| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 05, 2005 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya miss me? lmao i know you did!!! ^__^ anywho a beta reader is a editor for you fanfic and i know some people if some dont say that they want to do it! ^__^ well back to the reviews i loved it!!!! keep up the good work and update again soon pleaSE? and let me guess the person Sesshy wanted Kagome to met is Demonoe?!?!?!!?! lmao keep up the good work and update again soon please? pleasE? pleasE? i'll give you a COOKIE!!!!!
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Title: Secrets And Changes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! When my email alerted me that you had posted the new chapter I was so happy!!! I notices a major improvement in your spelling and grammar by the way. You still have some kinks, but you're improving and that's what counts. IN answer to your BETA question...as far as I know it is a simple spell-checker. It usually comes standard in most writing programs. Microsoft Word definately has one. So if you were to start writing in that program, you can simply spell check with a small button. I really enjoyed this chapter. But you have me wigging on what Sesshomaru wants. You have to get the next chapter up of I'll go insane thinking on. Pretty please with sprinkles!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:19 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, very interesting ^^.... Just one thing, 'te quiero' in spanish means 'I want you', 'te amo' means 'I love you' (sorry, it's the grammar nazi coming out in me). Again, great story!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! you updated! When are we gonna find out what that star means??? I loved the chappy! Update SOON
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Title: ahhhhhh
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've caught my interest....UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ. i'll find you and grovel at your knees if you dont :)!Font Color
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Title: This story rocks!!!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is the best I have read on this site! I love it and can't wait for the next posting. You already realize you have a spelling and grammar problm, and I comend you for trying to improve it by continueing to write. I do have a suggestion, if you can't get to a BETA, or simply don't want to use one, try rereading your story a day after you write it and see if you can spot your own mistakes. You'd be amazed what you can spot and how much it helps you practice. I still use that technique. Also, in the second to last entry, you mention that InuYasha had never seen Kagome naked when she was a hanyou. BUt technically he saw her naked when Kouga nearly raped her. Did I misunderstand or did everything just happen so quick that Inuyasha rreally didn't get to see anything? Just wondering. Otherwise, keep up the great work. I'm definately putting you in my favorites list. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:18 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: mauisarah On: May 02, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter and I cannot wait until wensday when the next chapter comes out. all i want is to have a long chapter that explains what seshomeru happens to know. thank you
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 02, 2005 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was pretty good...but i know you could do better. I like where the story is going but at times its a little too slow and at others its too fast. Try and keep it at one pace, if you know what I mean? Yesa, but, its pretty good. Just get the next chappie OUT! lol...okay well if you need anymore japanese words you just let me know! Okay byebye. xoxo.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
tanks for updateing. Um....I'd say more, but Geometry has melted my brain. bye!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: :P..i hate this name thing On: April 29, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look at all those reviews...nice. I"M LOVEING THIS STORY. Keep up on the up dates, i can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:44 CDT
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This is one of the best sotries i have read...Please keep going and updadte really soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: April 28, 2005 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I frigging hate cliffies!!! Update like friday!! Please!!!!!!!
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