| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Title: gross
Reviewed By: mistressofmoonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 12:37 CDT
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if katara is kagome's aunt then sesshy is her uncle whish makes Inu related to her in some way by marraige although my guess is he is probably one of those twoce removed on my dad's uncles side type relatives. THAT'S SO WIERD! So that means Rin would be her cousin by marraige and would she call Sesshy uncle? So many twisted things... *runs and grabs Kouga, hugging him tightly. "I love you Kouga!" Kouga prays to the heavens, "I love her a lot, but must she be so clingy?" The heavens open up and say, "Yes." Kouga asks why. The heavens say, "cuz torturing you is so damned fun." Kouga sighes in defeat adn looks around for me, I come out with a whip. "Kouga..."* Kouga would't rape kagome. He's actually quite nice. He's one of the better demons. If you want to give him a mate, please let me be her! Long black hair with purple streaks and blue tips hair, green eyes, the marking of a cherry petal on my forehead, wrists, and back. Aqua wolf ears, and pale, almost whtie skin. Name- Namida. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Good story by the way.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 19:04 CDT
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really good for your first try at a lemon. update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Some Dude1234567890 On: June 19, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter! KEEP IT UP *some dude gives this story a two thumbs up* (b^_^)b
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Reviewed By: morbid-angel On: June 19, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, love your new characters,and me like smutty goodnes. Now all you kneed to do is bring that same amount of plesure into Inuysaha and Kagome's relationship. What exactly is the relationship between Miroku and sango? I cant wait for the next chapter. What will Katara do to Seshomeru for revenge? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plot twist! Dude, that ending was completely unexpected. I like. The lemon was very well done as well. Keep up the good writing! ^_^
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Title: WTF!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!!!!!!! I don't know what that dumb person who gave u that hate review u told us bout in chap 9 is talking about. They are so out of whack it's not even funny! Don't listen to a word they say. Your story is awsome.
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Title: Woot-ness!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff, great stuff. Miroku should learn to keep his mouth shut...oh well. Love the story! Yay! Lemon chappie coming up! ^_^ Anyways keep writing cuz you're good at it!
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Title: wow... great OC in your story
Reviewed By: Narakus_Incarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I have to say great work! At first I wasn't really into the story... but now... *eye twitches* PLEASE UPDATE...SOON! If you don't..I...I *falls on floor twitching* (chants to self) "must read about Katura"(is that how u spell it?) *Kagura swoops in* there you are baka *secures baka in strait jacket while I continue to twitch* *kagura pulls feather out of her hair and leaves*
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Narakus_Incarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first read this story, I wasn't too into it, but now...*eye twitches* um..PLEASE UPDATE! *falls on floor twitching* AHH! *Kagura walks in rolling her eyes, picks twitching person up and walks out, shaking her head*
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 05, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouch, 700 years?? I like your chapter, really good
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 13:35 CDT
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fun, fluffy, scary and funny. all in one chappie, good job! update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Some Dude1234567890 On: June 05, 2005 01:44 CDT
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I sat on my chair and read it all in one sitting LOL! AWESOME FANFIC! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!
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Reviewed By: OH MY GOD On: May 28, 2005 19:20 CDT
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ok first inuyasha becomes human on the new moon not the full moon as it says in chapter 20 and i cant believe you brought elemental powers into this this is going to become so confusing i mean now she can probably do all kinds of crap and i really hate it when other people become stronger than inuyasha it just shouldn't happen and also it would be cool if kagome got a rosary like inuyasha then when she went full deamon he could put her into the ground
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Title: Yay.
Reviewed By: donnie_fae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 22:41 CDT
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I really love the story, but I'm a bit worried about the spelling and puncuation... Anyways, thanks for killing off Kikyo (muhahahaha) and making Kagome just like Inuyasha!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i* On: May 22, 2005 21:41 CDT
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its getting better and better and better and better and....you know where I'm going with this! keep it up!
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