| "To Serve and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love seeing Seto humbled. He deserved more than a spaking for what he did to Joey! I sure it was psychologically more effective than anything else. Joey as a great game designer, I love it. Seto will learn to handle guns if it kills him, with Joey's method. I am sure it is the most effective way. He shouldn't go back to the police, I hope they offer him the moon and would love to see their faces when he turns them dow. Great work. Love the research and time and effort you put into this.
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Reviewed By: aliascatts On: June 05, 2005 09:26 EDT
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Oh My now that was a treat! Absolutly wonderful, the way that you write is loaded with imagery. I really like the matching earings.....yummy. I am looking forward to the next chapter if MM will let me find it. I can't wait to see what Mokie will do next to the Department especially scince Tanaka and the Comish were at the fight. I look forward to the next installment....L8r Catts
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gonna try this. If it doesn't work, I'll email it. "And we'll rub their noses in how a prime fighter like you should be treated." Ooo perfect!!! Joey's gi *Kitty drools* Sounds beautiful. Joey telling Seto how to handle those people... *cackles* Joey, don't teach your grandma to suck eggs... "What do I get for . . . say . . . a bracelet?" "My ass." *falls over laughing* He's such a stinker! *drools* caviar. Yumm! Oh wow, the fight. Fantastic job writing it!! *laughs* I loved Seto's message too. I knew Yugi wouldn't be able to watch. Oh well, he showed and that's what counts. The convo with Seto and Narita was a wonderful dance itself. *groans* Gods, I'm craving caviar now. You evil creature you!! "Only barbarians offend the taste of caviar by overlaying it with that junk. Or else they're only eating it because it's expensive and they want to show off." YES!!! I'm not the only one who eats it naked! *blinks* And that so came out wrong. "Me? Perish the thought." *Kat chokes on her drink* OOOOOOOO Watanabe lost face big time! I LOVE IT! Dayum, that is fresh seafood. Hell, now I want sashimi. You're hell on my diet. *G* Damn, great ending. Loved it. Was great to finally get a chance to sit down and read it!
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Title: Sorry I'm so late with this!
Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Seto hiding from Mokuba.. that's a first! (and I love it!) I'd wondered when they were going to cut Joey loose. Bastards... *stands and applauds* I love his plan for delivering his gun and shield! Beyond priceless!! "I suddenly have the urge to be a kept man." *falls over howling* Seto as a sexual sub makes perfect sense. *cackles madly* Only Seto would think of a contract *has weird visuals of how the negotiations would run*. *hugs Yanagi* I love your Mokuba. He's fun, smart and makes his big brother scared. *cracks up* Love the hanging out bit too. *G* Such media hounds when the game's right. The earrings, loverly! Great way to describe the Maeda situation. Makes perfect sense!!! Ohhh so that's why Joey can't keep weight on. Too much of a good thing. "But, Mokuba gave a nasty little smile, when the time was right the department was going to look like shit." *laughs* Go Mokuba! Okay, let's see if MM will let me do two reviews in a row...
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Thanks for two chapters. When I see you have updated I drop everything else and read it. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Great work.
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Reviewed By: Maggiemay On: May 30, 2005 20:26 EDT
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Okay...biting my nails here waiting for the next chappie... Great Job! Maggiemay
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Reviewed By: aliascatts On: May 30, 2005 13:58 EDT
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Hey another great chapter. The thought of Joey and Seto getting mixed up was great. I am looking forward to the revenge that was hinted at. I can't wait for more. BTW I hope every thing will be okay with your dad. I hope to see more soon L8r Catts
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 01:09 EDT
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Oooo worth every minute of waiting. I hope your father is okay. Seto imitating Joey's accent.... (insert sound of hysterical laughter here). Was priceless. The party was a cool move on Seto's part. Mokuba's reaction, oh gods. I almost cried from laughing so hard. Wait 'till he sees Joey in action, he'll wet himself when he remembers the threats. They way Yugi handled Tea was fantastic. "hides a multitude of sins" Love it, love it, love it! Oooo yeah! Coffee! Damn, watch your mailbox, I forgot something. *kicks self*
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your dad is okay. Keep up the good work. I really liked this chapter. Update as soon as you can please.
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Reviewed By: aliascatts On: April 26, 2005 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! I can just see Joey in full leathers an with all that fire power....*droolz* I hope that you update this story soon I can't wait for the party and to see what Yugi et al have planned! l8r Catts
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I guess Seto is learning that even expensive doesn't mean good. You have done an extraordinary job researching. You should be proud. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: maggiemay On: April 21, 2005 01:26 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter. I am very impressed with your research and your attention to detail. Please...Please keep up the good work. Oh...and the bannister scene...lol...I can so see Jou doing that. Maggiemay
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Reviewed By: Lil Miss Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 23:35 EDT
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Dayum, Joey really is loaded for war! *laughs* I haven't heard the term gas-leaker in ages. Those barettas do sound sweet. Loved the lime too. Good job on that. The pillow fight was a treat, thanks. Had me in hysterics. Everyones' reactions to their closeness was funny. Oooo Joey and the bannister had me howling. Loved the revenge on Honda! Damned perfect. Can't wait to see the party and why they didn't want Seto to tell Joey that they'd called. This ought to be interesting, to say the least! I can't believe the Seto the Pervert didn't get some interesting ideas after hearing that Joey is double-jointed! I certainly did.... wow, oversharing much, Kat? *G* Next chapter's gonna be fuuuuun. Hell, the whole damned story has been a hell of a ride!
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Title: its me bookwormloverjen
Reviewed By: bwlj On: April 20, 2005 21:26 EDT
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wow that was good for a first...well i've never wrote any and i don't know if i will, but this was great very very good
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! They are really getting to know each other. Honda is a royal cree, I'm glad he is getting his. Yay, Joey! Great story well researched and a great plot.
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