| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Title: WHIGGDA LIGABSUMU
Reviewed By: IGGA DIGGA BADU On: April 11, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: niftyness
Reviewed By: moogle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm loving this series, keep it up and keep pumping out the oishi material =)
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Title: fun-ness!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, so cute! I like this story! Wet puppies are so cute but stinky! Lol! I hope you continue! Don't you hate it when romantic moments and compromising positions are interrupted?...that sucks! Keep writing, yay!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol That was an awesome chappy! I loved the ending! It sucks getting caught by ur parents after u & ur bf were jus making out. Well they were almost kissing but same thing. Of course the fact that theyre all wet would make it look suspicious. Well cant wait to hear Kag & Inu explain to her mom. UPDATE SOON!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 09, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wet dog's that just reminds me that mine looks more like a mop that way then normal!!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi again! weee, I still care cuz I'm obviously reviewing. so, ya, do the update thingy again and all. I'm at a super big writers block and wouldn't know a good idea right now if it smacked me in the face screaming 'You super big baka, I can help you with all your fics! Just use me!' now I look back at what it's screaming, and it just looks so wrong. Sorry I can't help you in the idea department, I believe I just explained why. so, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter: 9 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Title: hiya!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 02, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
too tired to write must sleep no staying up till 2am again then waking up earlie! ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz................
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:21 CST
Comment/Review:
HI! uh...update again soon and stuffs and all. um, darn I forgot. I review cuz I care. Wow, I care about alot of people! whelps, I gotta go to my cousins comfirmation now, so, bye!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter 8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!!!
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Title: grr,.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi On: March 29, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrr... evil cliffy!!!!!
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Title: Chapter Four
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: March 29, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The feathers at the end of an arrow are the Fletching and the tree is Goshinbou
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERUS i like it i love it i wont to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
*gasp* NO! Not the evil cliffy! How could you be so MEAN to your devoted fans?! lol just kidding. But really... PLEASE update again soon.
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: March 28, 2005 21:49 CST
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That made absolutely no sense. Kagome was helpless when Kouga was about to rape her and then all the sudden she can pick him up by the neck and threaten him a minute later? Poor writing skills... incorrect spelling... extreme grammar problems... You need help. GET A BETA!!!!
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