sword. Great job, and thanks for update.
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Title: Yay! Two new chapters!!
Reviewed By: Sharibet (not logged in_ On: March 04, 2005 10:04 PST
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Fist of all, loved, loved, LOVED this image: Before, he had simply been 'Inuyasha's Jerk Brother'; he had just been a two dimensional portrait in the entrance hall of her head. Now, however, he had stepped down from that painting with all the haughty arrogance of the prince that he was and casually strolled into her most private rooms, no doubt dryly commenting on the rather pedantic decor as he went. Great job, as always, Resmiranda. I love how you're gradually letting Kagome admit the change in her feelings towards Sesshoumaru--often, a person needs space from the heat of the moment to figure out what it all Meant. ::smile:: Just a short review this time, because I'm eager to continue on to the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: nrok829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 08:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I reviewed you at the other site of A Single Spark but I wanted to review here too because you don't have a lot. I love this fic! It's so well thought out and the interactions of Sess and Kagome are wonderful! I couldn't stop reading it when I started.
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Reviewed By: fuush On: March 03, 2005 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutly amazing. I just started it today and have not been able to stop. Truly amazing!!! This has been one of my favorite Kag/Sess pairings in the longest time. You portray the characters in such a magical way and have done a wonderful job of easing into the relationship unlike most Kag/Sess pairings. Kudos to you and your wonderful story. I know you must hate this, as most writers do, but try to update as soon as you can. Through out the read i have been crying (I'm horribly mushy) and when I read the evil hang over of doom I started bawling!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer On: March 01, 2005 06:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing style and your treatment of the characters. The way you have potrayed the inner-workings of Sesshomaru's mind is wonderful. He's actually a pretty funny guy, without meaning to be, of course. I think you've had very good insight on the relationship between him and Rin. And why wouldn't he be like any other father baffled by a female child's behaviour? There are way too many fanfics that have Rin as either a pet or a mate-to-be. I think it's great how you've eased into the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome. I wouldn't have considered them a potential air until I read your fics. Myouga's observations of them are hilarious. I look forward to your next chapters. Will she be prompted by another story to go back, or will he find his way to her? My heart is breaking for both of them. Let us know if you ever have anything professional published. I would be speedin' out to the bookstore to buy your stuff! Good luck with your writing. --Candy cbrayton@cofchrist.org
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 21:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW what a fanfic! keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE? i just can't wate to find out what happens!!!! please? update update update!!!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: February 19, 2005 21:28 PST
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whew. that was a long read. but definitely worth it. your story is wonderful, magnificent, fantastic. I can't wait to read more. please update soon :]
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: February 19, 2005 05:51 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I CAN'T WAIT I'M nearly in tears tell me they see each other again! OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! this is torture i want them to get together so bad. it's so sad will he be on the other side waiting for her or will she go back again. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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