| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:52 CDT
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yeah!!!kikiyo die!!!mwahaha--i cant believe the awful cligffy --grrr- but we all know she isnt going to die cause then ur story would stink!!--update soon
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 09:47 CDT
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update soon please. I'd say more, but my illness is preventing it. bye!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:17 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: April 27, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter, sorry I didn't review last chapter, for some reason, and I figured out why, it wouldn't let me make a review. This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I think you should continue it and people need to review or they don't get stories, that the problem. They think that a story is already formatted, but fail to notice that it isn't, each chapter in improvised and their opinions and ideas should be heard to make he story better. I know, I'm an author aswell.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:16 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*not logged in* On: April 25, 2005 21:33 CDT
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Hiya, chapter 16 was good! Okay: goodbye-sayonara, hi-konnichi wa, I'm sorry-sumimasen, no-iie, good morning-ohayo gozaimasu, good night-oyasuminasai, thank you-arigato(add "domo" if its polite thank you, "domo arigato", like the song "domo arigato mr. roboto." lol), please-yokereba, you're welcome-do itashimashite, rest in peace-yasumu de heiwa. There you go! If there are anymore you need its not a problemo at all! Looking forward to the next chappy!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 20:01 CDT
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My head is killing me, and I didn't even finish my whole glass of wine last night at passover dinner. I think my darkside has a bigger hangover than me, she gets drunk off the fumes. ^_^ update again soon. I know it can get annoying when things keep getting erased. It happenes mostly to my mom, but I'm the one who ends up fixing it. >.< buh byes.
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
love ta storie... write more write more write more! *coninues to chant* well this stori rulz. catchya round.! cya
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 19:15 CDT
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If you're sick, you have no business being on the computer, you'll give whoever else dares to get on the computer after you your illness. Update, only once you feel better. If I find out that some poor sap got sick from being on the computer after you, I'll- uh...hey! I'm sorry my darkside is trying to push out of my brain and threaten you with your life...because you are going to make them all, and I swear I will- aack! better go before she tells you to kill everyone. ja ne!
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Title: yea!
Reviewed By: InuYqashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 20, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you bringing Lord Fluffy in! ^___^ well anywho i'mma gonna be at my friends house this weekend and she's got a scanner so i can get the pic hopefully to you this weekend if not later!!! ^__^ cna't wate for you to update again keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter: 15 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 20:57 CDT
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yeah!!--good job and keep writing---I HOPE U GET BETTER SOON! =)
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: April 19, 2005 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey~i really like your story so far!! if you really want those japanese words you can just say which words you want in ur next chappy and i can give them to you. im learning japanese and i have a dictionary so i can look anything up. i think your story is very creative so far, but i think you could be a little more descriptive. maybe right before you post each chapter you shuld read through it really quick and fix your errors--they're minor, but they can get a little confusing at times. please update soon! i'll be looking forward to it! im also adding you to my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Gurl (don't feel like logging in) On: April 19, 2005 15:46 CDT
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Shippo's so cute, 'Adults are weird, I hope i never turn into them.' too bad, he'll be one before he knows it, mwa ha ha ha. k, so update again soon and stuffs. Tuzeiga, cuz it sounds kinda like InuYahsa's thingy. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Amantes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, please continue it.
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