| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i whant to read more. will you keep wrighting and soon?
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Reviewed By: Lilitha Chaos On: May 11, 2005 20:23 CDT
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I have just now got to read your fanfic and I love it so far. I do not like to use the rating thing much because I just...don't. Anyways the over all rating to me would be nine out of ten. I hope that you will update it soon so I can know what will happen. ^^
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Title: Coolies!!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo good!!! I read all of it just today!! Awesome story!! (Also, if you still need a Beta reader or sumthin, my e-mail addy is mari@cityofshalom.com, feel free to send me anything!!)
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I CANT WAIT TO HEAR MORE FROM YOUR BRILIANT MIND!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love Chapter:20 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 21:14 CDT
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noooooo--such a mean cliffy-grrrrr
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (too lazy to login) On: May 09, 2005 18:46 CDT
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well that was... odd. Great chappy, but you shouldnt make Sessy's mate faint while she's pregnant. Tsk, tsk. You know it's not good for the baby lol. Cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: mauisarah On: May 09, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great but enough with the cliffys I wanna know what happens. make the next chappie as long as you can and give all the info you can as well i wanna know what happens. ok thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:28 CDT
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I thought that that fluffy thing over his shoulder was his tail....well, I'm an idiot then. update soon, and quit with the damn cliffies!! ja.
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 09, 2005 15:32 CDT
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Lurv the new chappies! Sorry I haven't reviewed...I've been in L.A. for 4 days. There's a mistake I noticed--Sesshomaru actually does have a tail. You know the big fluffy boa-like thing that always draped around him? Well if you really pay attention, there's only one end. The other end is attached to his bum. It took me a really long time to figure that out, though, so I doubt very many people have noticed it. And also: on my last review you didn't know what I meant. What I meant was that when you kept changing paces it was kinda confusing. Like when you went really fast it was like: Ex. The girl brushed her teeth, combed her hair, and went to bed. That may seem good, but it is very plain and needs more description. You have done that a couple of times. The other part of othe problem is when you go to slow. This doesn't happen very much but its happen a few times. What you sometimes do is dwell on the same subject for a little too long. Just try not to go on and on about something, k? Omg...I just re-read what I just wrote and I hope I'm not being too harsh!! Eek! I'm trying not to sound like a meany...I'm only trying to help, so if you think I'm being a doody head, I'm sorry. Just keep in mind that I will always love and cherish you and your fics. Muah! Please update soon!!!
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Title: i'm like never signed in am i?
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 09, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao you believe in the tail to? everyone keeps telling me it's a pelt of fur from his father but i saw the 3rd movie and his father had a tail to!!! but his was really diffrent! wel keep up the good work and update again soon!!! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 08:41 CDT
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Ok, the error was supposed to be in green and there's no color that I can see. So what I meant is that InuYasha accidently says he forgot it was a full moon instead of a new moon. Sorry.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the food for thought. You have to get another chapter up today or I'll cry! Pleeeease!!!!! The suspence is killing me. Also, I noticed a small error you may want to fix. InuYasha stopped in his tracks. The new moon? How could he have forgotten?... "Fuck fuck fuck", he muttered over and over. Sango and Miroku noticed InuYasha had stopped and was now muttering to himself. "Um InuYasha is there something wrong", Sango asked. "I forgot that it's the full moon tonight. Just thought you'd want to know. Keep writing! ^_^
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Title: a review from your bestest friend!!!!!(right?)
Reviewed By: MERCY_LUVS_YA On: May 07, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY RACH IT WAS AWSOME. YOUR REALLY GOOD AT WRITING. KEEP AT IT ITS REALLY AWSOME!!!!THERE BETTER BE ALOT MORE CHAPTERS! ITS SAD I DONT EVEN WATCH INU YASHA AND I FIND YOUR FANFIC REALLY HOT! SO GOTTA GO! FINISH 20 NOW!!!!!! LUV YA! MERCY ARE YOU HAPPY YOU HAVE 82 NOW!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 16:06 CDT
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update again soon. I liked today's food for thought. sounds like something that me or one of my friends would come up with. ^_^ ja!
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